Love flourished in college{Akshan FF- Chapter 17 Pg 35 01/07/2019) - Page 23

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Dont be scared yr we r with u

Yeh bhi mera khud ka nahi tha phir bhi aisa huwa na!

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

I know it but then who cheap bhi lag sakta hai and fir there would be many jo mujhe hi galat samjhenge

Yeh bhi mera khud ka nahi tha phir bhi aisa huwa na!

I dont think ki ye kisi ko cheap lagega q ki there are many jiske minds gutter jaise ho chuke hai

Originally posted by: Kammy02

I dont think ki ye kisi ko cheap lagega q ki there are many jiske minds gutter jaise ho chuke hai

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Are yaar relax! aapko padhne de dungi baakiyon ka sochenge but aapko de dungi just don't be judgemental

Mujhe to parhne se mtlb hai😛😆

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Mujhe to parhne se mtlb hai😛😆

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Hmm actually they showed Akshat cooking very passionately isi liye

@ bold kyaa?😲

Are guddan ne to kaha k itni acchi chocolate k khane wale k hath Chum lu...to Kara daiyo kiss😜

@ italics abhi story main romance nahi hai?

He but itna nahi...it look more of durga's story then Akshan

Matlab romantic nahi lagti please guide

Lagti he but bAhot Kam...spark is missing thoda passion ki jarurat he....mujhe lAga k picnic me kuch to hot hoga Akshan k Bich but yaha to Durga he apni kuayali love story me busy he and about guddan and Akshan both are not getting proper time with each other....

Sorry agar bura lAga ho to but mujhe Jo kaga wo bataya...age k parts bAhot acche the par yeh picnic k parts me something is missing....

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

😲😳 let's see you would love to read but I am scared to write

Dubara mat kehna...tumse Sab ho payega gayu...Sab ho payega😜😜

Originally posted by: Shona1991

and ek toh story bhi slow paced hai

Toh what you are saying is actually true but itne jaldi comfort level aayega bhi nahi ek teacher aur student ke beech

And agar jyaada utaawle pan main kuch bhi likh diya toh it can harm characters toh isi liye.

But I will try.

Baaki koi idea ho toh bataiye to increase passion

and mujhe bura kyu lagega?

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Dubara mat kehna...tumse Sab ho payega gayu...Sab ho payega😜😜

Ab inhe kaun samjhaye ki mera dimag sirf copy paste karne tak hi gutter main tha

Abb aage likhungi toh aapko pata hai kya ho jayega yahaan

Arre tum post kardo yaar 👍🏼