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Chapter 2


We were all seated for breakfast, just then NK and Lavanya walked down, they both seemed so in love...puh-leez give me a break!

Di smiled at them and her eyes glowed with mischief. Pata nahi inki shaadi kab hogi! Maybe then she will stop sacrificing others in the name of marriage.

And so all of us got comfortable and Hari Prakash started serving breakfast.

"Khushi and Lavanya you guys had a good sleep?" she asked looking at her brand new bhabhis and gave that look to me and NK at the same time.


NK blushed while I rolled my eyes and Khushi and Lavanya just nodded.


Khushi completely ignored me. Not cool.

"waise I knew this shaadi would be fun but the thrill I hadn't imagined!'

Di said with extreme enthusiasm. Gosh.

"haina Khushi?"


There you go.


"haye….yes very exciting" she said dreadfully giving me the elevator look.

"waise Lavanya you are very lucky! Is khadoos se bach gayi…I mean you got NK…such a sweet loving boy" Khushi told Lavanya.


Oh is that so.

Lavanya looked at NK and gave him a 100 watt smile.


I mean what are these two made of?

" I will show you who's luckier tonight!" I told Khushi.

"I think that was a bit too loud" she whispered, while everyone stared at me wide eyed.

Does it look like I care?

Geez.


So what if that was loud? She is my lawfully wedded wife now, it's not a big deal!


They all looked at each other and tried to hide smiles.


Di cleared her throat.


"Anyway, we were thinking that since both of you are happily married now, where would you guys like to go on a honeymoon?" she asked with a raised eyebrow specifically asking me, more like forcing me to say something.

NK and Lavanya were having their jahan tum, jahan aap session while Khushi rolled her eyes at me and I was staring at her for no reason in particular.

"Come on batao bhi! Nahi jaana kya?...Chotey?"

"what di? Ask them" I said trying to divert her attention towards NK and Lavanya

Khushi gave me a disgusted look.

Now what?

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OHHH so he doesn't even want to go on a honeymoon! Theek hai!

Why did he marry me in the first place I wonder. This idiot of a man, a blob of dirt in the name of husband!

Got married in the most dramatic way and now this.

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After a while when everyone continued to eat their breakfast Nani spoke


"Akaash bitwa now it's your turn to find a bahuriya"


All eyes shifted to a blushing Akash. Is he blushing because he has found someone? Or does he just like to blush at everything? I mean living in a circus does that to you.


"haan I agree, now it is your turn to get married, haye mera muna Akash bitwa!"


Khushi bit back a laugh.


"whats so funny?"

"mu..munaa" she said laughing "what's Anjali? Munni or badi since you are chotey?"

I rolled my eyes when deep down I hated the idea of these pet names in the first place. Is it too hard to say our five letter names?


"its not that funny now" I whispered.


She gave me a raised eyebrow.


Throughout the entire breakfast she gave me a cold shoulder with stares every now and then.,


It was also decided that a week from now all four of us would go to a mysterious place for a honeymoon. Since we couldn't decide where to go Di planned to give us a surprise. I mean why did I even think for a second I would have a say in this.

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The entire day was such a drag, not because I had work load or anything but because I was on leave. They got me married but they wont even spare my wife a few minutes with me alone. I wanted to talk to her, clear things out but no others need more quality time with her more than I do. Don't they.

I tried to talk to her but either someone would call her or she would go and start talking to someone.

For how long will you avoid me Khushi Singh Raziada?


After dinner everyone retired to their rooms and after talking to Aman about an "important" meeting I came searching for her. Of course Aman had to contribute to the universal conspiracy against me.


She was nowhere to be found, thinking that she would probably be in our room I went upstairs.


When I entered the room she wasn't there, now where did she go?

I checked the poolside to find her sitting on the recliner, fuming at someone on the phone at the other end.


"No not the red roses! For the millionth time the white roses! If you can't do your work then please resign or I would gladly do the honors!...get it! now get to work, arrange the white flowers by tomorrow morning, one more excuse and you're out!"

Woah is she a tigress or what? And I thought I was the boss.

"who is the victim this time?" I asked, smiling at her cute angry expressions while moving towards her.

"koi kaam nahi kar sakte yeh log!" she said to herself and held her head in her hands.

"kya hua? Relax karo" I said holding her shoulders.

"andd you! Don't even talk to me" she said while getting up, but I caught her wrist.

"what??what did I do?"

What did I do?

"ohh nothing i'm just losing my mind!" she rolled her eyes and I swallowed a laugh.

"come on tell me what did I do?" I asked, really wanting to know what she was mad at, as far as I remembered I hadn't done anything.

Exactly you HADNT done anything!

I ignored the voice in my head concentrating on Khushi.

"nothing" she muttered looking at the plants.

"Ohhh is it because I didn't tell Di where we wanted to go for our honeymoon?" I asked, mischievously making her blush.

"Or is it because earlier this morning I didn't k-" she placed her hand on my mouth.

"Shh what are you saying!" She tried to stop me.


HA I knew this would work.

"I know I'm not the most romantic guy but hey this is the way I am" I said innocently.

" you have married a boring, stern businessman and it's kinda too late now" I said with a puppy face.

Worked like a charm.


" no that's not true" she said, all the anger flew out of the window.


"acha?"


"yeah you can be romantic if you want to…its just that you choose not to be" she rolled her eyes again, with mock anger.

Damn she's smarter than I gave her credit for.


I bit my lip. Was I feeling shy or actually blushing? what have I come to.

We exchanged a knowing look and I held her hand. After a while I moved my other hand to cup her cheek.


I tilted my head and gave her a kiss she would never forget.

She was clearly shocked.

___________

I wasn't expecting him to kiss me. Who knows he would have just held my hand and told me goodnight! He's Arnav Singh Raizada after all.


But he took me by surprise after that soft and tender kiss of his.


I dont know if I am actually falling for him over and over or this is just a honeymoon phase. Who knows the way we got married, anything is really possible in this house.

___________

She was blushing deep red when we broke apart.


Instantly after that she kissed me on my cheek as an appreciation for what I did.

Adorable.


"Im sorry..." I said half smiling half blushing, half falling in love with her all over again.


"im sorry too for over reacting" she said holding my hand.

"waise…you know I wasn't really mad right?" she asked.


"ofcourse…" I rolled my eyes.

"Seriously I wasn't mad I was just playing around" she winked

"acha? But I wasn't playing" I said coming closer to her, as her expression changed to confusion.

"about tonight" I whispered and her expression had changed back to that of the newly wed blushing bride.

Ah I am loving it.


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An early update!

Thank you to everyone who read, liked and commented :)

I hope you like this chapter.


I don't know if its just me or this forum has become very quiet? Maybe thats what happens when you came after 7 long years lol.

Edited by -Grace- - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Anjali picked the destination for the honeymoon? Thats just pathetic. Why couldn't Arnav say anything?

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Arnav and Khushi were so self-absorbed with their silent or not-so silent conversation that they totally missed the chance on picking out a honeymoon destination😒. Or should I say it is Anjali's freaky attitude of everything concerning her Chothe that she considered her birth role to also plan the honeymoon. I just hope it just ends here - 😉

The newly weds made it up at at the end of day - woot woot

P.S. You guessed it right - there's very little activity in IF which has dwindled over the years. Few unhealthy stunts from IF readers drove away some great writers who have resorted to private blogs.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you all, I am truly humbled at the response.


Chapter 3 is in the works, will try to update by Tuesday :)

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Chapter 3


I woke up as the morning rays hit my face only to find an empty room.


Where did she go?


I got up and walked towards the poolside. She wasn't there either.


Just then the bathroom door opened and she stepped outside in a turquoise saree. It was pinned neatly over her shoulder.


She flicked her hair back and forth drying them with the towel.


It was like everything had suddenly stopped.


She turned around and looked at me with a mischievous smile.


Suraj Hua Maddham, Chaand Jalne Laga

Aasmaan Yeh Haai Kyoon Pighalne Laga...


I walked towards her in slow and measured steps.


Main Thehra Raha, Zameen Chalne Lagi

Dhadka Yeh Dil, Saans Thamne Lagi


I stopped just an inch close to her.


Oh, Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai

Sajna, Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai


Throwing the towel on the bed she pulled me grabbing the neck of my shirt.


What the-


Main Thehra Raha, Zameen Chalne Lagi

La La La, La La La, La La La

Dhadka Yeh Dil, Saans Thamne Lagi


She kissed me and ran away laughing.

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I kissed him knowing fully well what it did to him.


That look on his face was priceless.


I had to run away because what fun would it be if I hadn't.


“Khushi!”


He called but I paid no heed.


Arnav Singh Raizada catch me if you can.

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She left like a wind and I froze smiling.


Sajnaaaaa

Kya yeh mera pehla pehla pyar hai


I turned around to see a singing reflection in the mirror.


What the-


What? Dont look at me


Before I could open my mouth to say anything -


You are the one in love, the great Ay Ass Are


He said in a mocking tone.


I narrowed my eyes at him.


And you are clearly losing.


“Excuse me?”


Hm hm hm hm hm


He hummed the song and vanished before I could say anything else. Like this circus wasn’t enough, my own existence is out there to get me now.


Di didn’t let me go to work and clearly information was being passed between her and Aman.


Sometimes I wonder why do I pay him to turn everything against me. But then with all the chaos in my life and the recovery time it was probably best I didnt go to work.


We all know what would happen had I showed up with a distracted mind.


I went downstairs to complete what Khushi had left midway, but ofcourse when did things ever go to plan in this house.


What the-


Aman? Here? Why?


I didnt call him.


“Aman!” Khushi exclaimed and ran towards the door where HP stood holding the door for him.


“Hi Khushi...bhabhi?” Aman asked with a raised eyebrow.


I raised my own at that encounter.


Of Course she’s your bhabhi.


“Dont be silly, do I look like a bhabhi to you” Khushi’s eyes popped as she gestured with her hands.


“Actually right now you do, but I wont call you that!” Aman raised his hands in defense before Khushi gave him a death glare.


Both started laughing and started walking towards the living room.


Wow. The nerve of this man.


“Arey Aman!”


There comes Di.

Aman nahi hogaya koi minister hogaya jaise.


They were all seating and clearly hadnt noticed me.


“Aman”


I finally spoke.


“What brings you here?” I had to ask.


“Kya matlab, woh aise hi nahi aasakta kya”


Di chimed in.


I decided to roll my eyes instead of wasting any more words.


“Haan aise hi, Di aur Khushi se milne” he smiled at her.


Urgh.


“Khushi mujhe tumse kuch baat karni please zara kitchen mein aao”


Di and Aman exchanged looks.


“Relax” I told them before I grabbed Khushi’s hand and took her.


“Kya kar-”


She retorted.


“Ssshh”


How my fuming brain had suddenly calmed I hadnt realized.


“Aman kya sochta hoga...this is rude”


“Excuse me?”


Umm??


“Okay what is it” she rolled her eyes and folded her arms.


“First of all, you have to stop giving him so much importance”


I moved closer.


“Secondly, are you forgetting you have a husband?”


I placed my arm on the wall behind her.

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I love this jealous Arnav.


“Acha? Which husband? The one who doesnt want to go on a honeymoon?”


I had to bite my lip from bursting into laughter.


“You really want to go dont you” he said.


Ofcourse. Like every normal girl I do too. But how would he understand. When were things ever normal in this lunatic’s life.


“Yeah but my husband isnt interested...maybe i can take someone else”

Ha.

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Of Course she is doing it on purpose.


We can play this game all day.


“My wife doesn’t care about me either, so maybe I can come with you”


I smiled.


“Tsk tsk tsk”


Clearly Khushi wasn’t expecting that. But good try at hiding it.


Score.


“I should go” she looked where Aman and DI happily chatted.


“Not until you finish what you started” I leaned in, placing the other arm on her waist.


“What? What did I start?”


She is such a tease.


I leaned closer, our breaths were mingling and heartbeats racing.


I brushed my nose against her. She turned red and closed her eyes.


I kissed her tenderly, making sure it was soft and gentle.

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“I love you”


He spoke in a whisper against my lips.


I just had to kiss him back.


“Me too” I winked and ran.


I couldnt help but smile imagining a frozen Arnav behind the kitchen counter.


Who would have thought Arnav Singh Raizada could feel butterflies in his stomach.

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Hello everyone!

First of all, apologies for a very later update. Thank you to all the silent readers and those who take the time and effort to comment. Thank you very much.


Secondly, I see how quiet the forum is generally now, and me returning after so many years doesn't help either. Usually I would discontinue something when it is not received well because there is no motivation to write. But I can't take the burden of another incomplete story (that too for the second time) so I am going to finish this no matter what.


I also understand this is not the kind of content most people want to read here and that is okay.

Some clarifications about the story and writing style: I would not say this is my best work, however this 100 percent experimental, I have never written anything like this before.


Some of you might find certain things absolutely insane and ridiculous and that is okay. Characterization is exaggerated on purpose as it is from Arnav's pov mostly and he tends to feel things deeply. This is just my take on his character in a comical way.


Again, thank you to all of you. Please mention in the comments if you would like to receive PMs for updates.



Cheers!

Edited by -Grace- - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Tell him Khushi. Arnav should have spoken up and planned his own honeymoon.

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Loved the update . Waiting to see their honeymoon phase.

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