MiRudhIta FS: Testimony [Part 2 Pg 5]

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Anirudh flashed the chaumukhi diya at her balcony. Amidst all the tension and nervousness, a sweet smiled adorned his face, as he reminisced the days that were. Alas! Only if they could come back.

"Mini," he whispered softly.

"Saudamini" he uttered a little loudly, when his former call didn't receive any response.

She lighted a candle in her room, with the matchstick's sizzle echoing into the silent night.

Anirudh lowered his eyes as she stood up to emerge from behind the curtains.

Those same anklets resounded once again, but couldn't soothe his aching heart anymore.

But unlike the olden days, only her shadow came forth to meet his eyes, with her glowing face remaining concealed in the drapes.

He was startled by this gesture of hers.


"Ji, Vakeel Babu" said she, rather coldly. There was no shiver or warmth, no complains or anger.

The words pierced his heart all over again. Vakeel Babu?


"Woh... usko sati karne par majboor kar rahe the." He said, out of guilt.

"Par tumhaari kya majboori thi Aniruddh? Kya kisi aur ka khayal nahi aaya?"

"Uski jaan chali jaati Mini!"

"Toh meri bhi kahan bachi hai!" She yelled back. "Kya aapko ek baar bhi mera khayal nahi aaya? Ki main iske baad jeeyungi kaise?"

"Ek taraf pyaar hai aur doosri taraf zimmedaar Mini, main kya karun?"

"Chunav toh tumne pehle hi kar liya hai Aniruddh," she smiled weakly.

Wiping her tears, she regained the composure that was essential for an upper class maiden to demonstrate, at all times.

She removed her anklets and kept them on the window sill.


"Mujhe maaf kardo Mini..." he mumbled weakly, with tears in his eyes.

"Par main tumhein Vachan..."

"Sambhalkar Vakeel Babu. Aapne mere hisse ke Vachan abhi abhi kisi aur ko de diye hain. Pehle unka toh maan rakh lijiye."

Stunned, he couldn't speak anymore.


After a few moments of silence, she blew off the lamp and her shadow too, vanished away, probably forever, into the darkness, as Aniruddh watched on helplessly.


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Saudamini's character intrigued me so much, that I was bound to write this! Don't worry, there will obviously be Bondita and their story as well, but you'll sure get to see Mini in a different light!

Do tell me if y'all like this setting.


Cheers,

Mahi.


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Woww mahi 😊 Teaser is splendid👍🏼 😎

Bechara Ani lost his love for humanity 😵

But It's destiny and everything happens for good the way it is

Liked your shade of Mini, She is hurt and composed and just love her for stopping Ani from giving any promise 😊

Excited to read more 😳

Can't wait update soon mahi

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Something unique

Mini is that one person who could have been given layers but then CVs opted the path of making her the typical vamp

Sounds interesting Mahi

Do continue

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Its superb loved the teaser😃

Liked Mini here seems to be an interesting character

Please continue soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Woww mahi 😊 Teaser is splendid👍🏼 😎

Bechara Ani lost his love for humanity 😵

But It's destiny and everything happens for good the way it is

Liked your shade of Mini, She is hurt and composed and just love her for stopping Ani from giving any promise 😊

Excited to read more 😳

Can't wait update soon mahi

Thank you lalz!

Yeah, sab kismat ka khel hai😎

Glad you liked her!

Will do. :)

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Originally posted by: Alexia_Wilson

Something unique

Mini is that one person who could have been given layers but then CVs opted the path of making her the typical vamp

Sounds interesting Mahi

Do continue

Exactly! She was so so good in the initial episodes until she became the main tumhe paakar rahoongi typical vamp.😵

There was so much potential to explore her in so many shades!

I will! :)

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Originally posted by: bhshre95

Its superb loved the teaser😃

Liked Mini here seems to be an interesting character

Please continue soon...

Thank you! 😳

Yep, she is.😛

Yeahh!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hmmm Mini seems interesting!😳


So is this a Rudhita TS or Animini one? (just asking)😆

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Originally posted by: Sujz

Hmmm Mini seems interesting!😳


So is this a Rudhita TS or Animini one? (just asking)😆

All 3 infact. Do we have a name for the trio?😆

But to be safe, Rudhita bola hai cause journey toh inki hai

Edited: looks better now, perhaps 😛

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Originally posted by: Mannmohanaa

All 3 infact. Do we have a name for the trio?😆

But to be safe, Rudhita bola hai cause journey toh inki hai

Edited: looks better now, perhaps 😛


Okayyy

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