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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

In the Royal palace of Baghdad...

Yasmine called a black Masked man who seemed to be a spy...

Yasmine - hume batao kuch khabar laaye ho Aladdin ke bare mein...

Masked man- ji haan shezaadi!!! Aapne jis ladke ke baare mein pata lagane bheja tha uska pata chal gaya hai...

Yasmine's face brighten up as she saw some hope to find her dearest Aladdin...

Yasmine - kya pata chala.. Bolo na..

Masked man- hume pata chala hai ki Aladdin ko aakhiri baar Baghdad ke mukhya bazaar mein dekha gaya tha... Aur phir hume uska yeh thaila baghdad ke paas waale jungle mein mila.. Par

Masked man bowed his head down in disappointment...

Yasmine - par... kya hua khabari ruk kyo gaye??

Masked man- Gustaakhi maaf ho shezaadi par hume umeed kam hai ki woh ladka zinda uss jungle se bahar aa payega... Kyuki wah jungle mushhoor daaku ki toli ke liye jaana jaata hai... Jo bhi uss jungle mein unki izaazat ke bina gaya hai Unhone aaj tak kisi ki jaan nahi bakshi toh uss ladke ki kyu bakshenge..

Yasmine stopped him by raising his right hand and asked him to leave...

Yasmine - aisa kuch nahi hoga... Hum Aladdin ko kuch nahi hone denge... Hum apni jaan de denge par tumhe kuch nahi hone denge kaalechor...

In Yasmine 's room

Piddi- Shezaadi aap akele uss bhayanak jungle mein uss mamuli ladke ke liye jaana chaahti hai...

Yasmine - piddi!!! Vo mamuli nahi hai humaare liye... Agar use kuch ho gaya toh hum apne aap ko taa umra maaf nahi kar payenge...

Piddi- itna lagav uss ladke se kyu shezaadi... Kya lagta hai vo aapka...

Yasmine - koi azeez.. Koi jiske saath har lamha tham sa jaata hai... Koi jise dard mein dekhkar humaare dil dard sa hota hai... Koi jise hum khona nahi chaahte...

Puddi- phir toh vo koi. Mehboob hi ho sakta hai... Shezaadi
Yasmine didn't respond... As she don't even know what relationship they both share...

Piddi - Gustaakhi maaf ho shehzaadi... Hum aapki kaabiliyat par shak nahi kar rahe par hume lagta hai ki aapko kisi ki madad le leni chahiye...

Yasmine was quite probably her continuous crying in alone could probably made her throat choked to say more words... From outer she was a stone, strong and bold to face challenges but from inside she was like a clay, soft and gentle who has an artist like Aladdin to carve on it

Next morning...

Yasmine went to Aladdin's house... Yasmine knew that she will require someone as a backup so she came to ask jinn to help her in her mission...

Yasmine - Sheikh Jinu!! Kya aap ghar par hai...
Jinn-pyaari pareshaani ji aap yaha... Aapko pata hai Aladdin...
Yasmine - haan Sheikh jinu hum jaante hai... Aur hume aapki madad chahiye aapke bhaayi ko dhoodne mein...

Jinu- meri madad par kaise pyaaripareshaani ji... Mujhe tob yeh bhi nahi pata ki Aladdin ko kaha dhudna hai...

Yasmine - vo sab hum par chod dijiye... Hume pata chala hai ki Aladdin ko Baghdad ke paas wale junglo mein kahi le jaaya gaya hai... Aur hum yeh chaahte hai ki agar hum teen pahar ke baad wapas nahi laute toh aap humaare daura chodi gayi nishaaniyo ka peecha karte karte hum tak pahooch jaana...

Jinn-par aap akele uss jungle mein... Main bhi aapke saath chalta hoon waha bohot khatara ho sakta hai...

Yasmine - humaari fikar mat kijiye hume kuch nahi hoga... Hum Aladdin ke liye kisi bhi khatare ka saamna kar sakye hai... Aap tab tak aami jaan ka khayal rakhiye ga...

Jinn-Thik hai pyaaripareshaani ji par apna dhyan rakhiye ga...
Somewhere in the nearby forest of Baghdad...

Suddenly a Girl in Burkha came near Aladdin who tied with a rock...

Aladdin - tum kon ho... Aur maine tumhaara kya bigaada hai...
She slightly removed her Burkha... Aladdin was shocked to see meher in it he could not digest the fact that she whom he loved so much was the one behind his kidnapping...

Aladdin - Shezaadi aap!! Yaha... Yeh yeh sab ek mazaak hai na... Aap mujhse zaroor khafaa hai na tabhi mujhse akele mein milke baat karna chahti hai...

Aladdin still cannot process the truth and was trying his best to convince his mind that what he was seeing is all a bad dream...

Meher devilishly smiled at him and took a small blunt knife from her knife holder attached to her waist..

Meher-Bohot maasum ban rahe hona...humne tumhe kitna pyaar kiya aur tumne hume iss kadar dhoka diya..

Aladdin - dhoka!!

Before Aladdin could clarify her misunderstanding she stabbed him with the knife... Brutally...
Aladdin screamed in Agony...

Meher-dard hua...hona bhi chahiye meher ke saath dhoka karne waale ke saath yahi hona chaahiye...

Meher leaved him dying in pain.. The infinite amount of pain that she had inflicted to him made it difficult for him to speak.. But his last hope was his own beloved Nachidii!!

Aladdin very slowly - Sana... Sana..

Soon he closed his eyes...

Yasmine was on her white horse ready to venture deep in the jungle to find Aladdin...

Yasmine suddenly felt as if she felt pain in her heart...

Yasmine - ouch!! Yeh dard kaisa... Kahi..nahi nahi... Aladdin ko kuch nahi ho sakta.. Hum usse kuch nahi hone denge... Hum aa rahe hai Aladdin...

Yasmine rushed inside the forest without thinking about the risk on her life.. She has only one purpose left to save Aladdin, to save Her love...

Hope you like the second part of the FS... Sorry In this I am not showing Piddi as a lover so she is completely unaware of Aladdin... The two parts lack AlaSmine scenes but I promise that next part will have too many emotional, romantic and cute AlaSmine scenes... Do like, comment and tell your opinion about this part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Luckyforever1

Very nice...

Continue soon

Thanks dear, I have posted the 2nd part above...do read it and tell me your opinion on it..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow dear 2nd part aas so thrilling 👏
That Evil Mehar Stabbed My Aladdin sk brutally and left him alone to die ? 😭

Loved how Aladdin's last word before closing his eyes was Sana

Cant wait to see Yasmine's reaction on Seeing her love Aladdin sucked in blood lying down almost dead 😭

Update the next part soon plzzz
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Wow dear 2nd part aas so thrilling 👏

That Evil Mehar Stabbed My Aladdin sk brutally and left him alone to die ? 😭

Loved how Aladdin's last word before closing his eyes was Sana

Cant wait to see Yasmine's reaction on Seeing her love Aladdin sucked in blood lying down almost dead 😭

Update the next part soon plzzz


Thanks dear, I am glad that you find the part thrilling..
Yes, Meher thinks that Aladdin had betrayed her love.. And he deserves a death statement for this...
If Aladdin was asked to made a last wish it would be Yasmine for sure...
Definitely next part will be containing the emotional balance made by Yasmine...
Will update soon dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
This is such an interesting story thank u for sharing
Meher is so evil did she really leave Aladdin to die 😭
Meher called said her own name right when she was talking about "dhoka? Maybe Aladdin will realize on that she is not Yasmine and loved that Aladdin called out Sana when he was hurt
Also does yasmine know that Jinu is a Jin ?
Can't wait for next part do update soon
Edited by AProudBookworm - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ananya just started reading this FS . First part is really emotional. Now going to read 2nd part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved this part👏👏👏
Do update soon
Also plz update your another story fast
Can you tell when will you update both the stories
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

This is such an interesting story thank u for sharing
Meher is so evil did she really leave Aladdin to die 😭
Meher called said her own name right when she was talking about "dhoka? Maybe Aladdin will realize on that she is not Yasmine and loved that Aladdin called out Sana when he was hurt
Also does yasmine know that Jinu is a Jin ?
Can't wait for next part do update soon

Thanks dear for the appreciation...
Yes meher left Aladdin to die because according to her anyone who betray her must face the death... She don't even care about how much Aladdin loved her...
There is a reason why I made Meher say her own name.. Definitely Aladdin will come to know that she was not his Childhood love yasmine... But there is bit more twist and turnst.. I would like to relish the suspense.. So stay tuned..
No Yasmine is still a unaware of Jinu being jinn...
Will update soon .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanchita1410

Ananya just started reading this FS . First part is really emotional. Now going to read 2nd part

Take your time to read Snachita... Hope you will like bothbthe partsp.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Loved this part👏👏👏

Do update soon
Also plz update your another story fast
Can you tell when will you update both the stories

Thanks shirin, It will take little time to update the next part of this story...
But will try to update next part of another story either by Tonight or tomorrow..
Thanks for reading...

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