A Start of a Journey- Chapter 2 on Pg 2

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A Start of a Journey

Anirudh did not know what to feel since he made the decision to marry the little girl. Happiness but is it happiness, when he sacrificed all his dreams for a stranger. But on the other hand he could not stand to see an innocent child, whose only fault is an old bridegroom, to be burned alongside the body. Looking behind, he saw her eyes closed, a smile present on her lips. He wants to wake her up, but what does he call her, he forgot? Bondu,Bondi.

What a person he is? Cannot even remember his bride’s name. Hearing someone call his name, he looks up to see the driver beckon him to go inside. He opens the door and steps outside the car. Seeing her sleep peacefully, he could not find the heart to wake her up.

Stepping inside the house, his gaze shifts to his family members. Anger was the dominant emotion reflected in all of their expressions. As he walks towards them, the one question he asked himself “Did he regret his action?”. And the answer he knew was No. He did not regret taking the step the save that girl’s life. Even if it meant sacrificing all of his dreams, his love Saudamini.

As he reaches, his Baba and his Kaka, his Baba raises his hand to slap him but Kaka holds Baba’s hand. Baba looks shocked but Kaka shakes his head. Putting the hand down, Kaka asked “Anirudh,hua kya that jise tum itni bada kadam legaye?”. Anirudh heaved a sign of relief,and said everything that happened. Everyone listens and there was a silence after he finished. Kaka heaves a sign and said “Theek hai, jo hua so hua. Bahadur,Driver se bolna gadi tayar rakhe. Uss ladki ko vahi jagah par chodna hai jahanse aayi. Aur uske Mama se bolna ke Sati parapara ko kal pura kare.”

Anirudh’s head shot up hearing this, his expression horrified. Anirudh said “Yeh app kya keh rahe Kaka?”. Kaka looks at him, with disbelief in his expression and said “Kya mai Kya keh raha hu Anirudh. Who ladki ek widowa hai. Uska apni pati ke saath jalna hi uchit hai. Tumne jo kiya so kiya Anirudh, lekin kal puja rakh kar hum tum shudhikaran bhi kar sakte hai.”

Anirudh felt that same wave of anger course through him, what he felt at that moment when he made thatdecision. He said “Bahadur, Driver se bolna ghadi park kare. Who ladki yahan se kahi nahi jayengi. Aur Kaka agar aap is Sati pratha ko maante hai, toh uss ladki ke saath mujhe bhi jhelne ka adhikar hai kyuki who meri patni hai.”

Baba’s expression became red with anger. He said “Are you mad Anirudh? Tum ek 8-9 saal ki bachi ko apni patni ka darja de rahe ho. Tum jaante bhi iska anjaam kya hoga tumhare liye.” Anirudh said “Jab aap, uss 8-9 saal ki bachi ko Sati Parampara nibhane ke layek samajhte ho, toh phir who meri patni hone ke layak kyu nahi ho sakti.”

Kaka screamed “Who ek widowa hai.”Anirudh calmly shook his head and said “Nahi, who meri patni aur is ghar ki badi bahu hai.” Kaka said “Anirudh meri baat kaan khol kar sun lo, mai uss ladki ko iss ghar me ek kadam rakhne nahi dunga.”

Before Anirudh could say anything, a tinkling sound echoes through the halls. The sound seemed similar to payals, and before Anirudh could turn and see who has come, he heard a voice said “Mera ghar pravesh nahi hoga kya?”. Turning, and showing his family members who he married, he sees his bride for the first time with clarity. His bride had already taken 5 footsteps into the house, and she looks at them curiously. But for Anirudh, he somewhere could see the fire of curiosity in the eyes, the boldness in the manner she looks at them, just curious with no traces of fear present. Impatient at no reply, his bride walks straight towards them,no signs of hesitation in her footsteps. She stops when she stand exactly at his side of him like a partner does. She looks curiously at Kaka and Baba and said “Aap dono mere Sasur toh nahi ho. Aap kon ho?”. By then, Anirudh felt a small hand slip into his and he instinctively folded around it supporting the hand.Looking down, he sees that it is his bride’s hand in his.

Kaka looks at the joined hands and his expression conveys the rising level of his blood pressure. Kaka said “Ladki,chod uska haath. Tumhe haq nahi hai uska haath pakdne ki.” Anirudh sees his bride’s expression becoming confused, her tiny brows coming together in a frown, confused on what’s happening around her. But she did not take her hand from his. She looks at Kaka, her eyes conveying her frustration as she said “Kyu chodu, Pati hai ye mere. Aur Ma kehti hai, ki Pati ka haath kabhi chodna nahi chahiye and Patni ka hi haq hai ki who Pati ka haath Pakde.” Then she looks at him, trust conveyed in her expression and searching for something in his.

Anirudh doesn’t know what he feels but he knows that he cannot let her trust break. He looks at Kaka and Baba and said “Aapne suna usne kya kaha. Patni hai yeh mere. Aur Pati hu meiska. Hum dono ko haq hai ek dusre ka haq pakdne ke liye.”

And even seeing the thunderous expressions on their face, Anirudh could not help but feel a hope for the first time, that maybe he is on the right path after all.


So, this my first time writing regarding this serial and well it is based on the precap. Depending on the responses, I might turn it into an ff but still depends on the responses. Its not going to be romantic. I am more interested in exploring the mentor-mentee relationship so the FF will be based on that. Do comment and tell me if you are interested in this type of FF.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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bro, can you write for the show? you should really look into if they're hiring.

Honestly, we need Annirudh to not be scared of his father and Uncle--be as bold he's with the world to his family (But that is a harder battle to fight)

This is great, you should definitely write more. THere's a mistake where you wrote widow--should be vidhva. (me thinks--my hindi is hardly that good)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Great work.👍🏼

Aniruddh will stand for bondita no matter what. Right now he is confused, angered but everything will be fine.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This needs to turn into a ff soon.. The update depicted anurudh's inner turmoil beautifully and despite of being so disturbed he couldn't help but feel a connection with his little bride.. Waiting for the next part

Love

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Omg cuteness overloaded

Loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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fabulous!!!👏🏻🤗 keep writing...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aswome. Jope this happen in shows. Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wonderful start

Anirudh is right now hurt as his long time dream is broken and there is no one near him to console him and handle his pain but i m sure he will definitely overcome his pain and stand for his Bondita.

Nice story and please continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 2

Bondita is a person who has always been clear on what she thought. According to her Ma, she has no filter from her brain to her mouth. But what she can do about it? She has so many questions but no one to answer them. When she found out she was going to get married, she had only two requests from God. One, her husband should take care of her mother. Two, he does not get bored with her questions. She looks at the man, whose name she does not even know but she knows he is her Pati Babu. He calls someone saying “Bihari Kaka.” A man with his shoulders folded down, and a cloth on his shoulder came and bended. He said “Ji Chote Mallik.” Her Pati Babu, looks at her, kindness inherently present in her eyes and said “Ye Bihari Kaka hai. Ye Aapko ye ghar dikhaiyega.”

Anirudh, immediately felt his bride’s hands tighten around his. She looks at him, puzzlement now clear in her expression and said “Aap nahi dikhaiyenge?”. Anirudh sits down, on a bended knee coming to her level with an instinctive reassurance and said “Bihari Kaka,iss ghar ke sabse purane sadasye hai. Yeh, iss ghar ko mujhse aur mere parivar se bhi zyada ache se jaante hai aur khayal rakhte hai. Toh isliye, yeh aapko zyada achi tarah se yeh ghar ke baare me aapko batayenge.”

His bride’s smile lightens up her face as she understands and she nods her head vigorously. He feels a sense of loss accompany him, as her hand leaves his but smiles as he sees his bride walk towards Bihari Kaka and immediately reaching him bends down. Bihari Kaka jumps a step back and said “Bahu Rani, yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?”. His bride stands up and said “Aapka pair chu rahi hu. Ma kehti hai, ki ghar ke sabse bade ka humesha ashirvad lena chahiye jab ghar pravesh ho jaye. Aur sabse bade toh aap hai toh mai aapka pair chu rahi hu.” She again bends down and Bihari Kaka again takes a jump back saying No.

Anirudh felt Batuk come and stand beside him to see better on what’s going on. Somnath stands on the other side of him, curious to see what she does. His bride now has an annoyed expression on her face, seeing Bihari Kaka taking a step back always and now standing in front of a pillar. She looks around clear searching for something and then seeing the white cloth around her, smiles with an idea. Before Bihari Kaka or anyone else could react, his bride took the white cloth from her arms wrapped it around Bihari Kaka tying him to the pillar. Making a knot, she sees it is tightened enough. Bihari Kaka struggles and Somnath steps forward to help but Anirudh holds an arm to him, seeing his bride’s smile as she comes around and touches Bihari Kaka’s feet.

Bihari Kaka still struggling said“Bahu Rani, hum aapko Ashirwad dene ke layak nahi hai.” His bride’s face now crunched in confusion, she asked “Kyu nahi de sakte, aap iss ghar me sabse zyada rahe hai na?”. Bihari Kaka said “bachpan se.” His Bride said “Phir aap hume Ashirwad kyu nahi de sakte?”. Bihari Kaka, now annoyed said “kyuki hum iss ghar ke naukar hai, Mallik nahi.”

Anirudh sees that his bride is confused and she has a weird expression on. Thinking that she might feel insulted when that was not his intention, he stops as he heard her ask a question “Par Ma kehti, ki Mallik toh sirf Bhagwan hota hai. Uske hissab se, toh hum sab naukar hi toh hai. To aapke naukar hone me aur mere naukar hone me fark kya hai?”.

And for the second time, silence reigns in the house. Nor his Kaka, his Baba who had been silently observing the events, nor him, Somnath, Batuk or Bihari Kaka had any answer. His Bride’s questioning expression then turns to him, but Anirudh was speechless. How to give an answer to such an innocent question?

Batuk goes and loosens the cloth around Bihari Kaka. His bride is now distracted and smiling at him, said “Maine Ashirwad le liye. Ab me ghar dekhne jao Pati Babu?”.

Anirudh nods his head and she goes to leave with Bihari Kaka. Suddenly, remembering something Bihari Kaka looking at Anirudh with a shrewd expression said “Bahu Rani, iss ghar ki parampara hai ki naye sadasye ke naam par Bhagwan ko chedhawa dete hai. Toh aapka naam bhi toh dena hai. Toh kis naam se chedhawa dena hai?”

And for the first time, Anirudh felt that rush of happiness course through him, as he heard his bride say “Bondita.”


So, first week after marriage, and it has been melodramatic as expected. But I do sympathize with Anirudh whose world just changed overnight. Saudamani, not so much. She acts like a Drama Queen. Anyway hope you like the update. The updates will go as per the serial showing maybe, so fingers crossed for Sensible Anirudh to be back soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I this was such n amazing treat to read !!!

I loved it to the core .

Bondita’s questions are amazing . It’s lovely to hear her questions and Anirudh trying to think about her in a different way .

Honestly this Saudamini track is just an attempt to make it a pure itv serial . Which is going to have misunderstanding , and never ending love triangle cum villainess along with the rest of the story .

So that when the channel gets that shitty idea of changing the plot - the makers could convert it into bullshit.

I bet this mini is gonna remain till the very end. Right now she is being used to show contrast of thinking. But I seriously doubt her role furthermore !!!

Love your work !!

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