A Start of a Journey- Chapter 2 on Pg 2 - Page 2

Omg this is so good. So heart warming

Update soon

Originally posted by: nancy56

I this was such n amazing treat to read !!!

I loved it to the core .

Bondita’s questions are amazing . It’s lovely to hear her questions and Anirudh trying to think about her in a different way .

Honestly this Saudamini track is just an attempt to make it a pure itv serial . Which is going to have misunderstanding , and never ending love triangle cum villainess along with the rest of the story .

So that when the channel gets that shitty idea of changing the plot - the makers could convert it into bullshit.

I bet this mini is gonna remain till the very end. Right now she is being used to show contrast of thinking. But I seriously doubt her role furthermore !!!

Love your work !!

It's her character description that she is here for love triangle and the way ani was begging her gonna make her feel confident that ani will never fall for anyone other than her. Now that's one great khushfehmi.

Nice update

Bondita innocent questions and acts really makes us smile.

Anirudh enjoying and patiently answering Bondita queries was cute.

Great story progress. You have me speechless with ur work. Hope the script writers of the show learns something from you. 😊😊😊😉😉😉

Originally posted by: abjeya

Chapter 2

Bondita is a person who has always been clear on what she thought. According to her Ma, she has no filter from her brain to her mouth. But what she can do about it? She has so many questions but no one to answer them. When she found out she was going to get married, she had only two requests from God. One, her husband should take care of her mother. Two, he does not get bored with her questions. She looks at the man, whose name she does not even know but she knows he is her Pati Babu. He calls someone saying “Bihari Kaka.” A man with his shoulders folded down, and a cloth on his shoulder came and bended. He said “Ji Chote Mallik.” Her Pati Babu, looks at her, kindness inherently present in her eyes and said “Ye Bihari Kaka hai. Ye Aapko ye ghar dikhaiyega.”

Anirudh, immediately felt his bride’s hands tighten around his. She looks at him, puzzlement now clear in her expression and said “Aap nahi dikhaiyenge?”. Anirudh sits down, on a bended knee coming to her level with an instinctive reassurance and said “Bihari Kaka,iss ghar ke sabse purane sadasye hai. Yeh, iss ghar ko mujhse aur mere parivar se bhi zyada ache se jaante hai aur khayal rakhte hai. Toh isliye, yeh aapko zyada achi tarah se yeh ghar ke baare me aapko batayenge.”

His bride’s smile lightens up her face as she understands and she nods her head vigorously. He feels a sense of loss accompany him, as her hand leaves his but smiles as he sees his bride walk towards Bihari Kaka and immediately reaching him bends down. Bihari Kaka jumps a step back and said “Bahu Rani, yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?”. His bride stands up and said “Aapka pair chu rahi hu. Ma kehti hai, ki ghar ke sabse bade ka humesha ashirvad lena chahiye jab ghar pravesh ho jaye. Aur sabse bade toh aap hai toh mai aapka pair chu rahi hu.” She again bends down and Bihari Kaka again takes a jump back saying No.

Anirudh felt Batuk come and stand beside him to see better on what’s going on. Somnath stands on the other side of him, curious to see what she does. His bride now has an annoyed expression on her face, seeing Bihari Kaka taking a step back always and now standing in front of a pillar. She looks around clear searching for something and then seeing the white cloth around her, smiles with an idea. Before Bihari Kaka or anyone else could react, his bride took the white cloth from her arms wrapped it around Bihari Kaka tying him to the pillar. Making a knot, she sees it is tightened enough. Bihari Kaka struggles and Somnath steps forward to help but Anirudh holds an arm to him, seeing his bride’s smile as she comes around and touches Bihari Kaka’s feet.

Bihari Kaka still struggling said“Bahu Rani, hum aapko Ashirwad dene ke layak nahi hai.” His bride’s face now crunched in confusion, she asked “Kyu nahi de sakte, aap iss ghar me sabse zyada rahe hai na?”. Bihari Kaka said “bachpan se.” His Bride said “Phir aap hume Ashirwad kyu nahi de sakte?”. Bihari Kaka, now annoyed said “kyuki hum iss ghar ke naukar hai, Mallik nahi.”

Anirudh sees that his bride is confused and she has a weird expression on. Thinking that she might feel insulted when that was not his intention, he stops as he heard her ask a question “Par Ma kehti, ki Mallik toh sirf Bhagwan hota hai. Uske hissab se, toh hum sab naukar hi toh hai. To aapke naukar hone me aur mere naukar hone me fark kya hai?”.

And for the second time, silence reigns in the house. Nor his Kaka, his Baba who had been silently observing the events, nor him, Somnath, Batuk or Bihari Kaka had any answer. His Bride’s questioning expression then turns to him, but Anirudh was speechless. How to give an answer to such an innocent question?

Batuk goes and loosens the cloth around Bihari Kaka. His bride is now distracted and smiling at him, said “Maine Ashirwad le liye. Ab me ghar dekhne jao Pati Babu?”.

Anirudh nods his head and she goes to leave with Bihari Kaka. Suddenly, remembering something Bihari Kaka looking at Anirudh with a shrewd expression said “Bahu Rani, iss ghar ki parampara hai ki naye sadasye ke naam par Bhagwan ko chedhawa dete hai. Toh aapka naam bhi toh dena hai. Toh kis naam se chedhawa dena hai?”

And for the first time, Anirudh felt that rush of happiness course through him, as he heard his bride say “Bondita.”

So, first week after marriage, and it has been melodramatic as expected. But I do sympathize with Anirudh whose world just changed overnight. Saudamani, not so much. She acts like a Drama Queen. Anyway hope you like the update. The updates will go as per the serial showing maybe, so fingers crossed for Sensible Anirudh to be back soon.

Btw read my OS (Beginning of historical journey) na .. Give me some critic and reviews na. I will be obliged to hear from such a great writer.

Sucha treat to read ☺️ wonderfully written

And her innocent questions are not only sensible but deep too!!! Update next part soon if possible 🙂

Plz update next part soon dear