Originally posted by: sm1308
God!!!! Thats such an awesome response..I cant stop reading it..Thankyou so very very much..n yup Jo n Jalal are gonna bump into eachother in the vry next chapter.
(@underline 👍🏼 it was indeed a bump 😆 of lead in next chapter making us desire for more ).
n yeah, believe me I did think that Jo should take this as an opportunity to make Jalal curious for her, but I want her to be equally nervous at the idea of seeing jalal...Jus kz she cant remember anything,,, I wanted her to be equal in terms of being excited to see Jalal,
( like you mentioned previously in the reply of my comment now here to,😳 you want Jo feel nervous and all you did wrote exact the same way and i so liked to read that part it was truly thrilling and relatable 👏).
and find out the truth about what he means to her, being this immemorable, and at the same time heck afraid that what if she did something that made jalal go away..and if second is the case how awkward the situation would be for her...to be the doer and yet be totally clueless..
(This para explain jo side very well 👍🏼 and it's very relatable to 😳 which make it more appealing you know what you're really good at writting inner emotion of Charachter and you got art to wrote if so simply to make me relate to them without making me feel it's OTT 😆).
So, here our Jo wants to get the answers, while in reality it should be Jalal, she should be answering to..
(True 😆, god knows and you how the story gonna go on what will they do once they're together under shame shed having enough space to talk about their own issue ).
Okay, so I do plan on introducing Ruqs soon, but I'm not so sure about including Maham or any other evily villian into the story, but god they are so important in creating havocs or treachery..n I'm so debating it 😛
(Oh Ruk is ok but no Maham type charachter 😊 cause the lesser charachter will be in the story the more you will able to get idea about Jo Ja 😊 ).
n yes, I'll keep Mirza goofy as hell and Abdul totally sincere, and Jo is gonna be the only trigger for Jalal's anger or jealousy, otherwise he is gonna be cool n calm as a cucumber..n trust me, I'll make sure howsoever hard he tries to avoid her, or to be angry with her, he is gonna fail miserably..Who on Earth has a heart to hate our chirpy Jo..But yeah, he will be giving some tough times to Jo too..She owes that to him, even if it wasnt her fault..
(You☺️ unknowingly express all my expectations from this story by assurance how you're going to continue the shape of Charachter 😊 thank you 🤗 so my list of favourite Adi , Mirza ,Abdul wired we have only only person from Jo side 😆 I don't include shivani yet 😊 need to see more to really like her 😆 and ofcourse JO JA you're so right even not being at fault she owes explaination to him, perhaps deserve to endure his rudeness not only as friend as lover to top of it he's her boss 🤣 ).
I so I havent started writing anything..But I'll post something by next week, for sure..
Thankyou so much again for this wonderful text..Extremely obliged and glad that you liked the part..
(You wrote very nicely😳 it's hard not to like more over stories on Akdha☺️ are hard for me to resist 😆 take your time no need to rush 😊
Stay safe
thanks again 😊
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