Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 70

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelsanvika08

Nice chapter nish

Thanks..

Sorry itne dino se tumhare story main comment nahi kar pa rahi thi

Its cool, aajkal sab busy hain...even i have papers😵

I love akshan's maggi wala pyar

Flattered to know that😆

Continue soon nish

Main ne jiss chapter se padhna band kar diya tha uss chapter se iss chapter tak all are good main ne sab ek din main padh dala

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Posted: 6 years ago

Loved their try of confessing in Talli mode.

Akshat's Bulldog comparison to Guddiya cheeks😆

Guddiya's bulldog to bulldozer dialogue🤣

Nish you are too good at writing emotional scene which I already saw during coma updates but this update was totally different & I must say you did a very good job in this style to 👏

All the best for your exams👍🏼. Btw how many total papers you have?

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Posted: 6 years ago

It was really a funny update

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Loved their try of confessing in Talli mode.

Akshat's Bulldog comparison to Guddiya cheeks😆

Guddiya's bulldog to bulldozer dialogue🤣

Nish you are too good at writing emotional scene which I already saw during coma updates but this update was totally different & I must say you did a very good job in this style to 👏

Glad to know that😃i was kinda worried since i'm a rather dry person when it comes to humor but the response i've garnered is quite positive..makes me happy!

All the best for your exams👍🏼. Btw how many total papers you have?

As of now 4 more to go~🤓

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

It was really a funny update

Glad to know u enjoyed!

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nish we r waiting....😭

Update sooooooooooon🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 41 - Beginning of the End

Durga, Lakshmi and Saru smiled as Guddan appeared out of the closet dressed in an emerald green satin saree.

Durga smiled yet again. This was the sixth saree that Guddan had tried, just for AJ.

“How is this one?” Guddan enquired, shining brightly.

“Bahot achi, the moment AJ will see you today, baaki sab kuch unhe dhundhla lagega!” Lakshmi teased.

“Why so!?”Guddan quipped back, genuinely confused.

Lakshmi and Saru looked at each other in disbelief and broke into laughter. How innocent and naïve their Guddan is!

Durga couldn’t help but chuckle as Saru and Lakshmi went on to tease Guddan, only to have their teasings deflected by her thick headedness. There was a time when they didn’t like her because of their misconceptions. But kanha ji had truly blessed the Jindal family by giving them a girl, whose heart didn’t know what malice was!

“Enough of your mischief, let me check the preparations once more”,Guddan chided them and was about to go, when she turned to Durga.

“Is the cake really according to his taste?” Guddan asked sceptically.

Durga shook her head. It was already the 11th time she was asked this exact question in that exact apprehensive tone.

“No, this cake is going to promote AJ’s taste buds to another level of bliss”,Durga complimented, making Guddan feel content and left from there.

“Jiji, It has been a year since then”, Saru reminded.

“Hmm,the first time AJ and Guddan met!”

~*~*~*~*~*~

Akshat leaned back in his chair and closed his eyes, when a flash of someone’s face forced his eyes open.Feeling tired, as he massaged his eyes between his forefingers, his eyes found the ring in his ring finger and the memory of his engagement resurfaced.Exasperated, he left the chair and started roaming around the cabin, disturbed.However his mini-walk was interrupted when a chirpy woman materialised out of nowhere, into his path. He continued to look at her mesmerised, as a chuckle escaped his lips seeing her stick her tongue out and roll her eyes in comical ways. He found himself moving closer to her when a knock on the door interrupted him and he turned around brimming with annoyance.

“What is it?” He barked at the butler.

“Sir….there’s a call for you from…”, the butler stammered when AJ waved his palms dismissively at him signalling him to get lost.

As AJ turned around, there was only thin air to stare at. Confused, he looked around the room, under the table but to no avail. Feeling perplexed, he picked up the phone that butler left on table and picked it up.

“Chandukechachanechandukichachikochandniraatmeinchaandikichamachsechatnichatai” and a beautiful laughter echoed from the other end.

Smiling at her antiques, he leaned against the table and heard her go on about how no one can beat her at tongue twisters.

“Chandukechachanechandukichachikochandniraatmeinchaandikichamachsechatnichatai”, Akshat copied and smirked as a cute whining voice grazed his ears. He could already picture her slamming her legs against the floor in frustration, like a cute kid she is.

“How was that?” He asked triumphantly.

“I didn’t get a word of what you were saying Mr. Akshat!” A man shouted on the other end of phone, startling AJ.

Shocked, AJ pulled the phone away from his ears and rolled his eyes from left to right while biting his lips. Furrowing his brows, he pressed the phone against his ears once again.

“Mr. AJ, are you there!? Hello! Mr. AJ!”

Akshat’s eyes widened and perplexed, he enquired “Who is this?”

“I’ve been screaming my head off for the past 15 minutes and you are asking who I am?! I never took you for the kind of person to engage in silly pranks!” the man spoke disappointed.

AJ bit his tongue on recognising the voice. Mr. Ahuja!

“I’ve had enough for today!” And before AJ could let out another word, the call was cut.

What was happening with him? Why did he feel so lost?

AJ looked at Antara’s photo on his desk for answers but his eyes found reflection of someone else,overshadowing Antara. The small smile that had been playing on his lips ever since was wiped off as he turned around to come face to face with the huge photo that his mother had forced him to hung.

The photo was taken a few months back when the entire family had gone for to their holiday house in the valley . It was the best time of his life. His family had felt complete, with a genuine smile playing on his son’s and DIL’s lips, that too, in his company.His eyes went to the center of photo, where he glared at her whilst she stuck her tongue out on being caught, making horns with her fingers, behind his head.

And he couldn’t tear his gaze away, he didn’t want to. She looked every bit the angel she is, in that pom-pom cap over her head, as her hair cascaded down like waves of water,dancing gracefully to the tune of nature. Enchanted, he raised his left hand and lightly skimmed his fingers over her, in the photo whilst a forlorn smile danced on his lips.

The moment was interrupted when a gust of wind flew past the slight opening in windows and knocked something down. AJ turned around, snapping out of his day dreaming to see Antara’s photo lying face down on the floor. Quickly, he leaned down and overturned the photo only to see that the glass had developed cracks.

“Now from where did this gust of wind come from?” he questioned to no one and keeping Antara’s photo face down on the table, moved towards the windows to close them.

But the instant he stepped closer to the windows, few drops of rain splashed across his face, forcing his eyes shut.

“Kar di na buzurgon wali baat, baarish ki chaar bundon se mujhe zukaam nhi hoga!” she taunted and twirled in the rain like a seamstress.

AJ opened his eyes and smiled for the nth time. “And for the next 4 days you were sneezing your head off!”

~*~*~*~*~*

Akshat entered through the main iron gates, dripping wet. He didn’t like soaking in the rains but today he just felt like it. And it was one of the best experiences of his life. She was right.

Baarish mein na kabhi bike par baithkar,baahein failakar baarish ki boondon ko apni jeeb par taste karna, mazaa aa jayega”.

AJ chuckled. He didn’t own a bike and to spread his arms, he needed not to drive one. He did feel a little foolish though, sticking out his tongue like that to taste rain drops! She was definitely going to be impressed by this feat of his.

~*~*~*~*~

“Papa will die from overdose of happiness!” Lakshmi stated, seeing the preparations.

“Aur nhi toh kya, you should have looked at his face in the morning when Guddan had pretended not to remember his birthday, he was sulking!”, Saru giggled.

Flashback:

“Good morning”, Akshat greeted stepping into the hall, where everyone was seated forbreakfast.

“Good morning!” Everyone chimed back and started to get their plates stuffed with food. Surprised, Akshat joined them on the table and looked at everyone. They were certainly immersed in stuffing their mouths!

“What will you have?” Guddan asked turning to him.

“Haa…vo..papad..” Akshat stammered caught off guard. She looked….stunning! This was the exact same thought he was encountering for the past few days, every time they would face off!

Guddan looked at him weirdly. However when the sons started coughing mockingly, AJ set them straight with a glare.

As they started eating, AJ coughed again and yet again. Guddan got up quickly and pushed glass of water closer to his lips, while thumping his back and neck to ease his cough. Akshat rotated his eyeballs in her direction to see her worried face and mock coughed extra hard yet again. Panicking, Guddan rapidly massaged his neck while the family members looked on, suppressing a chuckle.

“I didn’t know that food was awfully spicy, I didn’t taste it. Saru bahu, you know na, he has allergy and can’t stomach spices too well, inka paachan tantra kamzor hai!” Guddan informed in a serious voice, making AJ splutter the water in his mouth, out. He looked over the table to see, Kishore choking on his food, Vardaan trying too hard to suppress his chuckle while everyone was almost laughing at him.

Hopelessly, he stared at Guddan. Kar di na Guddan wali baat!

“Are you fine now?” she enquired in her innocent voice, diffusing his embarrassment.

In reponse, he nodded and signalled her to sit back.

He waited and waited but no one, mind you, no one said a word that he wanted to hear!

“Guddan,what’s the date today?” He asked.

“27 september” Guddan shrugged and got back to watching dance sessions on you tube.

Akshat coughed yet again. “Aren’t you forgetting something?” He asked forcing a smile across his stiff face.

“Hmmm….” Guddan looked up with a thoughtful face and then her face brightened, “Is it Karan’s birthday today?!!”

At that very moment, Karan shuddered as a malevolent aura threatened to strangle him!

“Nhi, his birthday is nextweek though!” Guddan shrugged nonchalantly.

Akshat has had enough! She freakin remembered that Karan’s birthday but not his! Her Husband’s! How infuriating?! Fine then! He didn’t care if no one wished! He didn’t give a flying fig!

And with his brows furrowed and waves of anger emanating from his eyes, sliding the chair back, he marched out of the house, not before pouting like a bratty kid in Guddan’s direction!

~*~*~*~*~

‘Jindal saab was looking so cute with that pout on his lips!’

Guddan chuckled as she took in a deep breath and took a look at her watch. It is time. To confess.

As the main doors were pushed open and a silhouette of 6’3” stepped inside, the lights were switched on as confetti was popped on his head and shouts of ‘Happy Birthday’ rang all across the room.

Akshat smiled, seeing his dear ones wishing him. He should have known! They loved him more than he’d credit them for. Instinctively, his eyes went for his wife, who was standing on the stairs draped in a magnificent green, whilst hiding her face behind a heart shaped balloon. So much had changed in the span of past one year. He wasn't alone anymore. He was happy. This birthday seemed like a birthday! She had changed his life for the better.

Unconsciously, he took steps in her direction and stopped at the foot of stairs. Standing two stairs away, she peeked from behind the balloon and mouthed, ‘Happy birthday, My Love’

His heart thudded as she blushed. My love! And then his pulse skyrocketed as she turned the balloon and flashed three very important words, “I LOVE YOU”

His lips lifted in a sweet smile of acceptance and he had just taken a step in her direction, when he looked up behind her to see Antara backing away step by step. His eyes widened as his eyes darted back and forth between Guddan and Antara and then his office bag slipped from his hands. He closed his eyes in desperation as only one face flashed in front, the one with the craziest antiques and sweetest tendencies.

HE IS IN LOVE WITH GUDDAN!

But Antara was disappearing! Those moments with her were being overwritten by the ones he had with Guddan.

Akshat opened his eyes shocked as he looked behind Guddan to see Antara disappear into thin air.

This can’t be! This can not be!

Part 42 - Denial https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150401154?tid=5034085

HOW WAS IT?

APOLOGIES FOR THE LATE UPDATE FOLKS! BUT MY PAPERS ARE DONE FOR GOOD! YIPEE!!

WITH this chapter, we are starting the journey towards the end! Iss safar ki manzil ab zyada door nhi hai!

Be prepared folks, because I'll be wrapping up this FF real soon.

And have your seatbelt on, as we embark on a roller coaster journey from here onwards. Because haven't we heard...

Pyaar karne se LOVE STORY banti hai but,

Pyaar nibhaane se FAIRY TALES banti hai.

Guddan aur Akshat ne pyaar kar toh liya but ab usse nibhaane ki baari hai! Will they pass or fail!?😃


Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Oooooo eeeeemmmmmm jjjjjjjiiiiiioiii

Ye kya kiyaaa......💔

But I m very much emotional ki ye khatam hone wala hai.....😭

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderful update Nish. Finally Guddan confessed

Safar ka end toh hum nahi chahte par

Update soon

PS- secret and lies bhi update Kar do😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Finally guddan confessed her feelings now its Aj turn bechara Antra and guddan ke bich fas gya

Continue soon

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