Love flourished in college{Akshan FF- Chapter 17 Pg 35 01/07/2019) - Page 24

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Arre tum post kardo yaar 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Actually Sach kahu toh haa as picnic ke end main mujhe lina ki wish puri karni hai and thode serious conversations karne hai issiliye

and ek toh story bhi slow paced hai

Toh what you are saying is actually true but itne jaldi comfort level aayega bhi nahi ek teacher aur student ke beech

And agar jyaada utaawle pan main kuch bhi likh diya toh it can harm characters toh isi liye.

But I will try.

Baaki koi idea ho toh bataiye to increase passion

and mujhe bura kyu lagega?

I understand...Chalo take ur time...

About idea you can show them lost in jungle together...to shayad kuch ho payega....

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Mujhase ho payega but what about others jo label lagayenge ek toh story waise bhi churaayi thi uss main bhi sabko lagta hai yeh mere dimag ka gutter ka keeda tha

Ab inhe kaun samjhaye ki mera dimag sirf copy paste karne tak hi gutter main tha

Abb aage likhungi toh aapko pata hai kya ho jayega yahaan

Are but you already mentioned like 1760 baar k it's not ur story....so don't worry....

Kuch mat socho aur likh do....

Unk bare me mat socho Jo Kya kahenge...but think about them who genuinely want to read ur take on the story with mature contant...

Tum ab likh he do bus...

Originally posted by: Shona1991

I understand...Chalo take ur time...

About idea you can show them lost in jungle together...to shayad kuch ho payega....

end main yahin toh karna tha bass meri story main junglr main mangal nahi hoga.

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Are but you already mentioned like 1760 baar k it's not ur story....so don't worry....

Kuch mat socho aur likh do....

Unk bare me mat socho Jo Kya kahenge...but think about them who genuinely want to read ur take on the story with mature contant...

Tum ab likh he do bus...

and baaki toh maze leke bhul jaayenge band toh meri bajegi

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Haa but phir bhi

and baaki toh maze leke bhul jaayenge band toh meri bajegi

Kuch Chand logo k liye apne it sare friends k Dil mat Todo jinhone tumhe it a request Kara he...

So do continue

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Kuch Chand logo k liye apne it sare friends k Dil mat Todo jinhone tumhe it a request Kara he...

So do continue

Mujhe bhi nahi achha lag raha aapse itni request karwaana but mujhe actually bohot dar lag raha hai

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

He bhagwaan ruko sochti hu but are you sure kisiko koi problem nahi hogi kyunki who thoda jyaada hoga aisa mujhe lagta hai.

Mujhe bhi nahi achha lag raha aapse itni request karwaana but mujhe actually bohot dar lag raha hai

Bus kuch mat socho aur likh he do ab...

Aur tumse yeh ho payega....

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Bus kuch mat socho aur likh he do ab...

Aur tumse yeh ho payega....

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thik hai ab itna insist kar rahe ho toh I will definitely give an try

Hash maan gayi....

Finally....

Ab update Kar Dena jaldi....