Future Track-A Father’s Revenge - scene 1

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry for all the people who love Meera and Meera's mahaan! Let me say sincerely I don't hate Meera. I wanted some justification for our stupid hero's very stupid act...

Another reason for my writing is all my friends who are heartbroken today. Sammy, Harvs, Navsy, Kanta, Archie, Sangs, Somali, Cherry and few hundred more - the die hard JB fans who are just down in the dumps...

I saw a movie called vantage point...basically what the movie does is to reconstruct different perspectives of audience and bystanders. If you like scene 1, I will also write scene 2, This just says why he did what he did today, not what's going to happen in the future.

This is scene 1:

A Father's revenge

He sat on the rocking chair, utterly in shock, is this true? Was she behind the plot to kidnap and kill his children? Did she actually try to bite the hand that fed her? How could he have been so nave? It all coincided nicely…Mohan in financial trouble, Meera coming to work for him as his personal secretary, conveniently the kidnapping happened a couple of months later. Even after the money was exchanged, the kids were killed, it was because they could recognize his friend and his secretary and they didn't want any clues to be left behind. It was too convenient for them when he chucked out Bani, suspected her of betraying him and being the cause of his children's death. Mohan disappeared and Meera was left behind and cried crocodile tears, and he wanted to show the world that he was still strong after his wife left with a much younger man. So he had married her.

It was only when he went to the outhouse, he found the letters, the letters the kidnapper wrote and the handwriting seemed familiar. It was Meera's writing…she was the culprit, she was the brains behind his children's sad demise.

Meera played her cards well, she was smart…she didn't overtly come on to him, she sympathized with him, she brought his daughter closer to him…but only because she came to know about his will, his will that he never changed even after his children's death. It said that all his property and money belonged to his children and if they are not alive then it would go to an orphanage. And Meera knew that Ganga was his offspring, and is entitled to all his money.

Bani was like a putty in Meera's hands. Meera played with her emotions so well, made sure that Ganga would be adopted by him. If he was right, he would be the next one to be killed, and then Meera would be the custodial parent for Ganga. All the money would be in her control, to do whatever she wished.

When Bani showed inordinate interest in the outhouse, he could see Meera getting worried, and that's when he thought that he would delve into the matters himself. He was shocked that Bani's accident was pre-planned. But Bani being Bani wanted to do jassoosi her own style. She suspected him of doing wrong things in the outhouse. He stopped being angry with Bani long time ago, knowing her full well, he knew that what she said about Daksh was just to put him off.

The love they have for each other culminated in passion and making love. But he knew all along Meera would arrive on the scene sooner or later and that Bani would sacrifice her love for Meera with a false sense of obligation.

He needed solid proof of Meera's hand along with Mohan's hand in his kids death. For that he would pretend to be on Meera's side, put the MS in her neck, if he had to. They always say keep your enemies close to your heart. He will take revenge on her, catch her red handed, make her confess to her crimes.

When they made love together, he told Bani the real reasons why he was at the outhouse. And together they agreed to smoke Meera and Mohan from their cave. It galled him to put the MS in her neck, he wanted to scrub his hands several times, but he had an obligation toward his children, he needed to take a father's revenge, even if it meant that he had distance himself from his real love, Bani.

Love,
-- S

PS: If you guys have a better scenario, please feel free to write it...I would welcome it. I know you guys all have better brains that Ekta's coterie of writers.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I so so so hope that they use this version to show what happened today Sheena, I don't think that my heart could take such disgusting behaviour(?) being shown on my screen 🤢

I hope to read scene 2 and 3 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very well written.. Oh I soooo hope that that is what this is all about... can it happen.. hey then the slashing scene does make sense.. I think this will be the biggest twist in the Kahani of KS

Sangeeta
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤔 🤔 🤔 well... when is the next scene coming???? 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it
plz cont soon with more torture for Meera. plz plz plz. i m double depressed with both Indian & Canadian epi just now
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I've had time to cool down but it hasn't healed my bruised heart after reading today's update. While driving home tonight - I tried to rationalize JW's behaviour and suspected Meera 🤢 was somehow involved in the children's kidnapping and 'death'.

You have penned this so well. I've lost any hopes of the destructives writing anything so fresh and innovative. This scenario is the only way to save JW - return his brains and intelligence and have him and Bani working together to solve the mysterious loss of their children and getting rid of Meera 🤢 .

Please continue with Part 2 and 3.

I saw Vantage Point too. Good movie although the ending was filmy - who survives a van rollover without a nick 😕.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I too feels Meera 🤢 😡 is behind the kidnapping of the kids......Ekta plz show us soon ur surprise & shockings
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well written jaaniyaaaaaaa 👏

If only this could all be true..................or at least they show us some meaningful scenes 😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shoba Di 🤗 🤗 🤗
Thanks for writing this, i wish you were the writer/creative head of KS. The storyline doesn't make sense 0.01%

Back to the update
I like Jai an revengeful person, and how Jai told Bani everything in the LM, I wanted to throw up and go and smack him after what he did today 😡 🤢 😭

I also agree with you Meera is playing her cards to well, first she got the house keys from Jigs, then Jai's sympathy, she got JW tie the MS and stop her from leaving # of times. I only remember JW stopping Bani leaving once in the golden days

Can we please have some meera torture, and JW revenge, i want him in black 😳 😭

can't wait to read scene 2 and scene 3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start.
loved it.
I am not Meera's fan but also doesn't hate her well yeah the way thing going I think preety soon I am going to hate her 🤢
love the whole concept of Meera being culprit and Jai being the jasoos....not the brainless, powerless JW we are getting to see this days
plz cont. soon

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