Antara/MJ OS-The first heartbreak (14+) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Fairooz

interesting😊

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Well written Shibani 👏 Antara’s tumultuous mind was captured really well and it’s easy to imagine such a scene play out. Amazing one yet again 👏

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Well written Shibani 👏 Antara’s tumultuous mind was captured really well and it’s easy to imagine such a scene play out. Amazing one yet again 👏

Thanks😳

It's really nice. Antara's happiness & then her inner turmoil of being cheated was portrayed beautifully.

Keep exploring your writing.

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

It's really nice. Antara's happiness & then her inner turmoil of being cheated was portrayed beautifully.

Keep exploring your writing.

Thanks🤗

Originally posted by: tournesol

Beautifully written. 👏 You portrayed their emotions really well. I wish Antara had the guts to open the door also. 💔

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