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Posted: 6 years ago
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Prologue

You know what you are no less than keep geet.. what are you to that man.. nothing but a mistress and why just because you don't find your marital bed fascinating enough to keep yourself contained... Spat Nandini who was looking at Geet with such hatred that could even kill someone but it didn't had any emotion on the girl infront of her.

I don't mind being a mistress, you get Nandini Rajput.. now just get the hell out of here.. I don't need one more person to remind me that i am cheating on him. She said in a cold voice and got up to leave. She didn't anyone more. She was happy in her own world and she doesn't need anyone preaching her what she does is wrong.

Geet.. why don't you understand that you are destroying three lives now.. nandini's faint voice didn't reach geet as she had went out of the room leaving the remains of her shattered relationship.

Not all relations are perfect.. it is necessary to hold their value...

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Story is about infidelity
So read accordingly.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice prologue... Geet is married n cheating on him... But loving maaneet charactera wants maaneet together in any form...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi

Nice prologue... Geet is married n cheating on him... But loving maaneet charactera wants maaneet together in any form...



ab geet kisko Cheat kar Rahi hai it's difficult to tell now
husband or Maan
Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh scary scary
Whom Geet cheating ?
Do I need to cry ?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Oh scary scary

Whom Geet cheating ?
Do I need to cry ?



after watching Kalank all I could think of this concept
ab you need to cry or not
I can't tell as of now
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting concept😊
Geet is maaried
She is cheating her husband😲 but who's her husband
Waiting for part 1😊
Edited by crazy-dd-fan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana



after watching Kalank all I could think of this concept
ab you need to cry or not
I can't tell as of now

Ohhh kalank nehi ishq hai kajal piya😳 hehe ( I like this line only 😕)
Between how was the movie
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


Ohhh kalank nehi ishq hai kajal piya😳hehe ( I like this line only😕)
Between how was the movie



sach Bolun
it was average
Aditya Roy Kapoor was the only good thing in the movie
and Sonakshi too
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So geet is married but she is cheating
She is not intrested to listen to any body she is doing what she want
Nice part waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congratulations on the new story Suhana.

Usually I skip reading but...Since it's you plus the Title indeed caught my attention!!

And After reading the prologue now am nearly destroyed!

Save me and Say whatever it is, infidelity or whatever But Geet loves Maan!! 😆

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