AkshAn OS: Narazgi

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Guddan got ready to marry Harish without even protesting as she doesn't have any choice. Akshat tried to stop her but she just told him that it's her life as she can do whatever she want just like he was getting married to Antara as per his choice. Durga & Laxmi tried stopping Guddan but she didn't listened to them. As the daughter-in-law's can't stopped the wedding she locked them up in storeroom including Sarawati until the wedding was completed. She was sitting in front of mirror looking at her reflection when she gets a call, it was Antara. She picked up.

A:Very good Guddan tum issh shaadi kay liye maan gayi jaise tumne apna waada nibhaya mein bhi waada karti hun ki Akshat aur uske pure parivar ko zinda chod dungi.. apni dusri shaadi ke liye congratulations

Saying this she cuts the call. Guddan controls her tears.

G:Nehi Guddan tujhe apne aap ko sambhal nahi hoga tu jo bhi kar rahi hai woh Jindal Saab aur pure parivar ke jaan bachane ke liya kar rahi hai

She gets up & goes downstairs where Pandit & Harish was already waiting. She sat beside the groom & the Pandit started the rituals. Guddan noticed that the Harish was having beard.

G(in mind):Issh budhe ki achanak daari kahan se agayi pehle toh nehi thi hosakta hai humne notice nehi kiya ho

Guddan doesn't thinks about it much & focuses on rituals. It was time for pheras when both of stood up & Guddan then noticed his height.

G(in mind):Nehi yeh woh budha nehi hai

Just then she noticed something & was shocked. As he was about to step forward Guddan stopped her. She went towards him & took his right hand & showed him.

G:Yeh angoothi toh Jindal Saab ki hai apke pas kaise

The man was unable to answer. Guddan left his hand & looked at his face. She removed the beard from his face & was stunned to find Akshat.

G:Jindal Saab aap

Akshat finally faced her fully.

AJ:Haan mein

G:Yeh sab kya natak hai aur Harish ji kahan hai

AJ:Jahan hona chahiye jail mein

Guddan was shocked. He holds her both shoulders.

AJ:Mujhe Antara ki sachai pata chal gayi hai

FLASHBACK

After Akshat angrily left Jindal House after arguing with Guddan, he went to Gupta House. As he was entering he saw Saraswati going towards backward of the house. He followed her & saw Antara waiting for her. He hides & started hearing their conversation.

S:Wah kamal hai Antara ji lathi bhi nehi tooti aur shanp bhi margaya.. property bhi milgayi apko aur AJ bhi

A:Sahi Kahan Saru bahu aur maza ki baat yeh hai uss Guddan ne khud mere hathon mein yeh sab soupa hai aur Akshat ko bhi yehi lagta hai ki Guddan meri jaan ke piche pari hai

Akshat was shocked hearing this.

A:Bash ekbar Guddan uss budhe se shaadi karle phir woh humesha ke liye Akshat ki zindagi aur property se out aur mein in

AJ(in mind):Iska matlab Guddan yeh shaadi Antara ke kehne par kar rahi hai but kyun

S:lekin ek baat samaj nehi arahi Guddan issh shaadi kay liye maan kaise gayi

A:Bash thodi si dhamki.. Maine use sirf itna bola ki agar woh shaadi karti hai toh uske parivar ki jaan baksh dungi warna.. aur bash chal pari apni zindagi barbad karne.. akhir use bhi pata hai mein kitni khatarnak hun jo apne bhai ka khoon kar sakti hai woh toh kuch bhi karsakti hai

Akshat was stunned hearing all this. Tears were coming out from his eyes.

AJ(in mind):Iska matlab Guddan ne sach kahan tha aur maine.. nehi mein Guddan ko apni zindagi aise barbad karne nehi doonga mujhe yeh shaadi kisibhi halat mein rokni padegi but kaise Guddan toh khud se kabhi naa nehi bolegi

Akshat then thought of an idea & left from there. He made Harish arrested on charges of forced marriage to Guddan who was his daughter's age & went to Jindal House as disguised & sat in Mandap.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Akshat hugged her but Guddan didn't reciprocated, she was happy that finally Akshat know the truth but what he has done cannot be forgiven so easily. She pushed him a little bit & looked at him with a blank face. She turned towards Pandit & folded her hands.

G:Hume maaf kijiye Pandit ji par yeh shaadi nehi hosakti aap pls jayiye

Akshat looked at her worriedly. As the Pandit left Guddan also started leaving but Akshat holds her wrist & stops her.

AJ:Guddan tumne shaadi karne se inkar kyun kiya

Guddan turned towards him with a blank face. She gets out of his hold.

G:Kisliye karein aapse shaadi jab aapko humpe bharosa hi nehi hai.. aap isliye yeh shaadi karne aye kyuki apko Antaraji ka sach pata chal gaya tha warna aap nehi atein humse shaadi karne.. apko yeh manjoor nahi tha ki hum kisi aur se shaadi karle lekin bharosa bhi toh nehi tha

AJ:Janta hun bohat badi galati huyi hai

G: Sahi kahan Jindal Saab galati toh huyi hai lekin apse nehi humse.. apse pyar karne ki galati.. apko apna dost banani ki galati.. aur sabse badi galati aap par bharosa karne ki.. isliye toh bina soche samjhe apni zindagi barbad karne chale gayein

Akshat felt like thousands knife were stabbed in his heart. Guddan started to leave, he looked at the holy fire & bend towards it & kept his hand above it.

AJ:Main issh pavitra havan kund ko sakshi maan ke yeh bachane leta hun ki mein tumhara vishwas phir jeetunga Guddan aur apne pati hone ka haar vachan nibhayunga

Guddan looked at him & rushed to him & pulls his hand away from fire. Akshat's hand was burnt.

G:Pagal hogaye hai aap.. yeh sab karna sey abb kuch nehi hoga Jindal Saab.. bohat der ho chuki hai

Saying this she left his hand & left from there. Akshat looked at her leaving helplessly. He now realized that how angry she was & he had hurt Guddan beyond her tolerance limit but he was determined to win her back.

The End

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awsome⭐️

Iska ek.aur part milega qa😃

Continue other stories too😛

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Keep it up

It was good , keep writing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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One more part plz....🤓

Give this story a happy ending.....

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Sooo gudddd.......do write an epilogue.☺️........luved it

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