Antara/MJ OS-The first heartbreak (14+)

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Originally posted by: Fairooz
interesting😊

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#12

Well written Shibani 👏 Antara’s tumultuous mind was captured really well and it’s easy to imagine such a scene play out. Amazing one yet again 👏

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Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
Well written Shibani 👏 Antara’s tumultuous mind was captured really well and it’s easy to imagine such a scene play out. Amazing one yet again 👏

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Posted: 5 years ago

#14

It's really nice. Antara's happiness & then her inner turmoil of being cheated was portrayed beautifully.

Keep exploring your writing.

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Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart
It's really nice. Antara's happiness & then her inner turmoil of being cheated was portrayed beautifully.
Keep exploring your writing.

Thanks🤗