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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Interesting

Update Soon

Thank you😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: riddy254

Firstly welcome to the forum.

Thanks for the warm welcomesmiley31

Well I totally agree with you in this matter.

Sometimes imperfections led to a beautiful destiny as I have already experienced it.

That's so true....... Though I never experienced it, I do believe that imperfections make a way to understand each other, to complete each other

Well yes when two opposite poles crosses eachother they gets attracted towards eachother.

No one is perfect in this world and indeed two unknown imperfect personalities fall into beautiful pool of love.

I bet couldn't agree more :)

Ur storyline really seems interesting.

Thank you once again

Please continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Forum mei aapka swagat hai!! 🤗

I loved your sneak peek!! Waiting for the story! 😊

Thanks for the warm welcome🤗

I'm so glad that you loved the sneak peak :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Welcome to the forum.....

Thanks for the warm welcome.... 🤗

Seems interesting plz update asap...

And Bhai hum to aise insaan ko chune chuke Jo har chiz me hum see alag he fir b humare sath he....and we are happy with each other...so perfect jaisa kuch hota he nahi...you know guddan ka dialogue zindgi is chaddar ki tarah sidhi nahi tedi medi honi chahiye...tabhi to use jeene ka maza hai....

Ye jaan ke acha lage ki aap log ek dusre ko poore karte hai chahe aap ki tastes alag ho :)

yeah perfect aisa kuch nhi hota lekin log aksar ek perfect life partner ki chavi apne man me basa lete hai..... Jo sachi mai hote nahi

Aur ji haa hamari guddan bikul tik bolti haismiley9

chalo enough of bakbak...now waiting for the story.


Edited by Heliophilia - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Hello everyone I'm back with my very first chapter :)

Part1:

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"Love is not finding a perfect person.... It's seeing a imperfect person perfect"

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Kolkata's top rated company "K&B chain of Industries" had taken a 300 crores turn over early this year,well it's not surprising considering the fact that the leading lady is Guddan Banerjee the only heir of late Chairman Mr. Bhushan Banerjee who invested every single minute of her life building this powerful empire which earns millions every year

Unlike her father she's a cold women,she is egoistic, dominating and a moody person....Just a mere thought of her gives nightmares to her employees, people say she turned arrogant because of the new found prestige,no that's not true.... It's apparently because she hates the outer world with a passion after losing her father.

Unlike every other day K&B's most trusted employee Mr. Vikram Rawat is looking so worried

Vikram: "Mr. Vardaan...Have u seen my red file around which I brought from branch 2.....hoity-toity is goona review it today.....what am I supposed to tell her, she can be here any time soon" 😖

(Guddan is popularly known as "hoity-toity" among her employees😂)

Vardaan: "Well i have no idea about it.....however I can understand what u are going through,I rather advise you start searching for another job "

Vikram: "That's so mean of you Mr. Vardaan... I need to figure a way out"

Vardaan: "Ab Mata Rani bhi kuch nahi karsakti, look who's here"


Obviously it's Guddan!!!!!

Vikram:"Oh noooooo"

Vardaan:"Good Morning Ms. Banerjee"

Vikram: "Good..Good Morn...inggg Ms. Banerjee", he said hesitantly

Hoity-Toity smelled something fishy with Vikram

Guddan: "Are U alright Mr.Rawat?" She asked

Vikram:"yes mam, all good" he started sweating

Guddan:" Meet me in my cabin, I need to review the file"

Vikram:" Mam... I... I need some time,the thing is..."

She cuts him off saying "Oh really! How much time u supposedly need Mr.Rawat ?Umm A day, no a month....no no u are actually so talented ...U need an year right...don't you? Needless I will fix the appointment with Mr. Sudesh the later year...... In the mean time lets enjoy watching the self-destruction of our company with a popcorn and you...you people are free to join us " She said pointing the staff

Vikram:" I didn't mean it mam... I can explain"

Guddan: "Don't you dare utter another word Mr. Rawat, u are fired...... I just hate irresponsible bugs like u...........Out!!! " Her voice echoed in the office making the chills run through the spine of every employee

Feeling humiliated Vikram silently took his belongings, leaving his Id on his table and stepped out without looking back

Guddan: "Revati,Revati!!"

Revati is Guddan's childhood friend whom she trusts more than herself, Revati is her secratory and the ultimate saviour

Revati:"Coming babes" She came hurriedly from her cabin

Guddan gave her a *how-dare-u-call-me-babes-in-public* look

Revati bit her tongue and said: "yes Ms. Banerjee"

Guddan:"Revati just fix whatever the mess created by Mr. Rawat and make sure we impress Mr.Sudesh pandey...okay"

Revati:"Trust me, I will handle it Ms.Banerjee"she assured

Guddan : "And u Mr.Vardaan as Mr. Rawat is out of the picture u will be leading branch 2....I hope u will not disappoint me"

Saying so She rushed to her cabin leaving a shocked vardaan behind

Soon the news of Vikram's dismiss spread like a fire to all the branches expect........ Branch 2

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Branch 2

There is a huge crowd surrounding table 5........regards the arm wrestling match held between the marketing manager and project manager

Girls were going crazy over the handsome guys while on the rest were cheering the both contenders

U might wonder what the heck is going on......isn't hoity-toity being so generous on them? 🤨

Well not at all...... It's the opposite as Hoity-Toity isn't aware of any of these developments......hell yeah they are too smart get caught😋

First man is in his formals stretched over the muscled biceps,his signature smirk was playing on his face.....It wasn’t that he had a five o’clock shadow at nine-thirty in the morning that screamed “bad boy"......rather he finds himself a little scruffy

"Well brotha get ready to lose" He said

"U know what.....Over confidence sucks " Said the another

A women rushed through the crowd and said

" May I have attention your please"

The first man turned to her, taking this as an advantage the other one taped the first one's hand onto the table declaring himself a winner

"What the f*** Angad " He barked turning back

"Akshat I clearly said over confidence SUCKS.... Guys listen I'm throwing a party tonight... even u are also invited" He said pointing akshat

Now the women has completly lost it and shouted " Wow.... Well done guys Mr. Vikram Rawat is dismissed and u people are planning for a party "she clapped

Akshat and Angad: "Whaaat! "

Akshat:"Are u out of your mind Ms. Lakshmi"

Lakshmi: "No its not me....its hoity-toity who has completly lost her senses.... Mr. Vardaan will be leading this branch from today "

Akshat:"Would u mind explaining how the hell did this happen"

Akshat's blood started boiling when Lakshmi explained the entire drama happened early this morning

Akshat:"This women is getting on my nerves....he deserved a chance for explaination,she is setting bench marks for hitting a new low every day"

Angad :"calm down man, we will find a solution "

Akshat:" I will be confronting her before I lose my sanity " He said sternly

Angad:" u are not doing anything, U are well aware of the consequences right"

Akshat:"I don't care Angad and u are not going to stop me,we can't afford to lose Mr. Rawat"

Lakshmi:"I completly agree with you Mr. Akshat "

Akshat:"Then let's go Ms. Lakshmi.... Hoity-toity I promise, I will make you regret for what happened today "

Angad:"Guys wait"

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Akshat stromed into Guddan's cabin with blood shot eyes in spite the security stopping him, he saw her walking to and fro giving instructions to Revati, its the first time he saw her closely,She was so little...like a bird.... Yet she is a striking beauty ,her elegant personality took his breath away for a second

Now Guddan's huge eyes focused on him

Guddan :"Woah! Hold on Gentleman "

Revati:"Tameez naam ki cheez hai ki nahi aapko"

Their words striked him back to reality,he cursed himself for getting Carried away

Akshat:"I need to talk to Ms.Banerjee and I MEAN IT"

Guddan: " Do I know you gentleman?.... Look the problem is I don't interact with unknown people.....annndddd I also don't have enough time wasting to know the unknown people.....so technically u may leave now and ya when u drop here next time make sure u have an appointment.... Have a nice day" She said faking a smile

Akshat:"Ms.Banerjee u mean your employees need an appointment to meet their boss"

Revati:"How dare you to enter Ms.Banerjee's cabin without a mere permission"

Guddan:"Wait a second! U mean to say that u are a tiny little part of my empire "

Akshat:" Its unfortunately true Ms. Banerjee.....I believe little things often make big things happen"

Guddan:"I'm impressed! Take your seat Mr. Who ever you are"

Revati:"seriously babes"

Guddan:"Revz would you mind sparing us a minute "

Revati:"whatever " Saying so she left

Guddan:"What's the matter Mr. Not so perfect employee "she smirked

Akshat:" Ms. Banerjee I hate going rounds and rounds...so coming to the point will u kindly let me know the actual reason behind Mr. Rawat's dismiss "

Guddan:"If I'm not wrong you are another bug from branch 2 and what makes u think that I would answer your silly question " She said playing with her pen

Akshat:"U have to answer Ms.Banerjee.... He's our leader... Our idol... We can't afford to lose him just for satisfying your angsty"

Guddan:"U mean I'm egoistic....Uh huh I appreciate your guts"

Akshat"Well I don't mind calling a spade a spade "

Guddan:"I can suspend you right now for being disrespectful Mr.Impolite Employee "

Akshat:" Why not Ms.Baneejee.... I don't give a damn about it, it's u who will be losing your reputation for firing employees without a reason "

Guddan:"Are you trying to threaten me?"

Akshat:"When did I threaten you Ms.Banerjee? well if u don't answer my questions.. I will conduct a strike with other employees and revolt against you for the injustice happened to Mr.Rawat.....Which might turn a threat for u and it's my promise"

Guddan:"well then go ahead "

Akshat banged his hands on her table and left the cabin making her grin saucyly

Revati immediately rushed inside and asked

"What the hell was going on"

Guddan: " Relax Revz I was trying to be an armchair critic.......by the way I need all the information about this handsome by evening "

Revati:"why would you want it "

Guddan:"Because I want him to dance on my tunes "😈

Hope you all liked it

Edited by Heliophilia - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Interesting

Continue soon

Thank you

Part 1 is up :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Aaye haaye

Maar dala kya attitude h guddan ka

And akshat ka bhi

Amazing

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Wow Guddan as businesswoman and that too with attitude

Akshat employee of Guddan

Nice characterization

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow guddan as businesswomen inka attitude to katilana hai

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

It is really interesting, looking forward to read the next chapter.

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