KalMa OS: Mugdha is back!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am writing OS first time in my life. So please bear with me! Typed in mobile notes. Ignore grammar and spelling mistakes.

Malhar rescues Mugdha and keeps her safe. He keeps dummy Mugdha in the hospital to fool Atharva and to keep him in bubble. He daily visits her and keeps tab on her recovery. Special psychiatrist is offered by commissioner for her treatment. Meanwhile Atharva thinks he won and is very happy.

After 6 months...

Mugdha is fully recovered. Coincidentally it is the auspicious day of Raksha bandhan. Malhar comes to her room and says

Malhar- Mrs. Mugdha Bapat I am ACP Malhar Rane. Main aapka shubhchintak hoon. Aap mujhse mat dariye.

Mugdha-Oh! Toh aap hain wo jisne mujhe bachaya. Thank you so much. Mujhe yaha ke doctor ne aur caretaker ne aap ke baare mein bahut kuch bataya. Bahut acche insaan hai aap. Aapne aapki jaan ki parva kiye bina mujhe bachaya. Aap ne sage bhai ki tarah meri raksha ki. Dekhiye aaj Raksha bandhan bhi hai. Kya main aapko Dada kehke pukar sakti hoon?

Malhar- He is very happy. He instantly says yes. Mujhe bhi behen nahi hai. Aapki roop mein mujhe ek pyaari behen mil gayi.

Then Pawar brings Rakhi and Mugdha ties it on Malhar's hand.

Malhar- To kya tum apne is bhai ki madad karogi?

Mugdha- Dada apne meri jaan bachayi hai! Uske liye main jitna karu wo kam hai.

Malhar- Are wo to mera farz tha. Aur main bhi toh chahta hoon ki tumhein insaaf mile aur Wo Atharva Bapat ko uske kiye ki saza. Then he tells plan.

Next day he takes her statement and files complaint against Atharva and Sampada.

He enters AN with police team. He shouts and says "Atharva Bapat bahar aao. Ab tum aur choop nahi sakte. Tumhein toh saza milke rahegi."

Atharva comes and as usual says "kya bhau hamesha ki tarah yahi chilla rahe ho aur tamasha kar rahe ho. Kuch nahi hoga mujhe. Chalo entertainment karo. I will enjoy."

Malhar - Are Atharva itni jaldi hai entertainment dekhne ki. Jara darvaje ke taraf mudke to dekho.

Mugdha enters AN. Atharva is shell shocked and says tum!

Mugdha- Ha main hi hoon. Aur puri tarah se sane hoon. Tumne mere saath jo kiya uski saza to tumhein milke rahegi. Tumne meri bahut buri haalat ki aur mere paison pe aish kar rahe the. Lekin ab nahi. Aur tum mera kuch nahi bigad sakte kyunki Mere Malhar dada aur Kalyani vahini (Bhaiyya and bhabhi) mere saath hai. Toh tumhara time khatam. Ye raha arrest warrant and divorce papers. Chupchap sign karlo. Aur Sampada tumne bhi ismein Atharva ka saath diya. Toh tum bhi jail jaogi.

Malhar arrests both and judge comes, grants divorce of Malhar-Sampada & Atharva-Mugdha and gives Moksh's custody to KalMa. KalMaSh reunion.

Then Mugdha comes to Atul and says" aap mere company ke manager hai. Ye nahi ho sakta. Already aap ke naam par ek case darj hai aur criminal record vale employees ko main kaam pe nahi rakhungi. So aaj se aapki naukari gayi."

"Aur aap Aausaheb hai na. Maine aap ke baare sab kuch jaana hai. Paiso ke liye aapne bhi Atharva ka saath diya. Kalyani bhabhi, mere dada aur Anupriya ji pe bahut julm kiye. Ab bahut ho gaya aapka bhi. Aapne Atharva ke paise use kiye na, mujhe sab lauta do aur wo bhi saare ek saath. Koi rehem nahi karungi aap pe. Jab kharch kiye to aapko kuch nahi laga, ab koi hichkhichahat nahi chahiye. Actually tum sab logon ko bhi arrest karna chahiye kyunki gunehgar to tum log bhi ho. So on Mugdha's complaint (exploitation of property and tampering of evidence) All AN members except Atul are arrested. "

Then she comes to Anupriya and says "main aapko divorce milvake dungi. "Her legal advisor files divorce case and Anupriya-Atul are divorced. Atul says sorry to Anupriya and leaves from their life. He decides to work for samajseva sanstha.

Kalyani is very happy that her Aai is now divorced and Pillu is back to them. She hugs Malhar and says "Thank you so much. Aap best hai! "

Lekin usse abhi bhi Malhar ji se pyaar nahi hua hai!

Kaka - Ab mera yaha kuch kaam nahi , main chalta hoon.

Then Anupriya starts feeling lonely. She smilingly says ha thik hai lekin in heart she feels pain. She starts analysing whatever good things he did for her. And finally realises that she needs him. Finally the day of Sarthak Kaka's departure comes.

Anupriya goes to station and stops him and says "Sarthak ji mujhe aap ki jarurat hai. Main aap ke bina nahi rah sakti. Mujhe pata nahi ye pyaar hai ya kuch aur hai lekin mujhe aap ke jaisa companion chahiye. Main aap se shaadi karne ke liye taiyyar hoon isliye toh ye hari choodiyan pehen ke aayi hoon."

Sarthak kaka gets very happy and says "main toh kabse aap ke answer ka wait kar raha tha. Thank you."

After 3 months:

AnuSar are married. Mugdha is handling her business well. She comes to Malhar one day and says "aap dono ki jodi bahut cute hai. Aap dono ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai."

Malhar - main toh karta hoon lekin wo nahi karti.

Mugdha - wo bhi karti hai, maine uski aankhon mein dekha hai. Bass jatati nahi hogi. Mere paas ek plan hai. Bahut ghisapita hai lekin it will work.

She tells her plan.

Next day Malhar goes to Kalyani and gives her divorce papers. She is shocked.

Kalyani- Ye aap kya kar rahe hai Malhar ji?

Malhar- Hum dono ka koi talmel nahi hai Kalyani. Mujhe nahi lagta hum ek dusre ke liye bane hai. Aur mujhe nahi lagta tumhein mujhse kabhi pyaar hoga. So behtar yahi hoga ki hum alag ho jaaye.

Kalyani- Ye aap kaise keh sakte hai Malhar ji aur Pillu ka kya?

Malhar- Don't worry. Pillu ki custody tumhare paas hi rahegi. Tumhare paas Aai,Sarthak Kaka, Pillu honge. Bas main nahi rahunga!

Kalyani is shocked but is happy that Pillu will be with her. Days passes by, she feels restless and lonely but says " unki aadat ho chuki hai tumhein isliye ye sab ho raha hai. Aur unka bhi sahi hai. Main unse pyaar bhi nahi karti. Pillu ke liye hi to tha ye rishta. Ab wo bhi sort ho gaya. I will handle it."

After 6 months they are divorced (obviously fake because Malhar ji Kalyani se dur nahi rah sakte)

Kalyani is sad but composes herself.

Next day Malhar comes with girl named Riya. She hugs him and says Mallu baby. Kalyani is sad, jealous and angry. She comes there and says " who are you?"

Riya- Main Malhar ki bachpan ki best friend hoon, aur tum?

Kalyani- Main inki patni....thi (she is sad)

Malhar- Are main iss se shaadi karne wala hoon as we are divorced now. Chalo engagement ki shopping ke liye chalte hai and they goes by jeep.

Kalyani comes to Anu and says ye Malhar ji sach mein dusri shaadi karenge kya Aai? (AnuSar are involved in plan)

Anu says haa toh karne do na! Tumhare paas hum sab hai na, uske liye bhi koi toh chahiye na. She says haa Aai with teary eyes.

She goes to room and cries (Bin tere plays)

Engagement day comes. Kalyani is sad but still attends the function. Malhar in mind says abhi bhi waqt hai Kalyani bol do. But they exchange rings and Kalyani closes her eyes and is in tears. She runs to room and says to Pillu "dekho aaj tumhare baba kisi aur ke ho gaye" and cries.

Then there is Mehendi function. Kalyani still comes as she still do not believe that Malhar is really marrying that girl. Riya gets Mehendi of Malhar's name. Kalyani asks one of the girl to draw mehendi on her hand and says please ismein Malhar ji ka naam likh do aur kisiko mat batana. Malhar sees this from far and smiles.

Next is haldi. Anupriya is carrying Haldi bowl, but there is oil spilled and Kalyani collides with Anupriya and is about to fall but Malhar comes and saves her. In this chaos bowl falls from Anupriya's hand and it falls on both of them. But Anupriya again makes haldi and Riya and Malhar applies it to each other. This is the last stage for Kalyani. She cannot tolerate all this and goes on terrace.

She confronts herself - "Kya ho gaya hai Kalyani tujhe? Tu khush kyu nahi hai. Keh rahi thi aadat ki baat hai choot jayegi. Nahi chooti na. Aur kyu jealous ho rahi hai? Karne do na unhe dusri shaadi. Tera kya. Aur tere paas Pillu aur Aai dono hai phir bhi tujhe kyu khaalipan mehsoos ho raha hai? Kyu unke dur jaane se tumhein itni taqleef ho rahi hai? Kyu unhe kisi aur ke saath dekhke tujhe aisa lag raha hai ki tumne unko humesha ke liye kho diya. Kahi tujhe unse ...Pyaar. Nahi! Ye nahi ho sakta. Lekin aisa hua hai Kalyani. Uff tu kitni stupid hai Kalyani tujhe Malhar ji se pyaar ho gaya hai. Yes I am in love. I love you Malhar ji. But the next moment she gets sad that ab der ho chuki hai. Unhone kisi aur ka haath tham liya hai."

Lekin main haar nahi manungi. Kal unse baat karti hoon.

Next is Sangeet. Riya and Malhar are about to dance. Kalyani comes on stage and says to Riya " Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Malhar ji ke saath dance karne ki. Ye mere pati hai. Ek paper se rishta nahi tut ta."

She takes him to terrace. She says" I love you Malhar ji! Mujhe pata nahi kab kaise ho gaya lekin main aap ke bina nahi reh sakti. Aur kisi aur ke saath to bilkul bhi nahi dekh sakti. I know ki waqt bahut kam hai lekin kya aap phir se mera haath thamenge? Kal mujhse shaadi karenge? Please bataiye na."

Malhar gets immensely happy and says"Isi baat ka to intezar tha Kalyani. I love you too! Aur ha kal main tumse hi shaadi karunga!"

Riya comes and says "cute couple! God bless you. Bye my boyfriend is waiting for me."

Kalyani is shocked asks what?

Mugdha comes and says ye sab mera aur Malhar dada ka plan tha. Aapko pyar realise karane ke liye. Dada ne acting ki.

Kalyani- Oh! Accha. Toh tumne apne dada ki side li.

Anupriya- Mugdha dusron ke liye plan banate banate khud ka bhi ghar basana chahti ho na Rohan ke saath. Maine aur Sarthak ji ne sab dekha tum logon ne kaise sari rasmein ki ab bass shaadi baki hai! Kal tumhari bhi karate hai shaadi. Mugdha is shy.

(Rohan is Malhar's cousin. He is businessman. In these marriage functions he meets Mugdha and they fall in love)

Kalyani- Aai last time tumne aur kaka ne court marriage ki thi. Ab kal tum dono bhi rasmon ke saath karlo. AnuSar agrees.

After everyone goes

Kalyani- Malhar ji kya aap bhi maine love confession ke liye thoda sa time kya lagaya, Aapne ye plan banaya.Mai kitna dar gayi thi. Kahi aap sach mein mujhse dur jaate toh!

Malhar- Aise kaise dur Jaata! Hum dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai! Aur ab sab thik hoga.

He makes her wear beautiful ring. She also makes him wear ring!

Malhar- I love you

Kalyani- I love you too!

They goes to their rooms then for sleeping

Next day all the three couples: Kalyani-Malhar, Anupriya-Sarthak and Mugdha-Rohan are married in same mandap.

They take Rane family pic- KalMa, Pillu, AnuSar, Rohan, Mugdha, Nal and Godavari!

They lived happily ever after!

Note- I am not good at writing! This idea just came into my mind in the morning and I penned it. Please give feedback! Bura likha hai to wo bhi bata do. Mujhe mere mistakes samjhenge.

Aur maine thodi cinematic liberty li hai! Aur Main genuinely Mugdha ko khush dekhna chahti thi isliye uski love story add ki. Aur ye Malhar ki kisi ladki se shaadi tak baat chal jaaye ye idea aaj subah SinghShaandar ye forum member ne diya tha (sorry asli naam nahi pata). Happy happy dekhna chahti thi isliye happy ending!



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Posted: 6 years ago
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I always love happy ending wali stories...it was fabulous one dear...Thank u...Do write more stories

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Sooooo AMAZING....!!!!

This is what I want to see in the show

Loved each and every character here.

Such a positive story.

Do write more....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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its beautiful dear

loved it

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malharji shdnt have done that

i mean divorce ka natak little too much for me

anyways good to see u pen ur ideas.

wld deffo like to read more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have less posts as I am new member. Isliye ek hi post mein sabko reply de rahi hoon!

Thank you Lora di, Sanya, Lina di and Nisha di. I am happy that you all liked it! Thanks mujhe motivate karne ke liye. I will write more if any other idea pops in my mind.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing update bias. This is what I want in the show. Keep writing its amazing.

Hope to see you with a new one. Suggestion, which is totally different from the story. If you don't like the idea then ignore it.

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Awesome 👍👍👏

Happy ending .. always loved

Bechaari kalyani ko kitna jalaya🤣

Do write more

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice work ... glad that u started writing... keep writing ...🙌🏻💞

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you Simran, Jyoti and Shona

@Simran - Will try to write if any other idea comes in my mind

@Jyoti- Kya karu. Kalyani ko realise karane ke liye usse jalana pada. Finally usse ahsaas ho gaya ki wo Malhar ji se pyaar karti hai. Third angle works

@Shona- will try to write more

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