MayRa (Jenny/Shivin) DT #22 "7 Vows of Destructive Love" - Page 17

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viddhi01

This is splendid Tiara 👏

I loved the khoon bhari holi 😈 But if you don't mind, it would be even more better if some statements would been more. It was a little confusing in last but a very good start overall.

Looking forward for more


Thank you Viddhi 🤗

Like which places?... I'll work on it make it longer as Pranu suggested.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viddhi01

Guyss ye Ananya ka surname kya hai ? 😆 Maine usse aivaey-hi Mehra bana diya 🤪

Are you writing Anu's story ?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

You , @tiaraa and @shibani should write more FFs on MayRa...I m sure those will be 100 times better than the writers of Beyhadh 2😆

Okay now I am blushing. 😆

I just melt into a puddle reading Tia's stories. ☺️

Shibz is good in both serious and humor. 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

"Let me go! Let me go you b*st**d!" Maya shouted on the top of her lungs.

MJ dragged Maya into an abandoned place that smelled only of death. His face calm, his smug smile intact. Maya could not believe that there existed a time when she had fallen for this animal. Who wouldn't flinch even once before, drugging his wife, f**king his friend or abducting his daughter in law. Diya and Aamir were there waiting for MJ.

"RUDRAA! RUDRAA! Let me go MJ!" Maya shouted all in vain.

MJ signalled Aamir to tie her to a pole. It's time to make sacrifice in name of the goddess.

"Thank you Aamir, Diya. You may take my leave. I can carry on from here"

Maya was scared.

"So, what did you say that day? Khoon k badle khoon.. You killed my Rishi, you took away my Rudra, it's time to pay the price."

He took the gun in his hands. Maya realized MJ was enjoying to see her petrified, so she changed her stance. At most she would die, the fire in her had nothing to lose in this moment. Meanwhile she had switched on the GPS on her body so that Rajeev or Rudra can track her.

Maya tilted her head and smiled, "So you think if I die you would win? Tut tut, you are so mistaken MJ."

"MJ is never wrong. Never. Wrong."

"Oh really, do you think if you kill me my baby would leave you alive?"

"Baby?"

"Oh! my mistake. My Ruu baby. Your son."

MJ clenched his fists. He remembered his past and also how she would romance his son right under his nose.

"I can kill you right now and Rudra would not even mind. You killed Rishi. He would support me."

"You are wrong Mr. Roy. I would definitely mind."

MJ was shocked. How was Rudra here? He had hidden his trails so well. Did Aamir mess up again? He hoped Aamir successfully completed at least one command.

"Technology Mr. Roy. Have you heard of GPS? Our generation is very sharp in this aspect."

Rudra walked in casually. Maya was worried because he looked overconfident that his dad would not kill him. He had no weapon to defend him, except he was MJ Roy's own blood. But MJ was too selfish a man. He aimed his gun on Rudra shocking him. He started backtracking him.

"Back off Rudra! This is between me and Maya."

"There is onlly something between me and my wife. No third person gets a place."

"Back off Rudra. Or I'll shoot you."

"Oh! You'll shoot me to protect your family? Which family? Dad.."

"RUDRA ROY!"

The skillful swordsman snatched his gun and fired a bullet. Rurdra looked at the man he called his father lie on the ground, blood oozing from his chest.

Rudra's eyes filled with mixed emotions.

"You shot your dad Rudra? You shot your dad?" MJ breathed heavily. "Whatever I did, I did for my family, for you."

"No dad, I shot MJ and I am losing my dad in the process. Whatever I did, I did for my family, for Maya."

MJ closed his eyes and fell into dreamless slumber. Rudra looked at the blood in his hands.

Maya also needs to be set free. It was time to leave for home.


Awesome specially the ending . It will be interesting to see Rudra actually doing something in the show 😎

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Posted: 5 years ago

Latest promo is still trending on YT😎

It crossed 1.2 Mn views now

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Viddhi01

Naagin3 but seems you were not there as we used to call it N3 all the time 🤣 Never mind.

Hahaha! You’re right. Didn’t watch any of the seasons.. I was majorly into Gul and her cliched shows back then and got back onto IF recently

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 2019_AnushkaM

Are you writing Anu's story ?

I already did. Not a story though but yeah a better version of Ananya. I actually opted to write on her first 🤣 Kya se kya bana diya cvs ne uss bacchi ko. I am planning to make her troll herself 🤣
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: 2019_AnushkaM


Awesome specially the ending . It will be interesting to see Rudra actually doing something in the show 😎

Thank you Anu 🤗 I love your new DP

Kaha show mein hoga.. they want to kill off Prannath 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pranurosid

True..Even if CVS copy those ideas we would get better MayRa scenes😆

Exactly!! Right now cvs ko khud hi nahi pata ki unko chahiye kya

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: tournesol

Thank you Anu 🤗 I love your new DP

Kaha show mein hoga.. they want to kill off Prannath 😭

I lovedddd your OS.

Uhm my poor Aamir was bashed but I’ll let it slide 🤣

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