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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sweet and Cute Teaser


will be waiting to read the full chapter

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mahi are you going to update this too?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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In wait for you to continue please

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mahi, requesting for an update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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the teaser was posted in May!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello Mahi.... update when time permits you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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nice teaser, eagerly waiting for update

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Lovely teasers, waiting

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Posted: 5 years ago
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part one at last .....👍🏼




Another painful cry fill in cold atmosphere ….. world ka jaanat mananewale place main ye badnuma daag phichale kahi salo se laga hua that jab ye vadiya ki sannate ko kisi innocent ya fhir kisi guneghar ki cheekh chir deati …pheale to ajubaju wale log jo ye sunte the unki ruha (soul) tak kap utati thi ….but ab to jaise bharf jam jati hai logo ke dil main jam chuke hai koi farak nahi padta kisi ke painful cry ..ye chikhe sunkar bhi unsuni kar di jati hai.

Inthis fearful silence only sound is coming of shoes shoes of officer and cry of that soul who crying for help for life but don’t know that soul have life in destiny or not .

Sir please we need to took action wo jo bhi hai mar jaayega …one Jr. solder pleaded to his officer but officer one gaze and he lost the courage to ask why they not taking any action. Because officer is commando jo baat kam aur goli jada chalata hai …he have such history that no one have guts to ask why?

That person waiting to this cry get stop so opposite think that we are still waiting not trying to take any action he now habitual of such cry ..bas he want only one fair chance to save that person ..when he first come in this place he reacted same way like that junior reacted but experience make him clam …and teach him to took right action on right moment.

The cry start to sub stain and he took deep breath in few second he give command in sine language …and in next few second that all solder entered in house area thru compound wall all fallowing his path all spread around the house without making any noise. ….

He with two more commando follow the path of noise ….they hear tap of shoes and they almost stand near wall side without taking any breath..foot step start to come near by them and when He guess that man is very closed to him he took action and his knife finish the work .he don’t give chance to that soul for even single breath .

They start to move more inside and there they so two more men standing in front one closed door where that crying voice coming….He pointed to other man who stand left side and he himself approachedto one who stand right side. In next few second without any noise both men laying on floor …he got key from his packet next things went easy for them they make unconscious to that lady and come out from that house without any noise ..its looking like nothing happen there in that place.

Ajunior almost gap to Him with open mouth ..when he rescue that women just like that other man whisper in that junior ear closed your mouth eles one bullet search your mouth definitely…

All come back to their base handover that women to medical team and after submitting report to superior they get dismiss …

He come to his room directly went to shower he need badly from evening he is out for this rescue operation. Last 6 hour its so excusion for body as well as mind …aise operation ke choti si galati bhi kisi ke Jaan par ban sakati hai .

He took hot shower and come out from bathroom and went to his bedroom he entered it and its feel like he come back in his own world jo sirf uska hai .

There she is smiling and twinkle on eyes …

What kya ….i have my towel on so don’t give me that not so decent smile today is not your luck day to fulfill your Fantasy He say with smirk …and he went to coyest where she cannot able to saw him…he know she definitely going to cribs her cheeks, top of her small nose going to be red in anger …but NO big no for her fantasy

Koi na main mana lunga meri sharani ko na na Jungali billi ko hamesha katne ka moka dhunati rehati hai …he chuckle on his own thought ..

He again come out and say no don’t make that face I am not going to fall for it tum hamesha fasati ho ..its not right time yaar we need to be wait ….

Okok chalo bolo what u want tomorrow ha ah don’t be shock I remember our birthday + anniversary …bolo what u want jaldi jaldi bolo I cannot garnted abhi thoda time mila hai to main imm kuch order kar deta hu …..he roll his eyes and mummer ya ya u hate online shoping but its time saving ….chalo bolo …..dress or Jweallery ya fhir both ….

He wait for while than say chalo chodo I will decide gift for u and me also ….

Don’t taunt me yes I took decision for us always …his voice turn heavy I am sorry some time na na every time I took u as granted kabhi pucha nahi what u want …..because of that today we are we are a drop of tear fall from his eyes …

But unhone bhi muje samja nahi na apne past ke liye humara ajj aur kal kharab kar diya na they destroy our life our love hai na …..some more tear fall from his big eyes ….

He hug that photo frame tightily like she is real standing in front of him…

Some word start bang on his head and heart army ya fhir tumhara pyaar , army ya fhir tumhara pyaar bolo bolo what u want your dream ,your career ya fhir wo tumhara paayr …

Agar tum army chunte ho to tumhara aur uska sath khatam u don’t have single chance to come back to her so decision is your decision is yours He once look to that big almond eyes . she have smile on herface and they start drag her away from him away from his life away from his soul ….

He cried ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………..

Edited by Mahimaan - 5 years ago

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