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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhya

Lovely

Why geet is hell bend in going ? Both of them talk in riddles most of the time n they don’t understand others point

when Will love track begin for maaneet or u r nt planning at all?

Aage dekho hota h kya, dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

I don't want their moment to end😍😍😍 they are so close and comfortable... who will say that they known for only few days ...

Loved their conversations ... light hearted and meaningful ... she is very serious about going .

About his hairstyle hmm why I feel this secret gonna reveal soon

Pyaar hone m waqt nahi lagta dear...woh toh ek pal m ho jaata h

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Pyaar hone m waqt nahi lagta dear...woh toh ek pal m ho jaata h

Woh toh hai 😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice, very tender moments.. don’t know where this would go

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: babelicious

Nice, very tender moments.. don’t know where this would go

You will know very soon dear. Keep reading

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Posted: 6 years ago

So less time for them

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Posted: 6 years ago

Liked how easily they talk about everything

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 46

G-Tum miss karoge mujhe? Kuch saalon baad bhul jaoge yaa kuch mahino baad

M-Didn’t I just say I would

She clicks her tongue

G-Dekhna..out of sight out of mind

M- Nah…tum bhool jaogi. Now who would like a guy with a champu hair style like this?

Maan says grinning pointing his hair

She smiles

G-But it’s more about the person and the heart. Looks don’t matter. Who would like an ugly girl like this?

She points at herself

M- Ugly??!!!Where??!!!

He looks at Geet close

G-Haan haan bass bass. Khaao aur chalo ab

Dono khana khaate hain khane ke baad they paid the bill got onto he bike

Maan says casually

M- By the way,Akhil asked me if I’d seen you, I told him I haven’t

Geet kuch nahi kehti

Maan bike start karke le jaata hai

They come home in the evening

M-Suno


She turns

He hands her small gift wrapped box

She looks at him surprised

G-Gift? Tumhari sister ke liye?

M- For you

Her eyes widen

G-For me?

Maan gift rakh kar kamre mein bhaag jaata hai

Geet hassi...it was 1st time anybody actually got her something

Jaldi jaake pyaar se gift ko unwrap karti hai

Its a delicatec hain bracelet she can wear all the time...and one of those silly-silly pair key-chain...which can be separated and two people can keep a part of it

Its friends forever kind of thing

She smiles dreamily and keeps apna wala key chain with her aur wo bracelet ache se sambhalke pack kar leti hai

He just thought that Geet keeps saying you will forget me forget me... so to just reassure her that he wont...

Geet calls for him

G-Maan achi movie aa rahi hai jaldi aa jao!!! Let’s watch! I made us some popcorn too

Maan bhagta-bhagta ayaa buttoning up his shirt his hair disheveled and wet, a towel around his shoulders

G-Jaldi aao

Maan comes and plops down beside her

Geet toh chipak gai tv se smiling...stupidly hero aaya screen par to

Maan aram se lounging back having popcorn

Ab baal thode hero style mein hain

Geet ne kuch sandwiches aur colas bhi rakhe he the

Geet ne abhi tak Maan ki taraf dekha hi nahi

He is busy eating and looking at her and some at the tv

Movie mein scene aata hai ki hero gives a similar silly key chain to gal as they separate

Geet look sat Maan and smiles

G-Thanks for the gift

Maan was stuffing his face

He mumbles its ok with a mouth full totally geek and unsauve

She giggles…she thinks he looks cute like this too

He puts some more popcorn into his already half full mouth

She again looks at him

G-Now your hair looks nice

He put up the towel and puts it over his head

M- Woman, you are getting obsessed with my hair. So not good for your psyche

G-Thik hai ab se kabhi tareef nahi karungi

He laughs

M-You are just jealous I got a greener patch her than yours

He says pointing to his head

G-yeah yeah yeah

M-Main toh sirf nazar lagne se bacha raha hoon

She rolls her eyes

Movie mein Hero heroine become lovers because of that key chain

Tab tak Maan aur Geet dono pass aa gaye the sofe pe

Razai mein ghus ke

Ek sideMaan ek side Geet

Her legs on his lap, him massaging her soles

M- Where's the bracelet I got you?

Geet adhi neend mein thi, the massage was so relaxing

G-Maine pack kar liya

M- Why aren’t you wearing it?

G-Abhi ghar pe pehnungi to kharab ho jayega naa

Geet aarams e leti ...thoda turn hui side…hand on his leg...her head tilted and on the curve of his feet

M-Nahi hoga kharab its for daily wear

He rubs her calf

G-Tumhe nahi pata ho jaata hai. Kal pehen lungi..jaate hue

M-ok wear that then

G-emm

Geet aaramse razaai odhke comfortably so gai, it was warm and comfy and soft

She falls asleep like that

Maan bhi wahin so jata hai

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Maan rolled over onto the floor but realize hua subah ho gai

Baith kardekha toh Geet ab bhi so rai thi cuddled sweetly in the corner

Maan touches her cheek but then thinks better and doesn’t

He gets up quietly without disturbing her

Geet ne zar auum..umm kiya, zara hili

Jo wo warm sa cosy sa feel kar rahi thi wo feeling missing hai and she isn’t liking it

Geet bhi baith gai uthke

Idhar udhar dekha

Bhaag ke gai Maan ke room mein

Maan room mein nahi mila

Geet Maan! Maan! chant karte hue poore ghar mein ghumne lagi

Maan calls from the kitchen-

M-Over here in the kitchen

Geet bhaagke aayi

Then sighs out in relief

She smiles like a kid who had just lost her family and saw them again

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Posted: 6 years ago

Aww that was soo cute


Hope he makes her stay

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Posted: 6 years ago

great update

maan n geet are becoming more comfortable with each other

maan gifted geet pair key chain n bracelet

both are enjoying time together

Edited by aparna3011 - 6 years ago

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