O RE PIYA #Akshan FF--Part 18 Updated on Page 26 - Page 17

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow ansu aa gye mere ankho se

It will be interesting to.see jindal sahab kaise bahar nikalte hai guddan ko.is dard se😛

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

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Originally posted by: Akshananju

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Wow ansu aa gye mere ankho se

It will be interesting to.see jindal sahab kaise bahar nikalte hai guddan ko.is dard se😛

Continue asap

kuch bahut hi special krenge jindal saab apni guddan ke liye you will soon witness that...

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago

Toh chalo finally hume free ho gaye and very sorry to make you all wait for a month maaf kr dena plz🙏... So know without wasting any time let start with next part


Part 18


Next day guddan opened her eyes and find herself in akshat's room


Guddan-hum yaha kese hum toh kal raat vo taalab ke kinare Dr. Akshat ke... Lagat hai hum vahi so gaye honge isliye Dr. Akshat hume yaha le kr aa gaye honge pr vo hai kaha kahi dikh ni rahe...


She leaves the bed come out from the room and start looking for him and finally spot him sleeping on the couch in the hall she went from there smiling and get freshen up and without making any noise she went to the kitchen prepares coffee and breakfast for him and silently leaves from there.


After some time he wakes up, he looks at the clock and directly went towards his room but disen't find her and there he found a chit he open it and start reading it
"Good morning Dr.Akshat ,

Hume dhoond rahe hai na par ap jab tak yeh letter padhenge tab tak hum ghar pr honge vase humne socha apko bata de pr phir ap so rahe the toh apko disturb nahi kiya..."


After reading letter he start getting ready for college


Akshat- jaldi kro Dr. Akshat aaj toh ap bhaut late hone wale ho lagta hai aaj shirf pani pi kr hi jana padega Then he went to kitchen and get another letter on kitchen counter,a smile appears on his face while opening it

"Kya socha apne ki shirf pani pi kr ghar nikal jayenge... Haan haan jante hai ki apko late ho raha hai pr 10 min toh hai na apke pass kam se kam toh ek kaam kijiye vo jo apke samne table rakha hai na haan haan vahi freeze ke bagal mai vaha kuch hai jo apka intezar kr raha."


He went to the table where she arrange his breakfast and coffee with another note, he took the note in one hand and in other he took the coffee mug

"Zyada mat sochiye aur breakfast kr lijiye warna paka late ho jayenge Dr. Akshat aur haan coffee bhi hume hi banai hai"


Akshat- Coffee...With that he was almost drop the mug but some how handle himself and again start reading.


"Are re sambhal kr... And don't worry aaj hume coffe main sugar cube hi dala hai aap isse aram se pi sakte hai"


And after that he complete his breakfast and come to the hall for heis phone and car key but instead of car key he found one more letter of her


Akshat- ek aur chalo dekhte hai ab isme kya hai


"Soooorrrrrryyyyyyy Dr. Akshat and a big thank you...

Ab ap soch rahe honge ki yeh ladki pagal ho gayi hai shayad sorry aur thanks dono ek saath bol rahi hai"


Akshat(to himself)- Hmmmm....pagal toh tum ho Dr. Gupta pr tumhara yahi pagalpan toh hume pagal kiye huwe hai.


"Toh thanks kal raat ke liye hune sambhalne ke liye humara dhyan rakhne ke liye aur yeh itna bad sorry kyuki apki dhano I mean apki car humare pass hai, dekhiye ap...ap gussa mat kijiye hum jante hai apki car koi aur touch kr apko pasand ni hai pr hum kya krte humare phone ki battery khatam ho gayi thi aur hume ghar bhi jaldi ana tha tho.... Vase ap tension mat lijiye bus ap apna main ghar se nikal ke 10 tak counting suru kijiye aur apki dhano apke samne hogi"


So Akshat do the same he took his bag and went out to the main gate and start counting to 10


There he saw his car stop infront of him


Guddan- Once again a very good morning Dr. Akshat chaliye toh ye rahu apki car aur agar ap bura na mane toh please hume college tak lift de diijiye


Akshat- kyu main kyu lift doon tumhe aur haan mujhe bhaut bura laga bhaut bhaut zyada bura laga mujhe aur main tumse naraz bhi hoon isliye ab tumhe punishment bhi milegi...


Guddan(in her mind)- aj toh hum gaye yeh naraz hai matlb ab hume lift ni milegi aur huk paka college ke liye late ho jayenge... Arey baap ree ab kya kregi guddan
Guddan- dekhiye ap chahe jo saja de den pr please hume college tak lift de dijiye please please please...


Akshat- lekin main tumhe lift ni de sakta
Guddan- lekin kyun


Akshat-kyu ki lift tho main tumhe tab donga na jab main car drive krunga


Guddan- matlab


Akshat- matlab yeh ki drive tum hi krogi aur..."tum mujhe lift dogi"


Guddan- lekin...


Akshat- lekin vekin kuch ni chalo ab varna college ke liye late ho jayenge


Guddan- thik hai phir chaliye


And then they both sit in the car and went to the college there someone from behind was keeping an eye on both and call to his boss


Person- haan boss vo dono bus abhi nikle hai aur gadi ladki chala rahi hai


Boss- thik hai tum bhi picha kro unka aur pal pal ki jankari dete rahna


Person- ji boss


End of Part

I know it was quite boring but please handle it next part mai kuch acha acha ayega promise...


So what do you think who is the boss and why he/she behind Guddan and Akshat...
Please ignore the typos and grammatical errors


Upcoming part- Akshat help guddan to come out from his past guilt...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thank you for updating 🥰🥰

Next part jaldi karna abse please😭

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awsome 👍🏼

Continue soon itna intezaar na karaya kro plz

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