Maa(si): A Kunal-Parul SS | Ch-3 updated on pg-4 - Page 4

I really wish Kuhu had behaved like this with maasi, and the fact that you have her thinking on her own. Nice update aqua.

Originally posted by: journalgirl321

I really like how you've been keeping the characterization intact, because it makes this story so much easier to "see" in my head, if you know what I mean. I really liked that you included Kuhu's inner dialogue, and how she's fighting with herself internally about what Jasmeet said. I like how in your version though, Jasmeet's voice in her head didn't get the best of her. I just hope it stays that way!

And the cliffhanger you ended it on! "Kunal! #Horror!"

Maybe Kunal will ask Kuhu if he did the right thing, and she will have a word or two of advice for him? It would be nice to see Kunal confiding in Kuhu for a change, instead of asking literally everyone but her.

Please update this when you can! I love this story and how nicely you've built it up :)

Thanks Meera!!

The characterization is intact because it's hard for me to break out of the mould and imagine something different, but I am glad that in this case, my weakness is my strength😆

I think she fights internally in the show as well but as Sam had mentioned once on the AT, Meenu is not giving her enough time to do that. She has put her in this amalgamation of the Maheshwari/Rajvansh house dynamics and with the constant reminder she gives about her being Parul's DIL, she is unable to grasp at what is happening around her. In this case, I just gave her the time and again, my overthinking personality.

I loved ending on the #horror. I was so happy after writing it and so proud of myself.

Thanks for the suggestion! I'll keep my thoughts a mystery till the next chapter.

Originally posted by: angelfire78

I really wish Kuhu had behaved like this with maasi, and the fact that you have her thinking on her own. Nice update aqua.

Thank you, Daya!!

She definitely would if only she could figure out what Meenu was doing. I gave a bigger explanation of this point to Meera's reply. Maybe you'll find it interesting.

pihu, I dont have much to say since meera has already covered all

still, I loved the chapter, & I was glad that you finally updated, it was a pleasant surprise amidst the other ongoing discussions(which have turned into fanwars) on this forum🤪

I love that atleast here in this alternate universe we get more insights into kuhu's feelings & her monologues unlike the show

please do update the next chapter soon, the cliffhanger has made me so much more curious😳

Originally posted by: peacenfun

pihu, I dont have much to say since meera has already covered all

still, I loved the chapter, & I was glad that you finally updated, it was a pleasant surprise amidst the other ongoing discussions(which have turned into fanwars) on this forum🤪

I love that atleast here in this alternate universe we get more insights into kuhu's feelings & her monologues unlike the show

please do update the next chapter soon, the cliffhanger has made me so much more curious😳

Thanks Peace!!

That was my bad! Iss baar bina double-triple check kiye post daal diya. I absolutely hate being stuck in fanwars but I am so glad I have something else on this forum to fall back on. In the AU, I can only give you monologues because Kaveri ke expressions ka bhandaar nahi hai mere paas.

I'll try to write the next chapter soon but I make no promises! Kyunki pehle kiye the aur fir baad me bohot guilty feel hua tha.