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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Cool_wonder

Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai yYara.. And thanks🤗

Ok tum kehti ho to Maan leti Hun Yaara

Bolo Tara rara😎

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Anu, aap toh chah gaye! That shayari... Mishbir and the camping place.... makes it so beautiful! Please write more!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nicely written... Do write more.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Anu, aap toh chah gaye! That shayari... Mishbir and the camping place.... makes it so beautiful! Please write more!

Thank You Akusmiley9


You'll love the final part😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART 3 - FINAL PART

Mishti Just turns to go towards the tent, but she stops, stops for a second and turns back towards Abhir comes close to him and Kisses him on his cheeks gently

“I Trust you more than you know”

Saying so she caresses his subtle and slowly goes to the tent. The song is over in the background and only the sound of the wind can be heard. Abhir again pushes his hair backwards and smiles closing his eyes, his white half tucked half unbuttoned shirt is making him look amazing. Through a small Window in the tent Mishti sees Abhir, she blushes and smiles, she is a little surprised that she can have such a strong impact on some one, some one loves her so deeply and her every action affects that person to a very deep extent . She smiles and blushes looking at Abhir.

“Ajeeb HOT Rajvansh” she murmurs as she smiles and blushes.

While abhir is waiting for Mishti, he sees her bicycle there and then looks at the tent, he then has a naughty smile on his face.

Soon Mishti comes out wearing her regular dress

“I should leave now” she says

“Let me drop you, you can put your cycle in the back seat” says Abhir

They are still not out of the PASHMINA moment,

“Abhir, its ok, I’ll …I’ll manage,” she says half heartedly as she does not want to bother Abhir. But just then she looks at her cycle

“What??” she squeaks a bit in surprise. The back tyre of her bicycle is punctured. Abhir gives a naughty grin looking at mishit and appreciating his win from within

“What...what happened Mishti…oh no” he makes a innocent face

Mishti kinda realizes and looks at him in her ANGRY MISHTI way

“You did it righ…” she questions pointing her finger at him.

“Me..n..no way…yar, your very ajeeb….always blame me for everthing wrong”

“Oh..I’m not Ajeeb , you are..Mr Ajeeb jhoote Rajvansh”Saying so she runs to hit him, Abhir smiles and runs towards his car

“Stop Stop,” he yells turning back

“Look, you have two options, either come with me, ill drop you, or we’ll wait here together, coz ill not leave without you”

“Meri Bike” says mishit making a pretend sad face

“Mr Rajvansh I’ll remember this…and I’ll take my Revenge one day” she says and as she turns, Abhir holds her hand and gently pulls her towards him

“I’m all yours ms. Mishti, and you will not get a better chance for avenging your punctured tyer...so what revenge you want?”

Saying so he comes closer to Mishti, he is very very close,Mishti’s heart starts racing at the speed of a jet car, just then she holds her finger firmly on his lips making a puncture in between, and confidently looks into his eye

“I don’t take revenge like that Mr. Rajvansh” saying so she raises her feet and wispers gently in his ears

“You’ll never know when I’ll strike back”

Abhir just smiles and holds her waist tightly and whispers back in her ears

“I’ll wait”

Mishti just smiles resting her chin on his shoulder

They break the hug “now shall we go” asks Abhir with a smile

Mishti smiles and nods



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Mishti and Abhir are in the car driving back, it has started raining, and both are a bit wet

Both are quite, not knowing what to talk about

“Radio?” asks Abhir looking at Mishti smiling, Mishti nods back with a smile

as Abhir starts the Radio, BHEEGI BHEEGI RAATHO MEIN starts playing

“Kesa hai yhe sama, jo jane hamare dilon ki baat

Itni khoobsurath, Ki maar hi na dale humein yhe Rath” he says in his Husky Deep toned voice to Mishti

Mishti just looks at him and Blushes and shy's, She changes the station

“You are getting way too romantic Mr Ajeeb Romantic Rajvansh..” says mishit all blushing

The radio jockey is saying something about the weather on the other station

“ This weather is so romantic, so here’s one of the most romantic song for all you hopless romantics ovt there"

“KHUDA JAANE KE.. MEI FIDAA HOON” songs playing

Abhir looks at Mishti and smiles, Mishti to closes her eyes and finally giving up smiles and shy’s away. Just then Abhir just holds her hand tightly and Kisses her hand passionately as they are driving away.

Edited by Cool_wonder - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Cool_wonder

PART 3 - FINAL PART

Mishti Just turns to go towards the tent, but she stops, stops for a second and turns back towards Abhir comes close to him and Kisses him on his cheeks gently

“I Trust you more than you know”

Saying so she caresses his subtle and slowly goes to the tent. The song is over in the background and only the sound of the wind can be heard. Abhir again pushes his hair backwards and smiles closing his eyes, his white half tucked half unbuttoned shirt is making him look amazing. Through a small Window in the tent Mishti sees Abhir, she blushes and smiles, she is a little surprised that she can have such a strong impact on some one, some one loves her so deeply and her every action affects that person to a very deep extent . She smiles and blushes looking at Abhir.

“Ajeeb HOT Rajvansh” she murmurs as she smiles and blushes.

While abhir is waiting for Mishti, he sees her bicycle there and then looks at the tent, he then has a naughty smile on his face.

Soon Mishti comes out wearing her regular dress

“I should leave now” she says

“Let me drop you, you can put your cycle in the back seat” says Abhir

They are still not out of the PASHMINA moment,

“Abhir, its ok, I’ll …I’ll manage,” she says half heartedly as she does not want to bother Abhir. But just then she looks at her cycle

“What??” she squeaks a bit in surprise. The back tyre of her bicycle is punctured. Abhir gives a naughty grin looking at mishit and appreciating his win from within

“What...what happened Mishti…oh no” he makes a innocent face

Mishti kinda realizes and looks at him in her ANGRY MISHTI way

“You did it righ…” she questions pointing her finger at him.

“Me..n..no way…yar, your very ajeeb….always blame me for everthing wrong”

“Oh..I’m not Ajeeb , you are..Mr Ajeeb jhoote Rajvansh”Saying so she runs to hit him, Abhir smiles and runs towards his car

“Stop Stop,” he yells turning back

“Look, you have two options, either come with me, ill drop you, or we’ll wait here together, coz ill not leave without you”

“Meri Bike” says mishit making a pretend sad face

“Mr Rajvansh I’ll remember this…and I’ll take my Revenge one day” she says and as she turns, Abhir holds her hand and gently pulls her towards him

“I’m all yours ms. Mishti, and you will not get a better chance for avenging your punctured tyer...so what revenge you want?”

Saying so he comes closer to Mishti, he is very very close,Mishti’s heart starts racing at the speed of a jet car, just then she holds her finger firmly on his lips making a puncture in between, and confidently looks into his eye

“I don’t take revenge like that Mr. Rajvansh” saying so she raises her feet and wispers gently in his ears

“You’ll never know when I’ll strike back”

Abhir just smiles and holds her waist tightly and whispers back in her ears

“I’ll wait”

Mishti just smiles resting her chin on his shoulder

They break the hug “now shall we go” asks Abhir with a smile

Mishti smiles and nods



---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Mishti and Abhir are in the car driving back, it has started raining, and both are a bit wet

Both are quite, not knowing what to talk about

“Radio?” asks Abhir looking at Mishti smiling, Mishti nods back with a smile

as Abhir starts the Radio, BHEEGI BHEEGI RAATHO MEIN starts playing

“Kesa hai yhe sama, jo jane hamare dilon ki baat

Itni khoobsurath, Ki maar hi na dale humein yhe Rath” he says in his Husky Deep toned voice to Mishti

Mishti just looks at him and Blushes and shy's, She changes the station

“You are getting way too romantic Mr Ajeeb Romantic Rajvansh..” says mishit all blushing

The radio jockey is saying something about the weather on the other station

“ This weather is so romantic, so here’s one of the most romantic song for all you hopless romantics ovt there"

“KHUDA JAANE KE.. MEI FIDAA HOON” songs playing

Abhir looks at Mishti and smiles, Mishti to closes her eyes and finally giving up smiles and shy’s away. Just then Abhir just holds her hand tightly and Kisses her hand passionately as they are driving away.

Wow this is so cute,a bit hot and romantic! Lovely! Anu, chah gayi tum!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Wow this is so cute,a bit hot and romantic! Lovely! Anu, chah gayi tum!

Thanks Yara🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Cool_wonder

PART 3 - FINAL PART

Mishti Just turns to go towards the tent, but she stops, stops for a second and turns back towards Abhir comes close to him and Kisses him on his cheeks gently

“I Trust you more than you know”

Saying so she caresses his subtle and slowly goes to the tent. The song is over in the background and only the sound of the wind can be heard. Abhir again pushes his hair backwards and smiles closing his eyes, his white half tucked half unbuttoned shirt is making him look amazing. Through a small Window in the tent Mishti sees Abhir, she blushes and smiles, she is a little surprised that she can have such a strong impact on some one, some one loves her so deeply and her every action affects that person to a very deep extent . She smiles and blushes looking at Abhir.

“Ajeeb HOT Rajvansh” she murmurs as she smiles and blushes.

While abhir is waiting for Mishti, he sees her bicycle there and then looks at the tent, he then has a naughty smile on his face.

Soon Mishti comes out wearing her regular dress

“I should leave now” she says

“Let me drop you, you can put your cycle in the back seat” says Abhir

They are still not out of the PASHMINA moment,

“Abhir, its ok, I’ll …I’ll manage,” she says half heartedly as she does not want to bother Abhir. But just then she looks at her cycle

“What??” she squeaks a bit in surprise. The back tyre of her bicycle is punctured. Abhir gives a naughty grin looking at mishit and appreciating his win from within

“What...what happened Mishti…oh no” he makes a innocent face

Mishti kinda realizes and looks at him in her ANGRY MISHTI way

“You did it righ…” she questions pointing her finger at him.

“Me..n..no way…yar, your very ajeeb….always blame me for everthing wrong”

“Oh..I’m not Ajeeb , you are..Mr Ajeeb jhoote Rajvansh”Saying so she runs to hit him, Abhir smiles and runs towards his car

“Stop Stop,” he yells turning back

“Look, you have two options, either come with me, ill drop you, or we’ll wait here together, coz ill not leave without you”

“Meri Bike” says mishit making a pretend sad face

“Mr Rajvansh I’ll remember this…and I’ll take my Revenge one day” she says and as she turns, Abhir holds her hand and gently pulls her towards him

“I’m all yours ms. Mishti, and you will not get a better chance for avenging your punctured tyer...so what revenge you want?”

Saying so he comes closer to Mishti, he is very very close,Mishti’s heart starts racing at the speed of a jet car, just then she holds her finger firmly on his lips making a puncture in between, and confidently looks into his eye

“I don’t take revenge like that Mr. Rajvansh” saying so she raises her feet and wispers gently in his ears

“You’ll never know when I’ll strike back”

Abhir just smiles and holds her waist tightly and whispers back in her ears

“I’ll wait”

Mishti just smiles resting her chin on his shoulder

They break the hug “now shall we go” asks Abhir with a smile

Mishti smiles and nods



---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Mishti and Abhir are in the car driving back, it has started raining, and both are a bit wet

Both are quite, not knowing what to talk about

“Radio?” asks Abhir looking at Mishti smiling, Mishti nods back with a smile

as Abhir starts the Radio, BHEEGI BHEEGI RAATHO MEIN starts playing

“Kesa hai yhe sama, jo jane hamare dilon ki baat

Itni khoobsurath, Ki maar hi na dale humein yhe Rath” he says in his Husky Deep toned voice to Mishti

Mishti just looks at him and Blushes and shy's, She changes the station

“You are getting way too romantic Mr Ajeeb Romantic Rajvansh..” says mishit all blushing

The radio jockey is saying something about the weather on the other station

“ This weather is so romantic, so here’s one of the most romantic song for all you hopless romantics ovt there"

“KHUDA JAANE KE.. MEI FIDAA HOON” songs playing

Abhir looks at Mishti and smiles, Mishti to closes her eyes and finally giving up smiles and shy’s away. Just then Abhir just holds her hand tightly and Kisses her hand passionately as they are driving away.

Wow final part mast tha ek dum dhinchaksmiley2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: meen123

Wow final part mast tha ek dum dhinchaksmiley2

Thank you 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cool_wonder

PART 3 - FINAL PART

Mishti Just turns to go towards the tent, but she stops, stops for a second and turns back towards Abhir comes close to him and Kisses him on his cheeks gently

“I Trust you more than you know”

Saying so she caresses his subtle and slowly goes to the tent. The song is over in the background and only the sound of the wind can be heard. Abhir again pushes his hair backwards and smiles closing his eyes, his white half tucked half unbuttoned shirt is making him look amazing. Through a small Window in the tent Mishti sees Abhir, she blushes and smiles, she is a little surprised that she can have such a strong impact on some one, some one loves her so deeply and her every action affects that person to a very deep extent . She smiles and blushes looking at Abhir.

“Ajeeb HOT Rajvansh” she murmurs as she smiles and blushes.

While abhir is waiting for Mishti, he sees her bicycle there and then looks at the tent, he then has a naughty smile on his face.

Soon Mishti comes out wearing her regular dress

“I should leave now” she says

“Let me drop you, you can put your cycle in the back seat” says Abhir

They are still not out of the PASHMINA moment,

“Abhir, its ok, I’ll …I’ll manage,” she says half heartedly as she does not want to bother Abhir. But just then she looks at her cycle

“What??” she squeaks a bit in surprise. The back tyre of her bicycle is punctured. Abhir gives a naughty grin looking at mishit and appreciating his win from within

“What...what happened Mishti…oh no” he makes a innocent face

Mishti kinda realizes and looks at him in her ANGRY MISHTI way

“You did it righ…” she questions pointing her finger at him.

“Me..n..no way…yar, your very ajeeb….always blame me for everthing wrong”

“Oh..I’m not Ajeeb , you are..Mr Ajeeb jhoote Rajvansh”Saying so she runs to hit him, Abhir smiles and runs towards his car

“Stop Stop,” he yells turning back

“Look, you have two options, either come with me, ill drop you, or we’ll wait here together, coz ill not leave without you”

“Meri Bike” says mishit making a pretend sad face

“Mr Rajvansh I’ll remember this…and I’ll take my Revenge one day” she says and as she turns, Abhir holds her hand and gently pulls her towards him

“I’m all yours ms. Mishti, and you will not get a better chance for avenging your punctured tyer...so what revenge you want?”

Saying so he comes closer to Mishti, he is very very close,Mishti’s heart starts racing at the speed of a jet car, just then she holds her finger firmly on his lips making a puncture in between, and confidently looks into his eye

“I don’t take revenge like that Mr. Rajvansh” saying so she raises her feet and wispers gently in his ears

“You’ll never know when I’ll strike back”

Abhir just smiles and holds her waist tightly and whispers back in her ears

“I’ll wait”

Mishti just smiles resting her chin on his shoulder

They break the hug “now shall we go” asks Abhir with a smile

Mishti smiles and nods



---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Mishti and Abhir are in the car driving back, it has started raining, and both are a bit wet

Both are quite, not knowing what to talk about

“Radio?” asks Abhir looking at Mishti smiling, Mishti nods back with a smile

as Abhir starts the Radio, BHEEGI BHEEGI RAATHO MEIN starts playing

“Kesa hai yhe sama, jo jane hamare dilon ki baat

Itni khoobsurath, Ki maar hi na dale humein yhe Rath” he says in his Husky Deep toned voice to Mishti

Mishti just looks at him and Blushes and shy's, She changes the station

“You are getting way too romantic Mr Ajeeb Romantic Rajvansh..” says mishit all blushing

The radio jockey is saying something about the weather on the other station

“ This weather is so romantic, so here’s one of the most romantic song for all you hopless romantics ovt there"

“KHUDA JAANE KE.. MEI FIDAA HOON” songs playing

Abhir looks at Mishti and smiles, Mishti to closes her eyes and finally giving up smiles and shy’s away. Just then Abhir just holds her hand tightly and Kisses her hand passionately as they are driving away.

Who says you are writing for the first time...👏

It was soothing and beautiful ...wish we get a scene like this in the show as well

..that shayari was💕...and the song

..it's my fav...tumse Dil ki batein sikhi...tumse hi to rahein sikhi...tumpe mar k mein to jii Gaya...

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