KalMa FF - ‘ Zindagi,Ab Tum Hi Ho ‘ Part 5A page 36 (5/26) - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

312

Views

63787

Users

34

Likes

426

Frequent Posters

Sakshi_04 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hello guys I am back with the little tiny mini teaser of Part 4 of my FF.


I know I am again late in posting my update but what to do I am still working on the ending of this part. So as soon as I will finish up writing it will be posted.


I thank you all from the bottom of my heart for all of your patience.


So here you go guys..Happy reading..😊


Teaser Part 4:


Malhar woke up early in the morning and got ready.


Finally he found Kalyani’s whereabouts and is going to get his wife back in his life again .


Malhar in his mind :


Malhar - Main jaa kar bolunga kya Kalyani se?

Aur kya woh meri baat maan jaayegi?


Malhar rings the doorbell of Kalyani ‘s apartment in Pune.


Kalyani opened the door.


Kalyani - Malharji aap?


Malhar - Kalyani.. Sorry.


Kalyani - Aap yahaan se chale jaaiye mujhe aap ki koi baat nahi sun ni hai. Pehle gussa karte hai aur phir sorry kehte hai.

Aisa jaise kisi ka murder kar do aur baad mein use sorry keh do ki bhai galti se tumhara murder ho gaya I am sorry.


Malhar - Kalyani suno toh.. main keh..meri ba..


Kalyani - Maine kaha naah aapse mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai. Aap please chale jaaiye yahaan se.Bye.


And she slammed the door on his face.


———————— Thank You ————————-


All of your appreciation made my day and it is motivating me to write even more better.


Thank you so much all for your patience and I thoroughly apologize to keep you guys waiting.. 😊🙏


Again thank you all so much for liking n loving my story.😊


And thank you so much for your likes and comments as your words motivate me to write better and brings out a better creative person out of me..


Do shower your love again and again and keeps on motivating me with lots of likes and share your views in comments.😊


Love you all 😍❤️ 

Darshi.

omg!!!!

Bacillusbadius thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Di it's ok

we will wait 

you first get well

your health is most important 

FF to hum baad mein bhi padh sakte hai

aap apna khayal rakhna

Get Well Soon!❤️

Dk26 thumbnail
Anniversary 4 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hello friends..


I am really apologizing for not coming online and not updating my FF. 

I was not keeping well in the past few days..

I am recovering so will be there online soon.

I would like to thank each and everyone of you for appreciation, motivation and support.

I wish to be back with a bang. 

Writing of the Part 4 is done. Hopefully I wish to edit it today n post it soon. 

I also want to apologize to all the writers on the forum that I was not able to read their work and comment onit. I will definitely comment whenever I get a chance.

Thank you all so much for your patience.

Will be back soon as soon as I feel better.

I really apologize for the delay..


Thank you all..


Love..


Darshi..

Don't say sorry di

Update whenever you feel good 

And i miss you very much di

Take kare 

asmitasb thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Hello friends..


I am really apologizing for not coming online and not updating my FF. 

I was not keeping well in the past few days..

I am recovering so will be there online soon.

I would like to thank each and everyone of you for appreciation, motivation and support.

I wish to be back with a bang. 

Writing of the Part 4 is done. Hopefully I wish to edit it today n post it soon. 

I also want to apologize to all the writers on the forum that I was not able to read their work and comment onit. I will definitely comment whenever I get a chance.

Thank you all so much for your patience.

Will be back soon as soon as I feel better.

I really apologize for the delay..


Thank you all..


Love..


Darshi..

No probes dear. Get well soon...Take rest.

KrishnaSourav thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

its ok Darshi tc n get well soon

will wait for u... 🤗

Srilata.Mineil thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Get well soon darshi... Take care... 

Come back with a bang anupriya ji... Sarthak is waiting... 🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

Kaash aisa much show Mai ho jaaye. It's realistic. Kitna jhelegi kalyani malhar ka gussa. Even in the show they've shown how much she craves his praise and affection and his approval coz she adores , respects and loves(even though she doesn't know it yet!) him so much. Malhar needs to realize that she  can only take so much! Maybe with the current track on the show also, things will make him see that even though he realised his mistakes and knows the truth now n he genuinely cares for her, that needs to come through to her in his words and actions. Sab much man ke andar or dream sequence main nahi hona chahiye ! 

Anyway I look forward to your update eagerly. Hope you're feeling better now. 

dusk2dawn thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you all for your well wishes. I am doing better now and prepping to post the update now. Part 4 will be up today.😊

Thank you all of you again .🤗

dusk2dawn thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Hello friends.. I am back with the Part 4 of my FF.😎

I am really apologizing for the delay in updating.🙏

Thank you all so much for your well wishes.I am doing and feeling better.🤗😊


I would like to thank each and everyone of you for appreciation, motivation and support.🤗😁😊


Firstly, Writing of the Part 4 took a lot of time. Secondly,because the update is longer editing and proof reading took even more time. N writing on phone comes with its own part and parcel.

Editing takes so much time. And while editing an additional scene popped up so written it.🤔


Hope you all enjoy this part. Here you go guys.


Happy Reading.😊



Part 4:


Malhar woke up early in the morning and got ready .

Finally he found Kalyani’s whereabouts and is going to get his wife back in his life again .

After he got ready he heard knock on his bedroom door.

It was Anupriya his maai at the door with a cup of tea in her hand.


Malhar - Arey maai aap?? Aaiye Na andar.


Anupriya - Woh Malhar chai layi thi tumhare liye.


Malhar - Ji,maai idhar rakh dijiye. Maai main aap hi ke paas aane wala tha.


Anupriya - Mere paas? Kya hua malhar kuch kaam tha kya?


Malhar - Arey nahi maai par aap ko ek good news deni thi.


Anupriya - Good news maane Khush khabri?


Malhar - Haan maai, wohi. Kalyani ka pata chal gaya hai. Woh Pune mein apne purane ghar par hai.


Anupriya - Kya? Sach ? Yeh to bahut hi acchhi khabar hai Malhar.


Malhar - Maai aapse maine vaada kiya hai naah ki Kalyani ko main aaj ghar waapas le kar aaunga.

Moksh kahaan hai maai. Woh thik se so gaya tha raat ko? Aapko pareshaan to nahi kiya naah usne?


Anupriya - Nahi Malhar, Moksh kal raat ko aaram se so gaya tha aur bilkul bhi pareshaan nahi kiya.


Malhar - Moksh uth gaya ya nahi??


Anupriya - Moksh uth gaya hai aur Saarthak ji ke saath khel raha hai..


Malhar - Thik hai maai. Maai mujhe aapse kuch puchhna (ask) tha.


Anupriya - Haan bolo Malhar kya puchhna  (ask) hai tumhe?


Malhar - Woh maai main yeh puchhna chaah raha tha ki kya aap bhi chalengi mere saath Pune Kalyani ko waapas laane (bring back) ke liye?


Anupriya was stunned to hear this. She thought to decline it because she doesn’t want to be the reason for Kalyani’s anger on Malhar and think that Anupriya has broken the promise and notified Malhar about her location. She thought to make a plausible excuse to not to go with Malhar to bring back Kalyani.


Anupriya - Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Malhar? Main aise kaise?? Main aayi tumhare saath aur Kalyani aur zyaada naaraz ho gayi toh?


Malhar - Woh aapse kyun naaraz hogi maai?


Anupriya - Malhar woh sochegi ki maine sab kuch jaante huye bhi tumhara paksh(side) liya hai. Aur woh aur bhi zyaada naaraz ho jaayegi.

Isse acchha hai tumhe akele hi jaana chaahiye Malhar. Aur chaahe to Moksh ko bhi apne saath le kar jaao.


As they were talking Saarthak kaka has entered the room with Moksh.


Saarthak - Anupriya ji bilkul sahi keh rahi hai Malhar.

Anupriya ji, shaayad Moksh ko fresh hona hai aur use bhukh bhi lagi hai.


Anupriya - Laaiye mujhe de dijiye main abhi usko taiyaar kar deti hoon aur dudh bhi pila deti hoon.


Anupriya left the room with Moksh. She went to get him ready for the journey to Pune to meet his beloved aai Kalyani.


Malhar - Kaka maai nahi to aap chaliye na mere saath..


Saarthak - Malhar tum kaisi baccho jaisi baatein kar rahe ho jaise tum apni teacher ya school principal se milne jaa rahe ho aur tumhe kisi bade ko saath laane ke liye kaha gaya hai.

Tum Kalyani yaani ki tumhari patni ko ghar waapas laane ke liye jaa rahe ho.

Aur waise bhi yeh tum dono pati-patni ki aapas ki baat hai toh ise suljhana (sort out) bhi tum dono ko hi padega. Usme main aur Anupriya ji kuch nahi kar sakte.


Malhar - Kaka aap bhi naah. Main akele aise kaise? Aur kya muh lekar jaaon wahaan Kalyani ke paas?


Saarthak - Arey aise kaise matlab? Galti tumhari thi, tumne us par bina wajah (without any reason) gussa kiya aur woh ghar chhod ke chali gayi, toh tum hi jaaoge naah use waapas laane? Aur kya muh lekar matlab? Tumhara khud ka muh lekar tum jaaoge aur isi muh se use Sorry bhi kahoge aur maafi bhi maango ge.. Samjhe ??


Malhar - Par Kaka Sorry bolna zaroori hai kya? 


Saarthak (in angry tone) - Malhar..


Hearing Saarthak ‘s angry tone Malhar immediately holds both his earlobes with his hands and apologized.


Malhar - Sorry kaka. 


Saarthak - Bas abhi jaise mujhe Sorry kaha waise hi Kalyani ko bhi Sorry bolna hai tumhe.


Malhar - Thik hai kaka. Jaisa aap kahe .Par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main use manaunga kaise?? Mujhe kisi ko manana nahi aata.. Main kya baat karunga Kalyani se?


Saarthak - Malhar yeh tum kaisi betuki (useless/baseless) baatein kar rahe ho?? Kalyani se tumhe maafi maangni hai aur use ghar wapas aane ke liye request karni hai. Isme kaunsi badi baat hai??


Malhar - Par kaka wohi toh samajh mein nahi aa raha ki kaise aur kahaan se baat shuru karu?


Saarthak - Tum sirf sorry keh dena pehle uske baad Kalyani ka jo bhi jawab ho uske hisaab se baat kar lena. Yehi thik rahega tumhare liye.


Malhar was pacing up n down in the room.


Malhar - Thik hai kaka main pehle Kalyani ko sorry bol dunga uske baad woh jo kahegi uske hisab (according) se main usse baat kar lunga..

Haan ,kar lunga baat.

(In his mind) Par kya baat karunga Kalyani se?


Saarthak - Malhar aise gol gol ghumne se to Kalyani wapas nahi aayegi naah tumhe abhi Pune bhi jaana hai use laane ke liye.

Aur meri ek baat dhyaan se sunn lo Malhar, khabardaar jo tumne aaj phir se Kalyani par gussa kiya ya chillaaye. 

Main puchhunga Kalyani se agar tumne aisa bartaav (behave) kiya to samajh lena aaj se main tumhara kaka nahi.. Humara kaka-bhatije ka rishta khatam.


Malhar - Kaka yeh aap kya keh rahe hai.?

Main aur Kalyani par gussa?


Saarthak - Tum sirf Kalyani par hi toh gussa karte firte ho Malhar aur kaun hai yahaan jispe tum apna gussa nikalte ho? Woh kya tumhari punching bag hai kya? Main tumhe aaj pehli aur aakhri baar keh raha hoon ki agar tumne aage se uss pyaari si ladki par bina wajah gussa kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga..


Malhar with his hands in the air surrendered to what Saarthak kaka has said to him.


Malhar - Thik hai kaka main vaada karta hoon aage se Kalyani pe kabhi bhi bina wajah gussa nahi karunga. Aur agar kisi wajah se gussa aa gaya toh turant usse maafi bhi maang lunga..


Saarthak - Yeh huyi naah baat,Malhar.. Chalo ab baatein hi karte rahoge ya Kalyani ke paas jaane ke liye yahaan se nikloge bhi?

Aur haan Moksh ko saath mein le jaana shaayad uski wajah se Kalyani tumhe jaldi maaf kar de..(n started laughing).


Malhar (makes a baby face)- Kaka aap bhi naah.


Saarthak - Main kya Malhar? Sach hi toh keh raha hoon. Moksh hi hai jo tumhe Kalyani ke gusse aur saza se bacha sakta hai.


Malhar - Kaka yeh baat sach hai ki main Moksh ko apne saath le jaa raha hoon par iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki main Kalyani ki naraazgi, gusse ya saza se bachne ke liye use le jaa raha hoon. Main use isliye le jaa raha hoon kyunki Kalyani kabhi Moksh ke bina akele nahi rahi hai toh main samajh sakta hoon ki woh kya mehsus kar rahi hogi is waqt.


Saarthak - Shaayad tum sahi keh rahe ho. Ek maa ka apne bacche se door hona uske liye ek bahut badi saza hai. Jaise is waqt Anupriya ji bhi shaayad mehsus kar rahi hongi kyunki Kalyani bhi unse door hai.


Malhar - Yeh sab meri galti hai aur aaj main use hi sudhaarne ke liye jaa raha hoon. Aur maai se maine vaada bhi kiya hai ki aaj chaahe kuch bhi ho main Kalyani ko ghar wapas laa kar rahunga.


Saarthak - Hum sab tumhare saath hai Malhar, le aao Kalyani ko waapas apne ghar aur apne parivaar ke paas.


Malhar was determined to bring his wife his lady back in his life and his home.


Malhar - Aap chinta mat kijiye kaka, aaj shaam ko hum sab saath mein dinner karenge.


Saarthak - Yeh huyi naah baat , jaao mere sher, mere Aurangabad ke singham jaa kar le kar aao apni sherni ko.


Saarthak kaka pats Malhar’s back n after hearing his last lines Malhar felt shy and he blushed a little.


Saarthak - Chalo Malhar ab baato mein waqt barbaad (time pass) mat karo aur jaao.


Malhar - Haan kaka main Moksh ke taiyaar hone ki raah dekh raha hoon.


Malhar got call from his PS.


Malhar - Haan Pawar tum aur Rao civil dress mein yahaan aa jao phir hum saath mein nikalte hai Pune jaane ke liye. Main tum dono ka hi intezaar kar raha hoon.

Haan, ho sake utna jaldi.


Malhar cuts the call and came out of his room and searched for Anupriya.


Malhar - Maai, Moksh taiyaar ho gaya?


Anupriya - Haan, Malhar bas abhi dudh pi raha hai bas thodi der.


Malhar - Thik hai maai.


Malhar was waiting for Moksh to get ready and he got call from Pawar his assistant who is going to travel with him.


Malhar - Haan Pawar bolo.


Pawar - Jai Hind Sir, main aur Rao aapka ghar ke baahar intezaar kar rahe hai.


Malhar - Haan Pawar main abhi thodi der mein aata hoon.


Pawar - Thik hai sir.


Moksh got ready so Anupriya put him in his baby carrier and handed him to Malhar.


Anupriya - Malhar, Moksh taiyaar ho gaya hai.


Malhar - Arey mera baccha taiyaar ho gaya. Abhi hum bahaar jaayenge tumhari aai mera matlab hai tumhari Kalyani ke paas.


Hearing his loving aai Kalyani’s name Moksh gets happy and giggles.


Saarthak - Dekha Malhar sirf Kalyani ka naam sunn ke hi Moksh kitna khush hai..


Malhar - Haan kaka, sahi kaha aapne.


Malhar was about to leave then Anupriya stopped him.


Anupriya - Arey Malhar suno yeh Moksh ka saara zaroori saaman aur feed pack kar diya hai iss bag mein.

Aur Malhar acchhe kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh yeh dahi shakkar khaa kar jao. Acchha Shagun hota hai.


Malhar - Ji maai. 


Malhar had dahi shakkar then took everyone’s blessings and left for the ride to Pune where his Kalyani was.


Malhar came out of the AN and Pawar and Rao salute him. He salutes them back.


Malhar - Pawar, Rao chalo jeep mein baitho.


Pawar and Rao- Ji sir.


Malhar handed Moksh’s baby carrier to Pawar who was sitting beside him, started his Jeep , his red beast and they were on the way to his ultimate destination Kalyani..


Malhar was driving and thinking in his mind different ways to apologize to Kalyani.

That how he will apologize and what he will say.


Malhar in his mind :


Malhar - Main jaa ke bolunga kya Kalyani se?

Aur kya woh meri baat maan jaayegi?

Waise toh meri koi bhi baat sunti ya maanti to hai nahi.

Par iss baar galti meri hai toh mujhe uski patar patar sun ni padegi, hey bhagwan, kitna bolti hai yeh ladki.


He gritted his teeth n then again his thoughts were started running.


Malhar (in his mind) - Shaant Malhar, aaj tumhe Kalyani ke saath shanti se kaam lena padega. Agar phirse gussa kiya uspe toh woh phir naaraz ho jaayegi.

Aur agar kaka ko pata chala ki maine Kalyani pe gussa kiya toh kaka meri class lagayenge alag se.

Kya karu, kaise manau Kalyani ko.

Yeh kaka bhi naah agar saath chalte toh kaunsa bada pahaad tut padna tha, at least mera moral support toh bana rehta.


Kya pata Kalyani kaise react karegi mujhe dekh kar.


Malhar imagines himself ringing doorbell of Kalyani ‘s apartment in Pune.

Kalyani opened the door.


Kalyani - Malharji aap?


Malhar - Kalyani.. Sorry.


Kalyani - Aap yahaan se chale jaaiye mujhe aap ki koi baat nahi sun ni hai. Pehle gussa karte hai aur phir sorry kehte hai.

Aisa jaise kisi ka murder kar do aur baad mein use sorry keh do ki bhai galti se tumhara murder ho gaya I am sorry.


Malhar - Kalyani suno toh.. main keh..meri ba..


Kalyani - Maine kaha naah aapse mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai. Aap please chale jaaiye yahaan se.Bye.


And she slammed the door on his face.


Malhar came out of his imagination with the cooing of Moksh. Again he starts thinking.


Malhar (in his mind)- Agar sach mein aisa hua toh?? Nahi main aisa risk nahi le sakta. Main direct Kalyani ke saamne nahi jaunga. Agar usne wapas chalne se mana kar diya toh??

Main maai, Aao saheb aur kaka ko kya muh dikhaunga??

Kaka toh mujhe ghar mein hi ghusne nahi denge..

Aur Kalyani ko bhi kya zarurat thi aise ghar chhod ke jaane ki??


He again calmed down his anger.


Malhar (in his mind) - Dimaag shaant rakhna padega aur shaanti se kaam lena padega.

His inner voice told him.

Shaant Malhar Rane, iss baar apne gusse par kaabu rakhna hoga tumhe..


Malhar came out of his thoughts when he heard Pawar addressing him.


Pawar - Sir., sir,.


Malhar - Haan kaho Pawar kuch keh rahe the tum? Sorry mera dhyaan nahi tha.


Pawar - Sir, Kalyani madam ka pata toh chal gaya. Toh aap mujhe aur Rao ko Pune kyun le jaa rahe hai?


Malhar - Pawar ,Pune hum Kalyani ko milne nahi jaa rahe . Hum ek important case ke liye jaa rahe hai. Tum aur Rao headquarter jaaoge aur wahaan tumhe inspector Gaikwad aur inspecter Kadam milenge aur woh ek important case ke related files denge aur tum aur Rao inspector Kadam ke saath waapas Aurangabad aa jana.

Inspector Kadam kal humaare saath meeting mein humein case ke baare mein briefing denge.


Pawar - Aur aap sir?


Malhar - Meri unse baat ho gayi hai aaj mera headquarter aana zaroori nahi hai. Kal meeting mein baki ki details discuss hogi.


Pawar - Thik hai sir.


They were almost reached Pune. 

Malhar dropped Pawar and Rao to police headquarters. And left to go to Kalyani . 

Malhar got really excited as he is going to see her face after a day a whole day..

It seems like for him these last 24 hours of his life were like years.


Malhar - Moksh abhi hum teri aai ko lene jaa rahe hai.. Ab to tu khush hai na beta?

Ale ab to mera Moksh apni aai ke paas jaayega . Tu bolega naah apni aai ko ki baba ki galti maaf kar de iss baar. Ab se baba bina koi wajah Kalyani par gussa nahi karenge. Tu bolega naah usko.


To this Moksh replies with his giggles.


This was one of the very few times Malhar used to pour his heart to his little bundle of joy mostly Kalyani is the one who talks to Moksh and finds solace in him.

Malhar knew Moksh doesn’t understand his words but he understands his emotions.


Malhar reached to Kalyani‘s old house’s apartment building. He parked his jeep in the parking lot and took Moksh in his baby carrier and get inside the lift. He reached the floor where Kalyani’s old apartment was and hesitant to ring the door bell.


Malhar (in low tone) - Moksh tere baba ko aaj Kalyani ka saamna karne ke liye himmat ki zaroorat hai. 


To which Moksh smiles n put his hand on his baba’s chest near heart as saying don’t worry baba all the best and go ahead ..


Malhar - Thank you Moksh , par aaj agar mujhe dekh kar Kalyani ne darwaza bandh kar diya toh kya hoga? Soch Malhar Rane soch koi idea soch.


Malhar thinks of an idea and try to implement it. He looks at Moksh and talks to him in low tone.


Malhar - Moksh beta aaj tu hi hai jo apne baba ka idea successful karva sakta hai. Sab tujhpe depend hai aaj.


To which Moksh replies with his cute smile.


Malhar puts Moksh ‘s baby carrier at the door , rings the door bell and hides behind the nearest staircase.


Kalyani was in the bedroom lying on the bed thought who would be there at this time?


Kalyani - Yeh door bell kisne bajaayi? Abhi iss waqt kaun ho sakta hai?? Jaa nahi kholna door. Umm.., dekhu to sahi kaun hai pata toh chale? Shaayad saamne wali aunty ho ya kachrewala ho ya to koi salesman/ woman ho ya phir zaroor morning shift wala watchman hoga. Pata karne ke liye ki yahaan kaun hai.


She gets up to open the door n thought again.


Kalyani - Aaram se Kalyani kya pata kaun ho koi ajnabi ghar mein ghus ke tujhe kidnap karne aaya hoga toh? Akeli ladki samajh ke koi faayda utha ne aaya ho toh?

Woh filmo mein hota hai naah waise chor ghus aate hai aur sabko chaku ki nok par bandi bana lete hai .

Waise bhi meri favorite film ‘Jab we met’ ka dialogue hai naah ki ‘Akeli ladki khuli tijori ki tarah hoti hai..’


Many bad thoughts crossed her mind.


Here Malhar was waiting that why Kalyani hasn’t opened the door yet so he went to door and again rings the doorbell and hides behind the staircase.


Kalyani came out of her thoughts when she heard the second doorbell.


Kalyani - Itni der se maine darwaza nahi khola toh bhi dobara doorbell baji matlab yeh jo bhi koi hai woh kisi kaam se aaya lagta hai phir bhi dhyaan se Kalyani.


She was afraid to open the door but again something gave her courage.


Kalyani - Kalyani tu tu darr kyun rahi hai. Kalyani tu Aurangabad ke singham ACP Malhar Rane ki patni hai aise daregi toh kaise chalega?? Himmat rakh aur savdhani se aage badh. Yaad rakh savdhani hati durghatna ghati. Aise koi mujhe haath toh lagaye karate mein brown belt hoon main. Meri ek kick se hi woh dher ho jaayega. 


She smirked and found a stick lying nearby in the room so she picked it up and moved forward to open the door.


She firstly just looked through the corner of slight opening of the door n her eyes got widened and sparkled after what she saw. 

She opened the door and threw the stick away. Tears of happiness started rolling from her eyes. She couldn’t believe her eyes what she saw. She choked and she couldn’t speak just one word came out of her mouth.


Kalyani - Pillu.


She went towards her bundle of joy Pillu and picked him up in her arms. She kissed him and hugged her little boy like she is seeing him after so long. She caress Pillu’s face.


Kalyani - Pillu mera baccha kaisa hai tu huh?

Tujhe meri bahut yaad aayi hogi naah.

I am sorry Pillu. I am really sorry Pillu . Tu apni Kalyani ko maaf kar dega naah.? Aaj ke baad main tujhe kabhi akela chhod kar kahin nahi jaaungi.

Waise Pillu ek baat bata tujhe yahaan laya kaun aur kaun chhod ke gaya tujhe?


There Malhar was watching their reunion from distance he too was emotional after seeing his family.. The two people who became the most important part of his life. His little son and his wife. A happy smile was there on his face as he was seeing his lady almost after 24 hours.


Kalyani saw him. Malhar walked towards them. He came near them and Kalyani turned her face from him. 


Malhar - Kalyani.


Kalyani - Dekhiye Malhar ji.


Malhar - Kalyani please meri baat suno.


Kalyani - Kyun sunu main aapki baat huh? Kyun sunu?? Aapne aaj tak meri kaunsi baat suni hai?


Malhar - Kalyani meri baat ek baar sunn toh lo.


Kalyani - Mujhe aapki koi bhi baat sun ne mein interest nahi hai Malhar ji.


Malhar - Dekho Kalyani sorry. Ab yahaan darwaze par khade khade hi saari baat karenge kya?? Andar chal kar baat karein?


Kalyani - Hmmm.


Malhar walked inside with Kalyani and closed the door behind . He doesn’t want to create any sort of scene outside in the corridor if any of them loses their mind or gets angry. Kalyani was still pissed and angry over Malhar’s behavior towards her the day before.


Malhar tried to speak up. But before he could Kalyani started her outburst.


Kalyani - Dekhiye Malhar ji agar kal jo hua uske liye sorry bolna aap ke liye itna mushkil hai to koi zaroorat nahi hai bolne ki. Waise bhi kya zaroorat hai aapko sorry bolne ki?? Aap ke hisaab se toh saari galti meri hi thi na to main hi bol deti hoon aapko sorry. 


Malhar was stunned by Kalyani’s outburst. He understood that how his words had hurt Kalyani.


Malhar - Dekho Kalyani meri baat Suno.


Kalyani - Haan aapki baat.. Main hi to sunn rahi hoon aapki har baat. Aapne kabhi meri koi baat sun ne ki koshish bhi ki kabhi?


Malhar - Kalyani please mujhe maaf kar do. Kal jo kuch bhi hua usme saari galti meri thi. Main gusse mein tumhe naa jaane kya kya keh gaya jo mujhe nahi kehna chaahiye tha. Mujhe jab pata chala ki yeh sab aatya ne kiya hai tab tak tum ghar chhod kar chali gayi thi Kalyani. I am really sorry Kalyani please ghar waapas chalo. 



Malhar - Kalyani I am sorry. Mujhe maaf kar do please. Dekho Kalyani tum mujhe maaf karo ya na karo par please ghar chalo.


Kalyani - Kyun chalu main?? Aap hi ne to kaha tha na mujhe apni life se jaane ke liye..


Malhar - Uss baat ke liye main abhi bhi pachhta raha hoon Kalyani. Uss baat ke liye mujhe please maaf kar do. Main jaanta hoon ki uss baat ne tumhe bahut hurt kiya hai.


Kalyani - Hurt?? Aapko kya fark padta hai Malhar ji mere hurt hone se?


Hearing this Malhar felt pain inside his heart because his words had pierced Kalyani’s heart and shattered her emotions.Malhar was feeling so guilty to hurt a beautiful soul like Kalyani, he fell on his knees in front of Kalyani asking for her forgiveness.


Malhar (with moist eyes) - Kalyani main jaanta hoon ki meri baaton ne tumhe kitna hurt kiya hai. Aur tum yeh kehti ho ke mujhe koi fark nahi padta?? Agar mujhe koi fark nahi padta Kalyani toh main dar-ba-dar (everywhere) tumhe paagalo ki tarah nahi dhundh raha hota. Tumhe pata hai Kalyani mere dimaag mein kaise kaise bure khayaal aa rahe the?? Yeh meri galti thi Kalyani ki main gusse mein tumhe na jaane kya kya keh gaya. Meri galti ki saza tum apne aap ko kyun de rahi ho Kalyani? 

Meri iss galti ke liye tumhari berukhi, naraazgi aur jo bhi saza tum dena chaaho sab manzoor hai mujhe.


Malhar - Kalyani , main galat tha jab maine tumse kaha tha naah ki tum chali jaao, abhi main hi keh raha hoon please meri aur Moksh ki zindagi mein wapas aa jao. Please.

Please ghar chalo. Wahaan maai, kaka. Aao Saheb aur sab gharwale tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai.


Kalyani was awestruck that what she has witnessed. She has never saw malhar breaks down like this that too in front of her in all his senses.(last time it was inebriated state.)


Seeing Malhar on his knees before her, solemnly apologizing, and in tears made Kalyani's heart melt finally. But, she smiled inwardly; deciding to give him some more hard time.


Kalyani was still angry on Malhar and this time she was adamant to teach him a lesson about what he did. But she thought this is not the right time she will work on her secret plan with her secret keeper at home. If she will refuse to Malhar’s request then she won’t be able to go back to her home n be with her aai and Pillu.


Kalyani - Malharji, uthiye...


Malhar - Kya?


Kalyani - Maine kaha, khade hoiye...


Malhar stood on his feet.


Kalyani - Aapko maaf karne ka dil toh nahi hai mera. Aapke saath ghar waapas jaane ka bhi dil nahi hai. Par Pillu ko meri zarurat hai. Usko main aap se alag nahi kar sakti. Itni patthar dil main hoon nahi. Aur Aai meri fikar mein pata nahi kis halat mein hongi. Isliye main ghar toh chalungi aapke saath, lekin kisi galat fehmi mein mat rahiyega. Maine aapko puri tarah se maaf nahi kiya hai.


Malhar heaved a sigh of relief. At least one level of the difficulty is crossed. Kalyani has agreed to come with him. He will convince her eventually.


Finally Kalyani has agreed to go back to Aurangabad with Malhar. She took her darling Pillu in her lap and sits beside Malhar in his jeep.


None of them uttered a single word on their way back to home. Both were take a glance of each other by the corner of their eyes. 


Kalyani (in her mind) - Huh, khud ko samajhte kya hai Malhar ji.. Inka naam Malhar Rane nahi Khadus Rane hona chaayiye tha..


Moksh was hugry so started being cranky. 


Kalyani - Arey Pillu kya hua tujhe?? Tujhe bhukh lagi hai ?? Haan. Mele Pillu ko bhukhi lagi hai aur baba ne dhyaan bhi nahi diya.. Hain naah.. She looked at Malhar with corner of her eyes and scrunched her lips.


Kalyani - Huh.😏


Malhar got irritated by Kalyani’s words but he has to keep calm and he controlled his anger n try to be as calm as possible.


Malhar (in calm tone) - Dekho Kalyani, mujhe kaise pata ki use bhukh lagi hai? Moksh subah ghar se dudh pee kar nikla tha. Aur maayi ne uski feed bottles uss bag mein rakhi hai.


But Kalyani was in no mood to listen to him.


Kalyani - Malhar ji, jab aap ko kuch pata hota nahi hai toh bolte kyun hai?? Subah dudh piya tha Moksh ne aur abhi almost dopahar (noon) hone aayi hai. Bechare bacche ko bhukh toh lagegi naah. Aapki tarah thodi naah? 


And she stopped because she doesn’t want to start an argument with Malhar. She got Moksh’s feed from the bag and started feeding him.


Malhar understood that Kalyani herself is hungry but she won’t tell him because she is still annoyed with him. So he spotted a dhaba nearby on the highway and drive in that direction.


Malhar stops at a dhaba for both to eat. He got down from the jeep.


Malhar - Utro Kalyani.


Kalyani - Huh.. Kyun?


Malhar - Kalyani tumhe bhukh nahi lagi??


Kalyani was dumbstruck by Malhar’s sudden question.


Kalyani (in her mind) - Abhi inhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe bhukh lagi hai? Agar bataaya toh gussa karenge. Aur agar Malhar ji ne mujh par phir se gussa kiya toh mujhe aur gussa aayega.. Kya karu??


Kalyani - Huh.. umm.. nahi.


Malhar - Mujhe toh bahut bhukh lagi hai. By saying this he puts his hand on his stomach and shows hunger sign to Kalyani.


Malhar - Itna soch kya rahi ho Kalyani. Chalo utro. Hum yahaan lunch kar ke phir ghar jaayenge.


Kalyani has no choice but to follow him.


He asked her to order. She ordered and Malhar asked the waiter to bring that for both of them. Kalyani was surprised to see this side of Malhar.


They both eat the food they have ordered. Malhar paid the bill and they got on the jeep on their way back home. 


Kalyani wanted to know , so she finally curiously asks him how he got to know her whereabouts.


Kalyani - Waise Malhar ji ,aapko kaise pata chala ki main yahaan hoon? 


Malhar - Kalyani tum bhul rahi ho ki Main ACP hoon. Tumhe dhundhne ke liye Maine apni team har uss jagah tainaat ki thi jahaan maine socha ki tum shaayad jaa sakti ho. Phir mujhe khayaal aaya ki tum kahin nahi mili toh tum sirf ek hi jagah ho sakti ho Pune, apne puraane ghar par.


Kalyani was impressed by Malhar’s effort to find her. She thought in her mind.


Kalyani (in her mind) - Kalyani itni aasani se tu Malhar ji ko kaise maaf kar sakti hai? Tujhe abhi unko sabak sikhana hai ki woh dobaara tujh par bina wajah aisa faltu ka gussa karne ka soch bhi na sake. Sambhal jaa Kalyani. Malhar ji se itna impress hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Aapne jo kiya hai uski sazaa toh aapko milegi Malhar ji.


And a cute devilish smile 😈was playing on her lips. Malhar was looking at the smile on her face and saw her lost in the thoughts he waved his hand in front of her eyes.


Malhar - Kalyani.. Kalyani kahaan kho gayi?? Kya soch rahi ho?


Kalyani came out of her thoughts by Malhar’s sudden question.


Kalyani - Hmm?? 


She nodded her head in negation signaling Malhar as she was thinking nothing. But in her mind she was making plans to how to teach a lesson to Malhar Rane in Kalyani Rane style..😄


He smiled and asked her.


Malhar - Toh ab hum chalein apne ghar?


Kalyani nodded her head in affirmation.

Pillu was smiling showing his two tiny teeth that finally his beloved aai agreed to his baba’s pleadings and returning back home. 

Malhar was thinking the different ways to fully manaofy his wifey 😉

 i.e Kalyani ko manaane ke tarike.😅 😉 (Precap)



—————————Thank You————————-



Thank you so much all for your patience and I thoroughly apologize to keep you guys waiting for long.. 😊🙏


Again shoutout to all the silent readers and thank you from the bottom of my heart for liking and loving my story. Thank you again and again ..🥰❤️


Again I beg your pardon if there are any typos or grammatical errors as I solely type on my phone. 


Do comment and let me know if there are any loopholes in this part because I was almost disconnected with the story as my sickness wiped off all the ideas.🤦‍♀️


Please do comment your views on the story. Your appreciation keeps on

Motivating me to make my writing better that connects with you all.😊🤗


Do shower your love with lots of likes and comments.😊


Thank you.😊 


Love you all 😍❤️ 

Darshi.

Edited by dusk2dawn - 4 years ago
KrishnaSourav thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

How r u now Darshi ?

Missing u....

loved how u make malhar pay back for his deed...He need to control his anger n more his mouth...

He betrayed cheated from Sampada but that doesn't mean he can shower his all anger frustration on Kalyani

finally malhar went to meet Kalyani n make her agree to come back well obviously loved that kalyani giving him the tough time

he deserves it

waiting for more 

Edited by KrishnaSourav - 4 years ago