Amazing os
Next time try to make it little long
And also try to describe emotions of characters and their actions in detail
Although I know I am not a professional writer
But its just little advice don't get me wrong
Will wait for you're next story
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki: Episode Discussion Thread - 36
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The Star With Sparkling Smile:: Aditya Srivastava AT # 26
Amazing os
Next time try to make it little long
And also try to describe emotions of characters and their actions in detail
Although I know I am not a professional writer
But its just little advice don't get me wrong
Will wait for you're next story
Amazing os
Next time try to make it little long
And also try to describe emotions of characters and their actions in detail
Although I know I am not a professional writer
But its just little advice don't get me wrong
Will wait for you're next story
Thank you. I did not feel bad. This is my first OS. So this was just try.I just wanted to teach lesson to villains and wanted Kalyani to realise her love. So I fulfilled my wish here. I will try to write and follow your suggestions.
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