Broken Hearts#2 updated LAST PART on Pg 76 / 16-12-2019 - Page 13

Hey,

loved the update

daija and geet both know how to react towards Azzem and Rahul, good reply from Daija to Rahul another slap..

Adi saves them from the intruder...Good move by adi...

Cute how the baby is missing her father...

update soon...

Wow.. Beautiful update di. I just want to kill that Rahul.. how much he stoop low.. thank god Geet come right time.. love U daija she gave Rahul what she deserved.. love ADI .. he did right to arrest that Rahul. I hope Maan jaldi ajaye .. aur MaaNeet & Piyu ka Milan hojaye.. bus... Eagerly waiting for next update..

Congrats for the new thread..I am new to ur story plz add me in ur list..

The update was good as always really liked how daija replied back to aseem bow strong and fierce she is when it comes to her family just like maan and best

And Adi also he is not less.

Bas jaldi se maan wapis aa Jaye as piyu and geet are missing him

PART - 34

DAIJA and Adi both were discussing about the incident happened. "Thank you beta. Mere zara se batane pe tumne quick action liya."

Adi put his hand on her wrinkled hand. "Nahi Daija. Aap Maan ko thank you bolti kya? Waise bhi Rahul ki harkat ko lightly nahi liya ja sakta tha. The moment you called me in the morning and told about his act i got that if we ignore him now then it will be our biggest mistake." Adi's brows narrowed.

"Adi make sure he will not come out till Maan came back." she commands.

"Don't worry Daija. Itna strong case banaya hai,uski bail tak nahi hogi." Adi assured her.

Both discussed about Aseem and his family, while they were busy in finding a solution. Sakshi wanted her son out.

"Aseem i don't wanna listen any excuse. I want my son back at any cost." Sakshi declared her demand before him.

His forehead squeezed. "And what you think I am doing? Can't you see i am trying. That Adi. He is very clever. Usne har cheez plan kar k ki hai. All proofs are against Rahul." Aseem replied in most irritated way.

"I don't know any thing. Do whatever you want. I only want my baby back. Right now." Sakshi was glued to her words.

"Just shut up okay. He is my son too. Ab hume Maan pe pressure bnana hi hoga ki wo hume humara share de de." Aseem mummerd in his mouth and thought how to get everything from Maan.

Whole day passed and night arrived. Piya was still low and sat silently, observing her mother. She was busy in some work. Geet followed Adi's advice and arranged a video call to Maan. She already told him about Piya so he was also waiting on the other side. Both connects and Maan become visible on the screen of laptop. Geet slipped the laptop in front of Piya.

Geet wrapped her arm around her hips and indicate towards screen. "Piyu, baby see Papa. See..."

Piya glancing at her mother. "baby say hello to papa." Suddenly she heard Maan's voice and glance all around. She alerts quickly. "Baby i am here see." Maan called her name to gain her attention.

Piya glance at the screen and see Maan smiling. Piya stare him for few seconds to confirm whether its he or his image but when he called her many times a wide smile came on her dull face. "mumm uuuu" Piya joined her hands and clap then she raised her small arm towards screen. She showing her mother and sharing her happiness.

"How's my baby? Papa miss Piya. Do you miss me?" Maan keep talking with his doll. Geet too overwhelmed as she saw her smiling after so many days.

"eeeeee." By making different sounds she showing her happiness. Piya patting her hands in air.

"Piyu papa se kaho ki baby or mumma unko bahut miss kar rahe hai so come back soon." Geet glance and convey her heart's wish to him.

Piya glance both one by one both and turned silent, so Geet kiss her. She smiled and slipped to kiss Maan but keypad of Laptop become obstacle so she pressed all the keys and by mistake turn off the camera and Piya's mood turned off too.

"mum mum uuuuuuu." She complaints to her mom. Geet act fact and turn on the camera. Maan was visible to her again. Her lost smile, her chiming giggles came back to her again. Geet parted the keyboard and Piya kissed her father. She patted her small hand on screen and kissed her father. Maan too kiss her. Seeing her happy Geet took a relief breath. Like she got a lost treasure,her baby's smile. Maan talk till Piya felt dizzy. Her tiny body get tired easily and she slept in her mother's lap. Geet absorbed her baby. She patted and waved her for few seconds. Piya stare her parents till her eyes fully closed. She wanna make sure that they were with her. Piya slept in solace.

"Thank you Maan. She was so restless without you." Geet thanked him.

"No need to say thanks to me. I also miss her a lot." Maan said.

"Thanks to Adi who gave the idea of video call. She is relax now." Geet glanced at her first then to Maan.

"Don't worry Geet i come back soon." he assured her.

"Maan pls come back soon. Piya needs her uuu. When she start crying for you i felt like someone..."

"Pierced your heart." Maan astonished her by giving voice to her heart. Geet stare him in amusement. She never expected that he could ever understand her so clearly. Is she was so transparent or he start understanding her emotions. Geet's mind puzzled between her so many contrary thoughts.

Geet was mute so he broke the silence. "Don't worry Geet you are not alone. I am always there for my loved ones." Maan once again promised her and unknown to her feelings towards him he rosed her beats. His promise swelled her heart with happiness.

Two more days passed. Aseem tried harder to get their son bail out but Adi made it impossible for them.

Their temper roses because lack of patience. Both are now want their share and KM. But because of Adi's new guards Aseem and his wife wouldn't even able to talk with Geet so now they were also waiting for Maan to return.

Morning time and Geet took Piya to garden area. So she could feel better. Piya saw beautiful butterflies and got excited easily. She wants to catch them and scann all around. Suddenly her giggles get higher.

"Mum aanu..." Piya told the reason of her excitement to her mother. Geet stirred and saw Maan coming towards them...

Thank god piya is saved... Rahul is really cruel... When maan will return

Superb update.piya talk with maan on video call and feel happy geet feel relax seeing piyu happy.maaneet also talk with eachother.aseem try to take rahul out but unsuccessfull.finally maan is back.

Superb update

ADI made a strong case against Rahul which makes Aseem helpless as he is not able to take his son out and now waiting for Maan so that he can ask for his shares .

Geet follows Adi advice and contact Maan via video call and now Piya is excited to see her uuu . Maan assures Geet again that he will be back soon

Waiting for next

Part 33

Fantastic Update, thank God Piya was saved in time and I got a sigh of relief, Daija gave a nice slap to Rahul, though Daija and Geet handling Rahul strongly but Adi did the wonderful Job and Rahul is there which is best place for him

Poor Piya not well and missing her papa and moreover sensing every wrong things around her, Adi gave idea of video calling, loved the update

Part 34

Beautiful Update

Adi assured Daija that nothing can go wrong in absence of Maan, loved Maan-Piyu video calling session, loved Piya,s reaction watching Maan in video , Geet enjoyed Piya,s happiness and got a sigh a sigh of relief

Piya sensed Maan,s coming as soon as he entered, loved it

Eagerly waiting for next

thank god rahul didn't get the bail hope maan will make him life time imprisonment

now maanu came back form trip to his lovedones really loved ones hope he will tell same to geet also

usually adi idea is best idea

hope everything will be fine soon