MG update part 4 on page 10- 21 july - Page 6

part 3

In train a girl around age of 25 seat with closed eyes she so lost in thought she don't know what happening around her,she lost in past how her life turn hell from heaven her finger rested on her manglasutra ,red sindoor rested in her forehead showing sine of her marriage status .

its three day journey of train but she hardly talk few word with co passenger she become a puzzle for all passenger....he also objering her from last three day ,he going to is work place and first glimpse of her catch his attention ....not that way but as puzzle way her smile not reaching to her eyes that sadness of her eyes making him disturbed . aisa hota hai na kuch cehero pe sadness acha nahi lagata hai ,her face is one of them .He so much want to ask reason but he have to respect her privacy . they are stranger so its out of questions that he approach to her and ask about her sadness.

his destination is after two station so he start to arrange his luggage .....just than he saw that girl side women call that girl and say something that girl nodded and took her one small and one big bag with her ,she is real puzzal he is boy fhir bhi he have four bag and she is girl fhir bhi two bags only ...

both stand near door .....still she not once look to him her eyes gazing outside ...waiting for platform .....just than train reach near platform and they have to go ahead .

she pull her bag and start to walk to exit direction ..he took deep breath and start to walk he called collie for his bag ..he come out and waiting for his vehicle which must be send from his workplace ...just than he saw her agian taking cab ..

just than his vehicle also arived and he have to attend that ....

driver call him gm sir ..hope your journey went well ...he nodded and take seat in Jeep.

its more one hour journey to his work place . he ask some questions to driver general information about place his jeep passing by road when there is it he saw that puzzle girl standing there near the roan ....her cab is standing there and driver looking something in it may be her cab broke down . he ask driver to stop their jeep near that cab.

drive lesion him and slow down the jeep and stand near cab and ask cab driver what the problem .

cab driver say that his car broke down and he called for engineer but it take almost 3/4 hour

jeep driver ask him where that lady want to go and good luck is she want to go to same area ..jeep driver come back and talk with him.

he come down and talk with cab driver than approached to mystery girl ...

he politely say hello mam myself Aditya Rana Singh my driver talk with cab driver its take more than 4/ 5 hour for cab if you are comfortable u can come with me we both have same destination ...

he ask her with full manner and politely ....

she first get panic first cab brake down than some unknown person approaching her ....but with his approached and talk she get that he is not danger .

she nodded and driver took her bag and put inside the jeep she took place back side and there journey get start she closed her eyes imm after jeep get start .....

aditya feel so odd with her behavior but he ignore it .

after half hour they reach to tier destination ...and aditya and she come out she say thanks for help ...

aditya its my duty mam .....he give his hand for handshake nice to meet u mam ...geet thought for while but its look rude if she not do handshake ...she shake his hand and same time her leg get slip and she going to fall down ...but aditya acted imm and hold her but he have to hold her with her waist ...

both trying to stand proepry when they hear one hard tone .....

what the hell happening hear its not any collage ground its a army camp and u have to decorate and save its diginty ...

she feel like land escape from her feet both trun to that person ...

aditya imm remove his hand and salute his officer ...aditya rana singh reporting sir ....

that person angry eyes glued on that girl only ....

ok so MR and mrs sing hear but its request try to behave properly around working place ...with that he turn to his heel and went from there like any storm.

aiditya mummer what the hell is this MR. and mrs just than click to him his officer misunderstand them ...

he turn to that girl ....turn shock when found that girl shading silent tear.......

Read part 2 and 3 mommy

Maan is in army and seems like he is an expert in handling though situations...he rescued everyone!!

Awww...him taking to his love was beautiful..but but she is only in photo?

And anniversary??are they married too??

Was he forced to choose between army and his love🥺

Feeling bad for him!!

And is the girl Geet?Seems she is also facing bad times in her life.she left her family..

Adi helped Geet...

Both are in army camp😲did Geet come here in search of maan??

Oh no..the officer thought that they are married😳

Loved it!!

Dil koi hai teri arzoo

Judaai

Maahiya Ve

I am suggesting titles from the songs I'm hearing ri8 now mommy🤣

Aapko kaise title chahiye...yeh saddy saddy story hai kya??

choti devil suder ja

no its not roandu story

thanks for updating!

Part 3

Intriguing update, well written.

Was that girl Geet?

at least Aditya helped her.

so there is a mu as the officer thinks Adi and Geet are married

update soon

Mahi... update Part 4 please 😊

Hey Mahi... can you update>>>>

Part 4

adi once look back to girl found she is crying what the hell happening i yet to took by job i am just reach here and i get WELCOME like that why he is scolding me and she like that he himself misunderstand us and upon that he scold us like anything and why this girl is here ...in first place itself and why she is not reacted properly , she have to give ans to him and clerifly the situation but she looking like shock .

Adi saw her she one look to him and next moment before he ask anything she start to walk opposite site its women army base part ….

Adi mummer may be she have relative there he took deep breath and march to office side to further process ….

Adi got room number 5 ……he settle there he have to attend morning duty so now he is off he done some exercised and reading after that he went to canteen for dinner there he found That officer standing all alone with that cold stone look ….adi thought for while did he ever laugh to chodo he ever smile in his whole life …

Adi finish his dinner and after small walk he retired to his room he have to sleep early eles his first day of duty going to be start with punishment and he don’t want that situation ….he fix the alarm of 4 o clock .

Early morning he went to pared ground at 4.50 sharp ….there are some is arrival and many to come ….there that cold face standing on small stage …..

In 10 min all gather in ground ……. All start with pray and pledge (Its my imagination ) next that cold face start talk …

Visharm Jawan before we start our daily shadule we have two more Jawan who is joint us from today ….so new comer I am Caption MAAN SINGH KHURANA ….and this batalian XYZ so newcome please come hear and introduce yourself .

Adi who is big shock his eyes turn big he is font of his own ideal whom he got yesterday scolding ….

Adi somehow control his emotions and went there and introduce himself ……his eyes admired MAAN ….

Adi come down and a husshhh tone spread in team …maan start to get angry but froze when she come there in wardi ( ) adi also get shock he mummer mrs singh she is army officer ….

Maan come out from his shock state and run his hard gaze on team ..and all tem get unsaid massage ..

With confidence she some on stage and intro herslf ….myself Mrs. Geet M. Singh …..ect ect …..she introduce herself than went to stand on her place .

Maanonce look to her than adi ….Adi mummer still he have same MU what shall I do I am not that luck that I got such talented girl as wife ….

Next moment exercised get start and all are good in including adi and geet ….all get dismiss for shower and BF on 7 o clock ….maan eyes fallowing geet again and again .. his blood boil when he found adi run to geet side and say something in response geet give him beautiful smile that so innocent and beautiful smile. Which make a skip the heart beat of his heart alwyes now also she have same impact he feel so hurt from yesterday till yesterday he have little hope in his heart that may be he have little chance to get his geet …but yesterday all his hopes dream get crush like anything .

His cell phone beep and he come out from his thoughts a coldness appear in his eyes …..and he went to his room side ……

He entered in his room and its all mess ….the last evening event cross from his mind ….Last night he trun from them and almost dash to his room he feel like someone stab his heart with big knife and he even cannot cried he feel someone ripped him in two pieces he lost today all his hopes for his geet for his love ,she move on and married to other man. He punch really hard the wall front of him…and his finger get injured with force of his action . but pain of injury not reaching to his brain and mind he feel like he lost all ability of feeling ,pain ,emotions dreams with her he lost every emotions of his heart as well as his life and soul.

H estart his music player and He went to shower with dress itself he start the cold shower in full speed and cried in high peach ……his cried his agony get hide under sound of music and water of shower hot tear make its way from his closed eyes and soft mummer come out why geet why …why

His leg give up from holding his weight and he sunk down on washroom floor its too much to cop uphe is hell and away from her from last many year but a hopeis always there that her family accept his with his army service or his geet search any way to come to him ….yup she come she come to him but snatch away from everything from ..and its last kneel in hisinjured heart . that sight that other man holding and touching his geet its its burn him alive ….today he lost last part of softness trust ,love and innocence from his heart and mind now in other word he become a Devil of iron ……a trace of innocents is wiped from his life very cruel way …and now there is no come back to be Human .

He lost last battle of his love his wait is finish but like this which finish him as MAAN forever …..

Oh No!!A Big MU!

Maan thought that his Geet moved on 😲Buddhu Singh Khurana!!

Ek baar baath toh kar saktha tha na..par nahi..apne mann k maalik...fully misunderstood and now bearing the pain 😒

She said Mrs.Geet M.Singh and Maan u saw her with Adi and where does this M fit in Adi's name

Can I just drag this buddhu Maan and make him talk with Geet Mommy??😆

When will their MU clear?!!!

Loved the update mommy!!⭐️

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