Arshi FF : Sea Mist Thread #2 Epilogue pg 106 - Page 69

Originally posted by: Savera84

I sent a PM with link.

Cheers.......

Hey S, can you please give it to me too

I could not find it

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Harvest moon is on my blog .... it is not public temporarily but I guess I will post in on WP

Thanks Kavi. Would love to read it.

Originally posted by: canapoem

Hey S, can you please give it to me too

I could not find it

Just sent the link.

Cheers......

Dear Kavi,

The story moved forward beautifully with lots of loose ends tied.

Sometimes an outburst or two helps bring facts and emotions together - such as those from Shyam and Anjali. And everyone else when they talked about the incident(s) from eight years ago.

Sometimes it is the calm demeanor such as that from Arnav (most unlikely of them!) all through in Udupi, which instigated Khushi to let the dam burst. So many questions answered. Some still remain unanswered.

Teens and young adults sometimes take rash decisions, not quite sure of the consequences that they and others around them have to bear. For years to come. All the main characters of this story are witness to that. Be it the Senior Raizada or Indrani or the Jha's or the Gupta's or the younger Raizada's. The repercussions of their actions are evident even now.

I am glad that Akash saw a semi-closure of sorts. Anjali, with her decision to move on and away from Shyam is on the right path. Then there is Arnav and Khushi who finally decided to open it all up. (literally ;) ;) )

An old Shammi Kapoor song --

Aye chaand zara chhup ja, aye waqt zara ruk ja

Ek baat hai honthon pe, keh loon to qaraar aaye

Ek bojh to hat jaaye

sab khwaab sa lagata hai, is raat mein jaadu hai

kaamosh nazaaron ki, har saans mein jaadu hai

ham hain ki bandhe se hain, dil hai ki uda jaaye

ek baat hai honthon ...

Back from the romance, there's still the whodunnit mystery. And then there is Nandita.

Kavi - thank you for updating this story regularly. Please do not feel discouraged with the lack of support. I am guilty of not coming in promptly - just that IF is hard to track than other WP forums (I actively follow couple of authors there), which send auto notifications to your email ID. But know that I love your story (have always did!) and appreciate your hard work. Please do keep up the good work - whichever forum you decide to host your stories on.

Take care,
Vini.

Kavi, reading Vinny's comment above, just thought of saying this. Someone many of us follow on wordpress (or WP as we call it) has 561 followers for one of her blogs, and the new one from Jigs already has 294 followers. If my memory is correct, Meera used to have around 800-850 followers for the river blog. Now all these people may not comment regularly. But the reason why they follow would be because they like to read it. So give it a shot. We are all there for "word of mouth" canvassing apart from reading, we have the tendency to park in places and chat up a storm, that you may rue the day you met us!!😆

Yep, we are very sticky 😆🤣

Beautiful update. Arnav and Khushi patched up. Can't wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: Newfan2016

Dear Kavi,

The story moved forward beautifully with lots of loose ends tied.

Sometimes an outburst or two helps bring facts and emotions together - such as those from Shyam and Anjali. And everyone else when they talked about the incident(s) from eight years ago.

Sometimes it is the calm demeanor such as that from Arnav (most unlikely of them!) all through in Udupi, which instigated Khushi to let the dam burst. So many questions answered. Some still remain unanswered.

Teens and young adults sometimes take rash decisions, not quite sure of the consequences that they and others around them have to bear. For years to come. All the main characters of this story are witness to that. Be it the Senior Raizada or Indrani or the Jha's or the Gupta's or the younger Raizada's. The repercussions of their actions are evident even now.

I am glad that Akash saw a semi-closure of sorts. Anjali, with her decision to move on and away from Shyam is on the right path. Then there is Arnav and Khushi who finally decided to open it all up. (literally ;) ;) )

An old Shammi Kapoor song --

Aye chaand zara chhup ja, aye waqt zara ruk ja

Ek baat hai honthon pe, keh loon to qaraar aaye

Ek bojh to hat jaaye

sab khwaab sa lagata hai, is raat mein jaadu hai

kaamosh nazaaron ki, har saans mein jaadu hai

ham hain ki bandhe se hain, dil hai ki uda jaaye

ek baat hai honthon ...

Back from the romance, there's still the whodunnit mystery. And then there is Nandita.

Kavi - thank you for updating this story regularly. Please do not feel discouraged with the lack of support. I am guilty of not coming in promptly - just that IF is hard to track than other WP forums (I actively follow couple of authors there), which send auto notifications to your email ID. But know that I love your story (have always did!) and appreciate your hard work. Please do keep up the good work - whichever forum you decide to host your stories on.

Take care,
Vini.

Thank you for lovely song and the words of encouragement as well :-)

Kavi, reading Vinny's comment above, just thought of saying this. Someone many of us follow on wordpress (or WP as we call it) has 561 followers for one of her blogs, and the new one from Jigs already has 294 followers. If my memory is correct, Meera used to have around 800-850 followers for the river blog. Now all these people may not comment regularly. But the reason why they follow would be because they like to read it. So give it a shot. We are all there for "word of mouth" canvassing apart from reading, we have the tendency to park in places and chat up a storm, that you may rue the day you met us!!😆

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@ Bold: Psst... Am I one of them? If not, can you please send me the link?

Now Kavi will know what you are talking about.😊

Cheers........