SamAina FF : The Lovers Of Destiny [P11 : PG 89] - Page 38

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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh god I am crying like literally.

Naina and Preeti enjoying their girls day out was soo sweet to read

and Sameer just being happy looking at her smiling face.It was soo ethereal I swear.

Sameer got the justice hr deserved and Naina was behind it Sameer got to know that too.

His guilt increased manifold.

It must be so very difficult for Naina to ignore his presence when her heart still yearns for him but the hurt that he has caused her has made her rock solid.

I am really waiting to see how will Sameer melt that rock and get back his Naina.

Edited by munchkinland - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
You made me nostalgic. Now I'm missing our pvkm samaina. That school uniform ❤ It's good that Naina cleared Sameer's name but was it her only purpose of going school? I'm feeling she too wanted to see him. Sameer is full on majnu mode! Poor boy will have a hard time to win back her. In the show nanu gave him the courage but let's see in this story what will make him the old swag wala Sam. Pooja di's shadi will be very very interesting. Sunaina's entry, Sameer's majnu avtar, Naina ki gussa and their destiny ❤ Once again the VOs were too good! It touched my heart. It was a good surprise btw😁😁
Edited by Rph09 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

BEAUTIFUL Update...

I just loved your version of Bet story...

Please update next part soon...😊

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update. Very eager to know how Sameer will make her his. Eagerly waiting for next update. This one was so amazing.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update dear it's becoming more n more interesting


Srilatha

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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh no you stopped it abruptly. Even though after and long wait it was worth watching. Paper incident getting cleared was very nice. Naina enjoying panipuri and gulabjaamun was heart melting. Taking the help from principle sir she cleared the paper incident and this was nice thought and written nicely.

Really excited to know what will happen next. Plz do continue soon.

It was worth reading after long wait. Thank-you so much. Nice update dear. 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Res 😉

Unressss

HASHHHH you aptly named the story The Lovers of Destiny.....

Destiny is playing a game to make them meet, nanu's medicines getting over and Sameer going to the market and Naina also in the very same place as him....

His smile on seeing her, the happiness if seeing his love was so good. Naina is his true happiness, after a long time his smile would have reached his eyes and all because of Naina.

And the mangola momemt brought back many memories. Sameee drinking from her half finished bottle, finishing the drink. Symbolically saying that they are one and not two different people.

And Naina still loves, no matter how much she denies, love can never leave her. She cleared his name and gave him the happiness despite her broken heart. And Sameer knew it would be his Naina cleaning up the misunderstanding

How happy he was but that little tear when Naina went past him reflected that some things might be sorted but still there are many things that has to be sorted... and even Naina had that one lone tear. Both have pain and both love each other.....

Please make them meet and erase all this pain....pleaseeeeeee

Edited by chaaru26 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Home is where love resides, memories are created, friends and family belong and laughter never ends. I could relate to Naina the best here! She is absolutely right. The major part of the homely feeling is felt when we are in our hometown, where we have spent our whole childhood and adolescent years...our hometown forges who we really are in a major way. ❤️


That small moment between the sisters where Preeti tried to emotionally blackmail Naina was very cute. It reminded me of my sister! And, of course, a treat is incomplete without Pani Puri. Thinking about it now makes my mouth water.


Nothing I had guessed after reading the teaser happened. Neither did she see him nor he approached her. Tbh, I was a little disappointed at first but then, I actually was glad that he didn't try to meet her at all. You know why? Because if he had, he would have ruined the sisters' day out and I can't handle that. I am content with him drinking from her Mangola. ❤️


So, Naina finally cleared Sameer's name. If there is something I hold against our dear show's writers, it's the paper stealing never got a closure. I don't ask for a closure for every single thing but paper stealing was the crux of the plot which shouldn't be taken lightly. It was injustice done to Sameer and thankfully, we have our forum writers who had given their way of ending to this fiasco. I loved your version too but this is working as a slight disadvantage for poor Sameer's mind too.


Not related to the story, you know the breakfast moment between Nanu and Sameer in the update? It reminded me of the scene just before Nanu has a heart attack. Where he has just a piece of Jalebi and then leaves the room in a rush for the farewell party but then, comes back and has it again from his hands, hugs him or touches his feet (I don't remember) and leaves. For a moment, my heart was gripped with fear.


I enjoyed the update very much, Twinnie! 🤗😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update

Each and every scene was so well written

Preena enjoying in market and Sameer enjoying seeing Naina happy

Bua dadi and taiji's banter

And the whole school scene

Very beautifully written..update soon🙂

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi Octo

Another beautiful update. Is baar fursat ke lamhe ka wait na karte huve replying as soon as I read while on my way to ofc..

Good to see Naina is enjoying the stay at hone and relaxing. Nothing is better than coming home and relaxing. Most of us have moved away from hometown either for job or after marriage. The way you have portrayed Naina's coming back home is so relatable.😍

I loved Naina Preeti convo in the show and you have portrayed it so well here. Sisters dayout mast tha 👌

The paper stealing incident you have closed it well without blaming anyone and clearing Sameers name.

Mohabbat be panah dono ko hai par kuch zakhm bharne mein waqt lagta hai. But still she still gors ahead to clear his name thats the love she has for him. Sameer is happy seeing her. Atleast Mangola sharing to huva.

Koi to bata de Naina ko Sameer badal gaya hai atleast she will be happy hearing he has become more responsible.

The last part of both seeing each other with tears dil ko chu gaya.

Afreen tujhko hasrat-e-deedar(yearning to see u)

Chasme-e-tar (tears in eyes) se zuban ka kaam liye

( Yearning to see you ,the tears of eyes did the job of tongue. ... meaning yearning to see you was told by my tears in the eyes)

Keep writing ,if the responses are not so great . Those who read will have a smile on their face and thats more than enough.

Luv

Sajida

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