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Alisha

@Hallyumint

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Posted: 6 years ago

A wattapad perfect story Amberose. I could almost imagine the scene. Great word building. A little more & you'd be able to completely immerse the viewer in your story.

Next week im launching a Media Thread for FF's & Vm's If you like you can send me link of your OS. I can store it for you on pg 1 . And then new readers will be able to read those who haven't before.

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ShriRukminiKrishna

@RainOfDew

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome one

So emotional

Do write more but happy one

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MudrasV

@MudrasV

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Posted: 6 years ago

I liked this one.

But this is a sad OS.

I was able to imagine this scene in front of me.

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snow9

@snow9

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderfully written.... Thank for sharing ,. Please do continue

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 6 years ago

Beautifully written . I could feel both's pain .If possible do a second part...

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Keerthikaravi

@Keerthikaravi

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Posted: 6 years ago

It's too nice. Wonderful description of feeling, sad and love towards each other. If possible write more

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