The Fateful Evening..Arjun Draupadi OS .Thread 4 - Page 32

Lovely update, the way you covered all various details was awesome.

Please post an update soon. Once the story completes, it should be published in a book format, digital and paperback. Such a lovely story, so many times I have read it and always gave me great joy.

Originally posted by: pari0706

Just love how this small episode covers the below aspects

1. chitra’s desperation and jealousy. - Panchali is not even doing anything and she is feeling jealous. It is so true that we can never cure anyone’s misunderstanding or stop others feeling jealous. Also I think this is the case of next doors garden is always greener.

2. Arjun’s silent care. - he cared enough to ensure she is not stressed. Wish he expresses openly as well and makes her feel wanted.

3. Pragati taking care of her mother. And ensuring she is not left alone

4. Subhadra acknowledging that Panchali knows Parth more than her - this is especially important since Panchali was extremely hurt as Subhardra was given the place of his wife in the palace

5. Panchali knowing the reason of his lost mood - this shows that they are true soul mates and does not need words or eye contact to understand what the other feels

6. Madhav’s surprise. Even he cannot live without Parth. But please please show him siding with his sakhi and teasing Parth. As both Parth and Madhav always tease Panchali or maybe some argument between Parth and Panchali and Madhav siding with his sakhi

Great summary. It shows how much this story is loved and looked forward to. This story deserves more recognition though!

Originally posted by: paartha

Great summary. It shows how much this story is loved and looked forward to. This story deserves more recognition though!

agree this is my favourite story and deserves a lot more recognition. I have read this numerous times and still wish to reread

Loved the update,

And the part where Arjun teased Bhabhruvahana, haha, :P

And Paarth's Madhav is here, what do we need more?

Update soon please, and if possible please show Pragati's marriage, At least in this story one of their kids should get married

Krishna’s arrival lighted up the whole atmosphere. Bride’s father fell down and touched his feet. I was blessed with your presence..Swayam Bhagavan arrived..What more do I want? He expressed his gratitude again and again.

Krishna smiled and added..It is the marriage of Parth’s son. How could I stay back?

When they are alone Arjun asked him…Is everything well back home? Satyaki said Yadava youth had gone out of control.

Krishna nodded in approval ..It is true. Sometimes we have to let things happen as they ought to be.I am trying my best though to keep things in control..

Arjun sighed and pressed his hand assuringly.

Why are you so serious looking? Satya who entered with Draupadi demanded answer.

Arjun shrugged his shoulders and Krishna quipped..Sakhi I am happy that finally Parth understood how to keep you free from burdens.

Panchali sideglanced her husband and Satya asked..what did he do for her?

Arjun said tongue in cheek..That is for you to guess..use your brain.

Satya pouted and asked Panchali in a low voice..Did he gift you anything special like he gave you that mang Ka tika And waistband?

Panchali’s face flushed in red..she answered with a pause..Those were the days Satya..now I don’t want any ornaments..

Satya nodded with understanding. She looked at Panchali who wore a simple majanta colour sari with gold border. She had the black beeds chain round her neck and the bracelet on hand given by Kunti..She wore glass bangles that are plain with little design. Her hair is tied up on her back without being arranged in a plait.

She did not even wore mang Ka tika..her center parting is filled with Sindhur making her look pious and calm.

Her nose ring is shining as usual and the glow on her face did not diminish.

Satya hugged her close and confessed..You dominate every one still…how did you manage?

Subhadra who entered with Chitra and Alli ..called up..Satya Bhabhi.that was the eternal puzzle which won’t have an answer.

while Krishna and Arjun laughed Panchali looked embarrassed..

Chitra muttered under her breath….Even my daughter in law got mesmerised..what to say..

Alli nodded her head and smiled.

Chitra folded her hands and requested Krishna.. Please come to the special chamber where the marriage formalities will start. The bride and bridegroom are waiting for you both..

Krishna nodded and walked off with Parth.

Both the families have assembled to formally announce the alliance..the priests on both sides are taking the names of the clan ..and the ancestors.

Chitra’s father was no more but still because of Arjun’s word to him,Babhruvahana was termed as the grandson of King Of Manipur.

Arjun did not get perturbed. Babhru belonged more to his father-in-law he thought.

Neither did the other Pandavas. For them Parikshit only is their successor..

Chitra suddenly got up and asked the priest to tag Babhru as the son of Arjun..

Arjun became serious..not necessary Chitra.,I have given my word..he said.

Chitra looked at Yudhishtir..” We don’t have a problem ..let your father’s clan acknowledged through Babhru” Yudhishtir said….Babhru felt uncomfortable..Why is his mother making an issue of it? Just because his grandfather is not alive his word should not be disrespected.

Chitra got hurt..she understood how her son lost the credit of being tagged as the son of the greatest warrior of Aryavarth.

Krishna stood and raised his hand. Nothing wrong if Babhru ‘s real lineage is mentioned . This is marriage ceremony. By doing so the ancestors of Kurus will be gratified. Do it…He signalled the priest to proceed.

Babhruvahan sighed with relief.He knew his mother will feel happy now and his prime concern is his mother only.

After the dinner…Arjun took Krishna to the sea shore..which is too nearer..Satya pulled Panchali and followed them.

Next day being the marriage every one retired to their chambers…

Satya liked the ambience so much.She stood in water but Panchali stayed back.

Tadiya moon is looking beautiful occasionally hiding under white clouds.

The minister of the state came there in search of Arjun to enquire whether the arrangements done are sufficient ..He touched Krishna’s feet with devotion.Krishna patted his back and moved towards Panchali and Satya.

How are you Sakhi? Looking peaceful and…lost out..Krishna gazed into her eyes.

Draupadi replied with caution. Nothing like that I am fine Govind..

Satya moved further waving her hand to Krishna..who rushed fast..towards her.. Panchali got a smile on her face. His concern for her.is .everlasting.. but he is Govind..he treats every one with concern. SO is Satya special for him or not?

Panchali wondered.Suddenly the tide struck her with force and she lost balance but next moment she found herself safe in his arms. Arjun held her tight and pushed her curls back. Time stopped for both of them.

Loved the marriage moments and how babru was pronounced as heir of Manipur kingdom as well as son of arjun.

Chitra is getting more desperate and vocal of her negative view of Panchali whereas Panchali is getting more detached.

However Panchali is not at peace and is carrying hurt with her. This way she will never be able to get peace and salvation.

I would also love to see some scene with Krishna and His sakhi. Where he doesn’t tease her but appreciates her tyag and balidaan. And blesses her to become one of Panchkanya

Lovely update with Babru's marriage and scenes of Krishna and Satya with Arjun/Draupadi, it was reminiscent of their earlier outings.

In future updates, please include scenes of Pari and Pragathi. And, also Arjun with his wives.

Lovely as usual..

Chitrangada need to stop now... Like seriously. She should be softer with Panchali who suffered so much and still suffering, can't imagine her pain of losing all her kids

And the last part of the update was reminding me of thread 1, were four of them used to hang out together like this, missing those good days 😭

Update soon :)

Originally posted by: paartha

Lovely update with Babru's marriage and scenes of Krishna and Satya with Arjun/Draupadi, it was reminiscent of their earlier outings.

In future updates, please include scenes of Pari and Pragathi. And, also Arjun with his wives.

Yes, Please include Pragati, Want Father daughter scenes

waiting for the next update