MiRudhIta FS: Testimony [Part 2 Pg 5] - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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You won't be disappointed baba, promise 😎

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

You won't be disappointed baba, promise 😎


yea I trust you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

Thank you lalz!

Yeah, sab kismat ka khel hai😎

Glad you liked her!

Will do. :)

True kismat plays a major role 😉

I loved it 👍🏼

Yeh kya MiRudhita??? So mini going to be there in full fledged ?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

-X-


Anirudh flashed the chaumukhi diya at her balcony. Amidst all the tension and nervousness, a sweet smiled adorned his face, as he reminisced the days that were. Alas! Only if they could come back.

"Mini," he whispered softly.

"Saudamini" he uttered a little loudly, when his former call didn't receive any response.

She lighted a candle in her room, with the matchstick's sizzle echoing into the silent night.

Anirudh lowered his eyes as she stood up to emerge from behind the curtains.

Those same anklets resounded once again, but couldn't soothe his aching heart anymore.

But unlike the olden days, only her shadow came forth to meet his eyes, with her glowing face remaining concealed in the drapes.

He was startled by this gesture of hers.


"Ji, Vakeel Babu" said she, rather coldly. There was no shiver or warmth, no complains or anger.

The words pierced his heart all over again. Vakeel Babu?


"Woh... usko sati karne par majboor kar rahe the." He said, out of guilt.

"Par tumhaari kya majboori thi Aniruddh? Kya kisi aur ka khayal nahi aaya?"

"Uski jaan chali jaati Mini!"

"Toh meri bhi kahan bachi hai!" She yelled back. "Kya aapko ek baar bhi mera khayal nahi aaya? Ki main iske baad jeeyungi kaise?"

"Ek taraf pyaar hai aur doosri taraf zimmedaar Mini, main kya karun?"

"Chunav toh tumne pehle hi kar liya hai Aniruddh," she smiled weakly.

Wiping her tears, she regained the composure that was essential for an upper class maiden to demonstrate, at all times.

She removed her anklets and kept them on the window sill.


"Mujhe maaf kardo Mini..." he mumbled weakly, with tears in his eyes.

"Par main tumhein Vachan..."

"Sambhalkar Vakeel Babu. Aapne mere hisse ke Vachan abhi abhi kisi aur ko de diye hain. Pehle unka toh maan rakh lijiye."

Stunned, he couldn't speak anymore.


After a few moments of silence, she blew off the lamp and her shadow too, vanished away, probably forever, into the darkness, as Aniruddh watched on helplessly.


-X-


Saudamini's character intrigued me so much, that I was bound to write this! Don't worry, there will obviously be Bondita and their story as well, but you'll sure get to see Mini in a different light!

Do tell me if y'all like this setting.


Cheers,

Mahi.


hmmmm...different plot👏different views...I like it...👍🏼 please continue..eagerly waiting for our Boni's part.. thank you 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

True kismat plays a major role 😉

I loved it 👍🏼

Yeh kya MiRudhita??? So mini going to be there in full fledged ?

Yep, she's gonna be there full fledged 😎

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: AniRoyChowdhury


hmmmm...different plot👏different views...I like it...👍🏼 please continue..eagerly waiting for our Boni's part.. thank you 😊

Thank you! Yeah she'll be there the next time :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Omg!!! I'm so excited🥳




This is so do so good Mahi. I really wished Mini was shown someone like this so that it's not just another vamp behind ML but alas!



Anyway, you are fulfilling my wish and I couldn't ask for more. It is so good. Can't wait. Update soon. 🥺

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Loved the teaser! so intriguing! Mini is so interesting here!!!😍😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Omg!!! I'm so excited🥳




This is so do so good Mahi. I really wished Mini was shown someone like this so that it's not just another vamp behind ML but alas!



Anyway, you are fulfilling my wish and I couldn't ask for more. It is so good. Can't wait. Update soon. 🥺

OCTOOOO!

🤗🤗

Can't tell you how happy I am to see you!🤪

THANK YOUUUUUU.❤️

Yes I will!😳

Love you ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishtiNew

Loved the teaser! so intriguing! Mini is so interesting here!!!😍😍😍

Thank you Mishtuuu🤗

Yeah she is!😎

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