Aaja Shyam hone aayi - SS on MishBir (UPDATED Final Part pg 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cool_wonder

Thank YOu guys for the response smiley31

Here's PART 2....CONT....

Abhir is sitting beside the fire and the wind is blowing his beautiful hair locks

“Rat ke taron ke beech yhe kesa ehesaas hai


Aaj dil kush hai ki tumhare pass hai”


Abhir just says this shayari in a deep voice Just then asoothing voice comes from the tent as the tent curtain is opened slowly


“Dil judaa nahi haiaab tumse kya karen


Tumhari har cheez mereliye khaas hai” **PLEASE DON’T MINDTHE BETUKI SHYARI”S..IVE JUST ADDED THEM **

Abhir looks back and see’s Mishti is wearing thatdress…..And looking as beautiful as he had thought her to be in that dress.More beautiful in fact.

Abhir’s eyes Looks at mishit but this is not that FriendlyNaughty Look which she is used to from Abhir. This look is something else its Intense.It’s like he is looking deeply into her soul and she is feeling his eyes touchher.

The wind blowing her hair makes her looks more beautiful, Mishti just takes a step forward and just as shetakes that step “PASMINA – Song from the Movie Fitoor”, That melodious music starts playing as she slowly steps towards him. He just looks away for a while and moves his hands towards his hairs and pushes his beautiful hair back closing his eyes, as though he is controlling his emotions and feelings and the urge to run and hug her. His eyes are moist and as thes ong proceeds she comes close to him and stands. The air is blowing theirbeautiful hair.

They slowly site beside each other near the fire. They sit close to each other. The beautiful para of the song starts they are sitting close by, just then both turn to each other wanting to say something but theirheads hit each other and their nose touch. They both smile, Again as they areabout to separate the wind blows faster and something goes into Mishti’s eyes, she closes her eyes slightly. Just then Abhir stops her hand and slowly turns her face towards him. They are very close. He lovingly blows her eyes holding her face lovingly, Mishti is getting affected by this extreme closeness and she presses his arm tightly. Abhir looks at Mishtis hand held tightly tohis arm and he looks at her. She has closed her eyes. He is so effected that heslowly takes off his hand from Mishti’s face and turns. Just then, to that Meledious music of the song (Which Is playing at the background) Mishti opens her eyes and just softly touches his face and turns him towards her and loving Opens and closes her eyes assuring him that he is not doing any mistake. Just then she stands up slowly but he holds her hand and gets up slowly. He is standing behind her; slowly he comes very close to her, very close. From the back he holds her by her waist, then holds her other hand (Just like in that Ishq song, here he holds her waist) he pulls her towards his chest, she finally gives up and rests her head on his shoulders,he gently kisses her shoulder, she feels the kiss and turns back and hugs him tightly. He slowly very intimately whispers into her ears

“I think you should leave”

Slowly while breaking the hug, Mishti also Whispers

“ Why!!!!!”

Abhir just kisses her forehead very gently and says

“I cannot trust myself now”

Cont……


Wow what a chemistry

So romantic

Abir se ab control na ho paayega 😂

Continue soon dear, beautiful update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vssdp

Wow what a chemistry

So romantic

Abir se ab control na ho paayega 😂

Continue soon dear, beautiful update

Thanks dear smiley9..will update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Awesome 👏..... Can't wait for part 3.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

You really need to write more .... this was sooo beautiful and well written ....🤗👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
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👏. You need to write more Anu !!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krpkab_superfan

You really need to write more .... this was sooo beautiful and well written ....🤗👏

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kya Kamal likha hai Anu

That shayari...I can totally imagine Abir saying in his husky voice

Kahani ka ye hissa padke Dil Ko Sukoon Mila

Sabra nai hota ab...jaldi aage badhao tum ye Silsila

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Onyourface

Kya Kamal likha hai Anu

That shayari...I can totally imagine Abir saying in his husky voice

Kahani ka ye hissa padke Dil Ko Sukoon Mila

Sabra nai hota ab...jaldi aage badhao tum ye Silsila

Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai yYara.. And thanks🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks everyone🤗

Edited by Cool_wonder - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow what an amazing story..eagerly waiting for the third part..pls update soon and try to write more👍🏼

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