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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Tara became so emotional seeing Mritunjay back.The whole scene...dialogues were nice.Their romance was sensual.Like Tara wished she did puja with her hus.Even when Tara is busy he is in a mood to romance.πŸ˜‰He had to help her.Like any man he too did blunders.Lighting diyas together..Mrityu covering her hand with his were so sweet.Naina saying that rajveer is a dumb in this matter(Gift) was so funny.Guess most of the men are weak in getting the right gift 4 their lady love.Loved Tara telling Mrityu that his presence is what she longed for n thats the biggest gift.His reply was naughty n her reaction (blushing)made the scene romantic.
Thanks to Shai 4 suggesting me to read this OS.This is the 1st MriAra OS I am reading.Since I'vent watched their show I kept ignoring their ffs.Bcz I may not be able to relate to them.But since this is an OS I gave it a try.Must say frankly that how you added perfect pics made this OS look more attractive n this is what tempted me to read this OS.I prefer to read pic updates n it makes me feel that I am watching a serial
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Happy Diwali to you too Archu!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Happy DiwaliπŸ₯³

Diwali was a very special time for MriAra!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Yes! That Diwali changed so many things for us!

It was the time when Mrityunjay first saw Tara as his wife!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Diwali gift or bomb🀣

Thank you for this wonderful gift on Diwali!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

You are welcome and also thank you for making it possible!πŸ€—

Tara's first Diwali at her in-laws' house and it is natural that she is missing her parents' house!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Yupsmiley1

Her memories of her mom making sweets on Diwali and her love for the rangoli was very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Thank you! Small things make a difference when you are away from homesmiley1

Even though they could not afford many crackers but still Tara was happy with whatever she got!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yes! Money was not the defining factor for happiness!πŸ€—

The younger ones always do get more advantages!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Couldn't agree moreπŸ˜‰

Parents always buy clothes for their kids but never for themselves!!!

They want to make their children happy and seek their happiness in their children'ssmiley1

Tara loved every aspect of Diwali!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

YupSmile

The mud fort was indeed grand and the pic you used is very nice!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I have seen bigger forts in my childhood!

Poor Tara used to have exams after Diwali and had to study for them during the vacation!!!!

The tragedy of every school-going person😭

Time changed and things got better with time!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Time changes thingSmile

It is natural that she missed her sister during Diwali after her sister got married!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Yes, it was natural to miss your permanent friendsmiley19

But she had the happy memories of her childhood!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She didSmile

You described how Tara celebrated Diwali in her childhood beautifully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank YouπŸ€—β˜ΊοΈ

So Tara and Mrityunjay got married in this way!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

hehehe...smiley2

Indeed their married life is very happy and full of love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

YupπŸ˜ƒ

It is too bad that Mrityunjay is not here for Diwali!!!!

AgreeOuch

Tara is missing him even more seeing Rajveer and Naina together!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Yes, the pain manifested Ouch

She is so sad and making rangoli!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry

One has to keep themselves busy to prevent from cryingOuch

The surprise was indeed wonderful!!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

hehehe...smiley4

Tara got so emotional that she started crying!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Yes, tears should come with a sign of what they are coming! For sorrow or joysmiley2

Mrityunjay hugging her and saying he missed her was soo sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€—

*sighs* totally agree

Naina teasing them and Tara getting embarrassed was too cute and funny!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

hehehe...

Finally Tara got her heart's desire of having Mrityunjay with her on her first Diwali post marriage!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Yup!

Mrityunjay and Tara are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

New marriage has spark and MriAra are a passionate couple!πŸ˜ƒ

Too bad Nirmala interrupted them but he is not one to give up and promised to continue it later!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Oh, the sweet promise it was EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Tara is looking beautiful and Mrityunjay is looking sooo handsome!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thanks to the show!Wink

The pic you used is perfect!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank You!

Both of them lighting the diyas together was divine!!!!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

I wanted them to do that in show but well the show had other plansWink

Naina scolded Mrityunjay for not bringing a gift!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

She is right!

At least in this Rajveer had done better and had brought a gift!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He learned his lessonπŸ˜†

The devar-bhabhi equation is very cute!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yes, it is Smile

Mrityunjay handing her the sparkler and holding her hand in his was so beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank youEmbarrassed

Their convo about the gift was soo sweet and romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

It was

Mrityunjay being there was Tara's biggest gift and she is lucky to have him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

She isπŸ˜ƒ

The one shot is fantastic and very well written Archu!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Thank you for reading, liking, commenting, and above all editing it!

πŸ€—smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31


It took me a year to reply! πŸ€ͺ

Sorry for the delay!

Edited by Archi21 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: khushboo_kzk

Beautiful...grammatically well written...grammer is very good..felt like i walk down in my childhood memory lane...very nostalgic

Thanks to Shaina for her Godly editing skill πŸ‘
I am glad I was able to walk you through your memory lane πŸ˜ƒ

MJ and tara is romance very good...well described esp the bedroom romance ...though i don't watch the serial so i can't judge...but you should have added more of RN romance...bcs i had watched RN indefinite times...next time please write more of RN romance...anyways like MJ and tara too...
I have seen less of RN so writing them was difficult but in future I will keep that in mind πŸ˜ƒ

and yes it true that every diwali our parents buys us a new clothes but never for themselves...and they wear old clothes by saying ek baar hi toh pehna hai...(we just wear it once)... its not that they can't afford to buy new clothes for themselves but they are so busy in preparation for Diwali...has no time for them...
Yeah, sometimes your reason is also true. Children are more excited about new clothes, sweets, and crackers 😊


Thanks for reading, liking, and commenting πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

Finally... something on Raina and Mriara... Very well written. So finally Tara got her heart's desire of having Mj with her on her first Diwali post marriage. Keep writing.

Thanks for the PM Shai.


I am glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
I wish I would have written more about Raina 😊

Thanks Shaina for spreading the word πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome OS DearπŸ‘πŸ˜Š

You explained beautifully gow Tara celebrated Diwali in her childhood
Luckily Tara got good husband and in-laws
MJ and Tara scenes were lovelyπŸ˜ƒ


Thanks for reading πŸ˜ƒ

I am glad you enjoyed it πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

Oh man i miss the show so much ...

Diwali sequence was so beautiful ...Tara kitni pretty lagri thi

EBI ...i miss the good old episodes

Archu you explained everything so beautifully !!!!

MriAra ...❀️


I too that show😭

Diwali squence was magnificent in showπŸ‘

Thank you for loving itπŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Neenzm


Lovely OS dear.

You described Tara's emotions very well. It was a smooth going story where Tara gets a lovable husband and family.

Nice job



Thanks for reading and commenting πŸ˜ƒ

I am glad you liked πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Tara is so crazy about Diwali.Her special interest towards Diwali was described well.Now she misses her sis during diwali.Its true that even if our inlaws r good we will miss our parents on certain occasions.Good that u showed that.In RS shows women forget maayka when they get used to their sasural which is disgusting.Tara Mrityunjay had arranged marr?Surprising that Rajveer Naina r also there in this OS.Sad that even Mrityu had to leave b4 diwali.Tara missing her hus more seeing Rajveer Naina together was so realistic.I myself has experienced itπŸ˜‰.so i can relate to it.


I am glad you liked my description about DiwaliπŸ˜ƒ

It takes time for one to adjust to new home but TV shows are far away from reality

I need elder brother for MJ, so no on was better than Rajveer πŸ˜†

I am glad I was able to keep it near reality πŸ˜ƒ

I think reunion after some separation makes us value each other more 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Tara became so emotional seeing Mritunjay back.The whole scene...dialogues were nice.Their romance was sensual.Like Tara wished she did puja with her hus.Even when Tara is busy he is in a mood to romance.WinkHe had to help her.Like any man he too did blunders.Lighting diyas together..Mrityu covering her hand with his were so sweet.Naina saying that rajveer is a dumb in this matter(Gift) was so funny.Guess most of the men are weak in getting the right gift 4 their lady love.Loved Tara telling Mrityu that his presence is what she longed for n thats the biggest gift.His reply was naughty n her reaction (blushing)made the scene romantic.

Thanks to Shai 4 suggesting me to read this OS.This is the 1st MriAra OS I am reading.Since I'vent watched their show I kept ignoring their ffs.Bcz I may not be able to relate to them.But since this is an OS I gave it a try.Must say frankly that how you added perfect pics made this OS look more attractive n this is what tempted me to read this OS.I prefer to read pic updates n it makes me feel that I am watching a serial


I am glad you liked MriAra romance ❀️

Well, men can't help themselves that's why we are here πŸ˜›

Thanks to the serial maker for the shots! I was lucky to have them. I am pleased you enjoyed them❀️

Thank you Shaina for bringing one more reader to this fiction πŸ€—smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31

Thank you once again for reading and commentingsmiley31smiley31smiley31smiley31

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

Thanks to all the readers for reading, liking, and commenting! πŸ€—

You make my day❀️

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