AlaSmine FS: Revenge Part 7 updated on page 11

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Meher read a letter with no name designated on it... Only a letter A was written on it so meher interpreted it to be written by Aladdin in which he states that he did not love her and they are not meant for each other... He also stated he had fallen in love with another girl.. After reading this Meher was furious and angry she crushed the letter and throwed it in the burning torch... The fire light out both in her heart and mind...

Meher-tumhe iss dhoke ki keemat chukaani hogi Aladdin...

There was a small pet bird who was chirping a lot..
Meher turned towards the bird's cage..

Meher - kya hua.. Meri pyaare panchi...

But the chirping still continues and it seems that the bird want to fly away...

Meher - ab tumhe bhi mujhse door jana hai na...

Chirping stopped and meher grew furious it was her favorite pet and it chose for freedom over her...
Meher in anger put cage on fire...

Bird cried in agony..

Meher - yahi haal hum tumhaara karenge Aladdin... Humne tumse pyaar kiya.. Aur.. Aur tumne kya kiya... Humaare saath dhoka... Saza toh milegi tumhe...

Aladdin was coming back from the market.. When he felt that someone was following him.. He tried to walk faster to avoid the worst scenario but suddenly he saw two man coming from front.. He tried to avoid them but they stopped him.. He tried to rum but was grabbed by one of them and soon made unconscious by banging a rod hard on his head...

Somewhere in the dense forest near Baghdad...
There was base camp of some dacoits..
In there store room... Aladdin was tied with ropes and was unconscious...

Suddenly a man dressed in costume of an army chief and having a masculine figure came near him and poured a bucket of water on him...

Aladdin soon came out of that unconscious state...

Chief- uth warna issi paani mein duba kar jaan lelunga...

Aladdin somehow managed to gain consciousness...

Aladdin - main.. Main kaha hoon aur yeh mujhe baadh kar kyu rakha hai tum logo ne...

Chief - chup zyada sawaal nahi poochte... Hume yeh karne ke liye bola gaya hai...

Aladdin - par kisne aur kyu???

Chief - jaldi pata chal jayega...

Aladdin seems to be confused and even after asking n number of times... The answer was the same...

In the royal palace of Baghdad...

Yasmine was personally hearing to pleads of common people.. Suddenly she saw a woman rushing towards her... In the midway she was stopped by guards...

Guard - aap andar nahi jaa sakti... Abhi Shehzaadi mulk ke sabse bade vyaapari ki fariyaad sun rahi hai...

Yasmine - aap samajh kyu nahi rahe... Agar hum aapko isse zyada kar mein choot nahi de sakte...

Yasmine soon noticed the lady and ask the guard to leave her...

Yasmine - hum aapki fariyaad sunenge...

Trader(in a compelling voice) - par aap ne toh yeh samay humaari fariyaad ke liye diya tha...

Yasmine - aap fariyaad nahi hukum sunane aaye the... Aur shezaadi hukum sunne ke liye janta se nahi milte...

Soon trader left the room..

Yasmine - uss aurat ko humaare paas laaya jaye...

The woman was wearing burkha and when she removed her burkha... Yasmine was shocked as she was non other than Ruksaar...

Yasmine soon modulated her voice..

Yasmine - ammi... Mera matlab boliye khala jaan hum kaisi madad kar sakte hai...

Ruksaar - shezaadi suna hai aap bohot nek dil hai.. Meri fariyaad yeh hai ki... Mera beta do raato se ghar nahi lauta... Kotwaal saheb ko bataya toh unhone bhi koi karyawaahi nahi ki... Shezaadi aap hi ek aakhiri umeed hai...

Yasmine was shocked to that Aladdin was missing.. She knew that he sometimes stay out of home but not for such a long time...

Ruksaar was almost in tears...

Yasmine consoled her..

Yasmine - aap fikar mat kariye hum Aladdin ko jald se jald dhund lenge...

Ruksaar - par aapko kaise pata ki mere bete ka naam aladdin hai...

Yasmine - vo hume.. Aap hi ne toh abhi bataya ki uska nam Aladdin hai... Aap bhi na bhool gayi khala jaan...

Ruksaar was confued and soon accepted it as she was not in a state of mind to think so much...

Yasmine dismissed the session after this news and ask to show pending cases tomorrow...

Yasmine - piddi hume thoda ekant chahiye... Koi humaare kaksh mein nahi aana chahiye...

Piddi - jo hukum shezaadi...

Piddi was shocked to see tears in Yasmine's eyes... She was thinking what could be the reason for this sudden change...

Yasmine locked herself in her room and sat in the position for praying...

Yasmine - yah allah!! Aladdin ko salamat rakhna... Yeh meri tujhse iltaza hai...

Hope you like the first part of this TS... It is a bit emotional at start but will turn into thrill and adventure soon. Do like, comment and tell me your opinion on this part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow this seems very interesting dear 👍🏼👏. Liked it . Seems like Our Aladdin's Nakchadi will go save hee Kaala chor and together AlaSmine will fight with evil Mehar 😎👍🏼
Do update the next part soon .Can't wait .
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Fantastic 👏👏loved it👏👏
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Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Wow this seems very interesting dear 👍🏼👏. Liked it . Seems like Our Aladdin's Nakchadi will go save hee Kaala chor and together AlaSmine will fight with evil Mehar 😎👍🏼

Do update the next part soon .Can't wait .

Thanks Dear, yes there is a fighting sequence in it.. I plotted meher not as evil but like over possessive girl who thinks if a thing does not belong to me then it belongs to noone...
Will try to update ASAP
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Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Fantastic 👏👏loved it👏👏

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like it.. Will try to update ASAP 😳
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Dear, yes there is a fighting sequence in it.. I plotted meher not as evil but like over possessive girl who thinks if a thing does not belong to me then it belongs to noone...
Will try to update ASAP


That's great ..Can't wait 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I could really imagine the scenes ❤️ Wonderful !!

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Originally posted by: radhu-taarey

I could really imagine the scenes ❤️ Wonderful !!

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like it... BTW what's your name dear??
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like it... BTW what's your name dear??


Radhika 😊
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Very nice...
Continue soon

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