Guddan Os- Hum Bimaar hein!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys, so the following is just a random thought of mine.Just a cute OS! Its nowhere related to the current track.

Everything is at peace. Everyone is at peace. All misunderstandings have been cleared out and everyone accepted Guddan in the Jindal family. Dadi accepted her as her Bahu, The daughter - in -laws accepted her as their Saas, The sons accepted her as a second Mother and moreover, Her Jindal-Sahab accepted her as His Wife wholeheartedly. What more could she ask for? Well, for starters, She wanted him to be with her. Akshat Jindal has gone to Pune for a week so Guddan was feeling pretty lonely. He'll only come back tomorrow. Its currently 10 o'clock in the morning now and its been n times since she's missing him. And according to her, She has developed some sort of a strange disease.

Lakshmi (L): What are you saying, sasumaa? Humein kuch bhi samaj nahi aaraha!

Guddan (G): Even I don't understand it Lakshmi-Bahu!

Durga (Du): Guddan - Sasumaa, Basically, you are saying that you are hallucinating AJ everywhere, in Everyone!

G: Exactly!

Saraswathi (S): Aisa bhi hosakta hein?

G: Ho sakta hein, Saru-Bahu! Hum Guddan hein na.... humare saath kuch bhi ho sakta hein!

Du: Baat toh serious hein!

G: Haan.....

L: Oh, toh isliye aap uss din humare paas aarahe the....

Du/S: Matlab?

*Flashback*

It has been 2 days since AJ had left and Guddan was missing him badly. So, to divert her mind, she was in the kitchen,eating.

G: Jindal-Sahab! Come back soon~

"Guddan!"

She gasped and turned around. It was Jindal-sahab.

G: A-aap aagayi?!

Akshat (A): Hum kahan gaya?

G: Aree, aapki meeting thi na?itni jaldi bhoolgayi? ajeeb hein!

A: Meeting?

G: Chaliye woh sab chodiye...

Guddan wrapped her arms around Akshat.

G: Humne aapko bahot miss kiya!

A: H-hum bhi??

G: Kyaa? You sound like you don't!

Guddan still has her arms around him and head rested against his chest.

A: S-saasumaa.... aisa kuch...

G: Aap humein Saas bula rahe hein?

She pulled away and gasped. It was Lakshmi-ji.

G: Lakshmi-Bahu, Aap?

L: Ji Sasumaa......

Just then her phone rang. It was Jindal-sahab. Guddan rushed outwards shouting an apology.

*FlashBack ends*

Guddan was embarrassed as the three daughter - in - laws stared at her. Then,they started laughing.

G: Humara mazak mat uthau. Hum aapki Saas hein. Kuch toh respect doh!

Du: Nahi nahi... Guddan Sasumaa, We're not laughing at you----- hahaha....

G: Durga-ji!

Guddan pouts.

Saraswathi then realised something.

S: Sasumaa, Then what you did yesterday, was also because of this?

G: Yesterday?

S: Jab mein aapko utane aaya tha.....?

Guddan then realised something and blushed.

Du/L: Kya huwa Saru?

Saraswathi was about to tell them when Guddan stopped her.

G: Kuch nahi huwa!

L: Aree kya Sasumaa? Hum aapki dost hein, aur Bahuon bhi! We should know what's happening,right?

Du: Saru,Tum batao.....

Guddan huffed.

Let's go to another Flashback, alright?

*Flashback again*

Saraswathi knocked on Guddan's room but got no answer.

S: Saasumaa is still sleeping? I should wake her up now!

She again knocked a little louder.

S: Sasumaa, I'm coming inside!

With that, Saru got inside. She saw that Guddan was still sleeping.

S: Aree Sasumaa, toh so rahe hein! Sasumaa! Uth jao Subah hogayi!

Guddan just grumbled.

G: Sone dijiye na....

S: Aree Sasumaa, You will be late!

Saraswathi started shaking her.

G: Kya Jindal-sahab!? You didn't let me sleep a few moments ago,and now too! I wanna sleep!

S: (in mind) Par AJ yahan nahi hein! phir..... oh!

AJ is haunting Sasumaa's dreams too~

Saraswathi shook her head. Then started shaking her again.

S: Sasumaa, You will be late! Wake up please!

G: You won't listen to me right? I'll show you!

With that, Guddan pulled Saraswathi towards her on the bed and wrapped her arms around her.

G: Humesha humein pareshaan kartha hein!

Saraswathi didn't even realise what happened as it happened so fast and sudden. When realised what's happening,she struggled.

G: Aree, kya huwa? Aap humse darr gayi?

Guddan was still sleep-Talking.

S: Sasumaa,humein chodiyein! I'm not AJ!

G: Aap phirse humein Sasumaa---- ek minute, Saru-bahu ki awaas.....

S: Haan!

Guddan opened her eyes and was shooked. She screamed and pushed her off her.

S: Sasumaa, why are you screaming? Actually, I should be the one screaming when you literally grabbed me!

G: S-sorry!

Saraswathi laughed.

*Flashback ends again*

The three again started laughing. Guddan was pouting,

G: Haan Haan, Karlo mazak! Humari bhi ek din aayega! tab dekhna, hum hazege!

That's when Dadi decided to make her entry.

Dadi (Da): Aree, Why are you all laughing like this? Aur Guddan aise muh kyu bana rake hein?

L: Dadi, Hum bata----

G: Kuch nahi hein! Ab, Dadi se humara impression mat cheen na!

The Bahus laughed again while Dadi was confused.

Da: Koyi mujhe batadegi ki kya horaha hein?

Du: Dadi, woh Guddan Sasumaa----

G: Durga- Bahu!

Du: Aree nahi nahi, Sasumaa.... Dadi, Guddan- Sasumaa was just telling about her Disease!

Da: Disease? Kya huwa meri bachi ko?

Lakshmi and Saru stifled their laughs and Durga just smiled. They explained it to Dadi. With that, Dadi also started laughing.

G: Maa-ji, aap bhi! Hum yahan bimaar hein,aur aap sab humara mazaak uta rahe hein.

Da: Nahi beta, I'm not making fun of you. Aur tum sab bhi, Meri Bahu ki taang mat kicho!

G: Haan!

Da: Vese, Lalla will come tomorrow and your disease will also go away

Everyone nodded their head and left to their work.

It was night time and the whole Jindal-Bhavan was asleep, except for our Guddan - Sasumaa. She was missing her husband badly and now, she was having a drink of water in the kitchen.

"Guddan!"

"Phirse?" Guddan thought.

She turned around and saw Jindal-Sahab.

A: You didn't sleep? What are you doing here?

G: No, I won't make the mistake again, par aap koun hein?

A: Kya, tum mujhe itne jaldi bhool gayi?

G: Aap Jindal-Sahab ki tarah dikhta hein, lekin woh nahi!

A: Kya? Tum pagal hogayi ho,kya?

G:Hum pagal nahi hein. Jindal-sahab will only come tomorrow! How did you come now? You are my imagination. My disease is coming again?

A: Imagination, Disease? I lost you,Guddan! Anyway,its really me.... My meeting got over early so I came back early. I thought everyone was asleep,so I took the spare key to open the door.

Guddan looked at him hard. He looks real.

G: No no.... For one week,this is happening and the bahus are making fun of me. Now no more.

A: Why are they making fun of you?

Guddan glared at him.

G: Its all your fault!

And explained everything in detail. Including the embarrassing moments and her disease.Akshat started laughing. His Guddan was so cute and adorable. Sometimes, he just wanted to pull her towards him and never let go.

A: Well, it sure looks like you missed me as much as I missed you, maybe even more.....

Akshat then proceeded towards her and lifted her bridal style.That's when Guddan realised.

G: You are real?

A: As real as I can get. But don't believe me now, I'm gonna show you how real I am. I missed you very much.

Guddan blushed and that night their room was filled with moans and groans. Well, looks like Guddan's dream came true and her Disease will be gone poof.

And That's it. My very first One shot! Most probably my longest update.

So how was it? Did you all guys like it? if you did, be sure to like and comment.

See you again next time!Till then, this is Pooh,signing off~ Toodles!🤗

Ps: Sorry for any Grammatical errors or Typos!





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