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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

I was just changing channels.and in one Image episode Swiss hotel Mr. Bajaj was shown standing near a lion sculpture.

Mrs. Bajaj became Sherri here aww Mr. Bajaj an Wohi karenge jo unki best half chahengi.

Awesome sone se pehle itna pyara update padha.

Chotu ki mamma papa se mila dete.

Cutting her nails true nahi toh Mr. Bajaj apni bare back Shadi ke baad kisi ko dikha nahi sakenge

I think he should show to Mr. Basu 😆😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Amazing. Beautiful. Ending is superb.mr.bajaj scratching his in embarrassment,this scene kisi aur ki yiad diladi. Thanks.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

I have posted next part, you didn't reply..?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Happy ending. Very nice story. Loved it.

Edited by MR21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

It is a very good story....I love how you made Anurag to see Mr Bajaj to bring him to Prerna...the best part in the whole story was in the 2nd part where Mr Bajaj breaks down in front of Prerna and confessed everything to her... thanks for such a lovely story....we don't know when will we get to see such love in the show...so once again thanks for bringing most of PreJaj fans wish into words to a beautiful story with a lovely ending.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: davinajebakani

It is a very good story....I love how you made Anurag to see Mr Bajaj to bring him to Prerna...the best part in the whole story was in the 2nd part where Mr Bajaj breaks down in front of Prerna and confessed everything to her... thanks for such a lovely story....we don't know when will we get to see such love in the show...so once again thanks for bringing most of PreJaj fans wish into words to a beautiful story with a lovely ending.

Thank you😊

It means alot..

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Aavnii

Part 2

He rushed inside her room.. Veena was sitting beside her.. He just left stood on his place, here she was laying with wires and machines..

Veena stood and left her chair for him...

She never saw him like this, without jacket untugged shirt , sleepers ...and tears, unstoppable tears....

He sit on his knees and hold her hand...

" Prerna...... " a mere whisper escaped his lips...

" ye sab kya hai Prerna, kitna irritate krogi mujhe , ab ye nya tareeka aur sabko bhi preshan kr rhi ho... Utho ab...

Get up dammit! , fight with me, argue, anything do anything... Just get up... I know you are angry with me, see i am sitting on my knees and saying sorry.. Please, come back to me!.....i was foolish...

Pagal tha mai, dil ki nahi sunta na... Dil ki sunta to kbi tumhe khud se dur nahi jane deta....

Please prerna you can punish me as you like, slap me... But just get up...

You want to take Sneha for picnic at that public park, you can take her...

Jo bhi chati ho sab karna, road side pani puri, barish mai bheegna, ghar mai without sleepers chalna... Sab... Sab karna aur Sneha ko bhi sikhana..

Mai promise karta hu..., i will come home before 8, i will never skip a meal with family.. Weekends off... Sab kuch tumhare tareeke se karenge please....."

He slowly put his hand on her head.....

And she respond....

She tried to open her eyes, but couldn't, but it was all right because the cold hands touched her, soothed her, and…

She caught her breath in a gulp that was partly a cry of relief and partly a sob.

He feel her movements... he called for the doctor...

Team of doctors rushed to her side.. As he stepped back and caught veena by her shoulders as she was trembling..

" prerna..." She said and he hugged her tightly

" kuch nahi hoga use, kuch bhi nahi.."

And she nodded positively..

After checking her doctors confirm that she is stable..

All sighed in relief...

After sometime;

She was cold, so cold. She opened her eyes and try to sit nurse helped her,slowly scan her place , all were standing around her, Maa, shivani was holding her, Anupam and Anurag...but her eyes stopped at him..

He was standing there in the corner , watching her quietly with red and swollen eyes and red nose..wet shirt, he cried... Cried for her...

But anger overpower her emotions..., she can't breathe in his presence, she want to run out , out from his reach ...

She tried to stand, but he crossed the room quickly and his hands closed on her shoulders, and she felt the reaction lurch through her, his touch, oh, god—his touch…

She was not looking at him...

"I want to go—" she began desperately, and then broke off before the word home. Where? Where could she go?

And suddenly it was too much for her, too much to bear, and she felt tears flowing down her face and great hiccoughing sobs tore through her and—

He dropped his hands from her shoulders and stepped back....

Her mother console her again...

" Prerna... rona band krdo, abhi khote khote wapas paya hai tumhe... Apne bacche ki to socho..."

She looked at her belly..." Mera baccha..."

" Beta hua hai tumhe, Prerna..." Anurag said to her...

She smile in tears.."mera beta.."...

"Sneha kitni khus ho jyegi, use bhai chahiye tha..."

He closed his eyes... What he has done..? How could he so wrong about her.. happiness ...Sneha.. is her lifeline and he parted them....

And she she looked at him, and at this moment everyone except him left the room...

Anurag was last, who just want to see her last time before Mr. Bajaj got her back..

"Before we continue, there are certain facts of which I think you should be aware." His voice was tightly contained.

Amrita...The word hung there between them for an impossible length of time, before he finally continued.. is only my colleague.. I was never involved with her..

" i know.."she replied..

"You know.." he asked in confusion..

" i know that what if you don't love me, you can never cheat me.."

Again he was wrong about her...

" But you asked me about her, before.."

" you give me divorce papers..?"

" yes, i want to know why.. Why are you acting with her..?"

" Tumhe khud se dur karne ke liye, tum mujhse nafrat karti to tumhare liye jana asan ho jata..."

So you were that desperate to throw me out, you act as a low moral man...

Her anger raised higher than before..

And before he could answer, she flung herself across the small space that separated them, let all her pain and emptiness erupt in hot, molten rage, and attacked him...

All her needels were coming out..

He immediately hold her and make her sit on her bed..but not before she felt the satisfying contact of fingernails against skin, not before she felt him flinch and heard him hiss at the contact, and she wanted more, more. ...

"Pagal ho gyi ho... "he asked surprised..by her behavior..

" haa ho gyi hu, pagal hi ho gyi hu.. Kbhi khud ke dil ki nahi suni, whi kiya jo dusro ke liye sahi tha... Pyar kiya , kho diya...

Lekin ye dil, ise bhi mujhe harte hue dekhna hi accha lagta hai...

Ekbaar frse pyar ho gya, aur isbaar ek ese insaan se jiske pass dil hi nhi tha.."

He was feeling defeated...

" esa nahi hai , Prerna.. Mai bhi.."

" Don't, just don't speak those words to me... I actually stat hating the word 'LOVE'...

Aur iske sath , nafrat ho rhi mujhe aapse, khud se.. aur sab se.."

"They never asked me," she whispered "They never once asked me, 'Prerna, is this what you want? Will this make you happy?' They thought because I was unhappy, that by getting me away from you, they could fix it.

"Did he broke her beyond repair..?"he looked at her..

Tears were running, eyes were in rage..

"Get out," she said, her voice a low growl. "Leave."

And she feel his presence near her and before she would say something he wrapped his arms around her and held her tight to him...

She resist, strongly want to come out of it, then gave up and cried her heart out in his arms..

They don't know, how much time they spend like this .. But she is relaxed now , her breathing is normal and slowly they part away..

Immediately he hold her hand,

" maine bhut galtiyan ki hai Prerna, lekin bas ek chance, just one chance.. Please..

I will prove you my love for you.., i really love you....

Tumhe nahi pta kitna tut chuka hu mai tumhe khud se dur karke, nahi janta tha ki tumhari khusi kha hai...

Kabhi esa nahi karta, bas yhi chata tha ki tum khus rho..

Tumne hi to sikhaya tha..'.pyar..dusre ki khusi hai..'

Yhi to kar rha tha..."

He was sobbing like a child in front of her...

Her heart melt away for him.. and she slowly cupped his face and wipe his tears ...

He was looking at her like a child..and she can't resist herself and put her lips on his...

They pore out their longing, love ,anger ,fear..in that one kiss ..

Both seperated ,and join their foreheads...

He was red due to shyness..and as she looked at his face, she start laughing..

And he looked aways while scratching his neck...hell embarrassed ..

"Mr. Bajaj, .. did you see your son..?"she asked to make him normal..

" Nahi, mai use tumhare sath milna chata tha..."she smiled at his answer..

"Ab age kya Mr. Bajaj... Yha se age.."

" whi jo tum chati ho...",he looked at her with hope" kya chati ho tum..?"

"Abhi bhi btana pdega , kya chati hu, aap jante hai mera jawab.."

He nodded happily" thik hai, fr i will make all the arrangements, after your discharge.."

"Is baar shhadi , ki arrangements mai krungi, apne tareeke se..."she declared

" okay, as you wish, bas shaddi se phle , please get your nails cut.., "he teased

She look down in embarrassment...,he chuckles and hug her again...

They are going to start their new journey from here....

So, here is the next and last part ...

Thank you...

Amazing👏

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