Adi Bechara - Halaat Ka Mara!!! 😭 - Page 8

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Well, when you increase chapters, you have an additional advantage to introduce more things. Plus, I thought after battle, some dialogues will take place at GH.

But you said you are gonna start another. So I was curious.

Well, I will see... If I am able to write a scene at GH worth reading, I might include it as the last chapter... Else, I might end it with the battle.

Yes, I have two more ideas, the ones which I told you about... Only that I want to discuss them in detail.

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Well, I will see... If I am able to write a scene at GH worth reading, I might include it as the last chapter... Else, I might end it with the battle.

Yes, I have two more ideas, the ones which I told you about... Only that I want to discuss them in detail.

Sure. 😊

Besides, I can't put in too many things as the basic plot of the story was the battle between the good Pia and her evil side, the battle between Amrit (as in Pia) and Vish (evil Pia)...

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Sure. 😊

Okay, which one should we take up first?

The sacrifice of the Daivik one or the other, the investigative story?

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay, which one should we take up first?

The sacrifice of the Daivik one or the other, the investigative story?

I liked the sacrifice one better. Can we start with this?

Originally posted by: nushy1995

I liked the sacrifice one better. Can we start with this?

Done... 👍🏼

Then we will take up the next one.

Okay, so here I was thinking:

Mo is planning to sacrifice Pia to become immortal... But there is one more KS who wants to sacrifice Pia for the same reason.

Now, here first of all, I want some suggestions regarding the second KS...

Baaki baad main discuss karenge.

Originally posted by: nushy1995

Hi Madhura!

Yes, here we were discussing about the current track. You missed our discussion on the prediction and coincidentally the actual track resembled that.

See, The Hulk tag! 😆

Besides, after so long we got our Majnu Ansh back. Both of us are on cloud 9, which is surprising considering the amount of bloopers. 😲

Indeed, since I don't follow. Awesome to know it did

Hulk, lol. But am happy his essence is back.

Awesome! He was always there, Piansh are on and off. I believe every week atleast one meaningful Piansh scene is there.

Today am having some time and mood after long thanks to Piansh subtle scene, so am gonna make that VM finally!!

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay, so here I was thinking:

Mo is planning to sacrifice Pia to become immortal... But there is one more KS who wants to sacrifice Pia for the same reason.

Now, here first of all, I want some suggestions regarding the second KS...

Baaki baad main discuss karenge.

Personally I don't like vampires or werewolf because they are portrayed brilliantly in American shows but Ekta messed it up big time in PKYEK, at least for me. Because it was quite popular among my classmates.

I would rather choose a Tantrik. Or it might be a priest who comes to know about a Daivik's power and become greedy?

What do you think?

Originally posted by: Nikki_srk

Okay, so here I was thinking:

Mo is planning to sacrifice Pia to become immortal... But there is one more KS who wants to sacrifice Pia for the same reason.

Now, here first of all, I want some suggestions regarding the second KS...

Baaki baad main discuss karenge.

This is complex, considering KS can be anything.

I believe you can take a totally different element for the KS. Maybe this KS is from an Alternate universe or dimension. Depends on what lines you actually want.