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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

FOR TRUE NORTH


tara wants to set book on fire😆
Well, she is frustrated 😉

it actually sound funny ...to bolw on page to read somthing😆😆😆
Yeah😆

but tara did and words started arranging...whole scene i can visualize👏
I am glad you were able to visualize it 😃

tata was emotional scene where guruji consoles tara and think of past😭
Yes, it was😊

so guruji solved the problem of tara and gave her belonging of kalawati👏👏👏
He did solved it😃

tara did spell and find about super blue blood moon👏👏👏
She is getting better in her work😃

guruji helped her to find more about kalawati and tara did same and located her location where she would be to increase her strength👏
yes, they did😊

tara and mj scene was nice👏👏
Thanks 😃

so, finally jairaj is going to find tara👏👏👏👏
Yes, he is😃


Thanks for reading and commenting 😃

I am glad you still read and reply 😃
Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Darkness on the Edge

so jairaj still in search of tara !!!!!!!!!
Yeah, he is

aradhana is worried about tara and vasu consolling her👏
Vasu is mature than what many think 😊

meethi is also worried and shared this with adi👏👏
It's good to have to share your worry😊

tara is restless, so she goes upto mj...offcourse he is her sukun...😆😆
yeah 😉

mj filled faith in tara👏👏👏
Yes, he did 😃

mj noticed that guruji was tensed at dinner...this makes him worried too!!!!!!!!
He is observant

tara felt that mj is tensed..but mj didnt tell her...both slept tightly hugged😳😳
He doesn't want to worry her before he knows what's the problem

so finally guruji said about vault..from where kalawati invite other people...
yeah

mj is angry as guruji didnt let him know at dinner
Guruji just wanted to delay it 😊

tara reading books to find new thing to break kalawati spell...
She is very keen to help in anyway😊

tara finally found and informed guruji about this...👏
Yes, she did found something😊


Thanks for reading and commenting😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Page23...



mj was tired and tara want to make him comfortable ...so did magic which she learned👏
Yeah, she did 😃

firs mj was frightened as he didnt find tara..then he saw her at some distance👏👏👏
After attack of Kala, he is quiet worried for her😊

they went to the lake and revive their meomry👏👏👏
Yes, they do need some free time😊

she practise that magic very well👏👏👏
Yup, she did 😃

she dont want to leave any unturned stone ..so she asked guruji that why they cant go earliear than kalawati and close the vult
She knows how delicate is every step they take

but guruji refused as it takes most of energy of tara...
He knows Tara is still new to magic 😊

tara didnt stop and start preparing and finding the spell for vault...
She is determined to be prepared for the worst 😊

she found page 23...but warning was given and she didnt followed that 👏
It's good she found something but it can have consequence

she practised but nothing happend😡😡😡
She is trying. She is already tired


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Posted: 6 years ago




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It was still night when they had started their journey back towards the city. They were riding their horses at the top of their capability. By the time they neared the city, the sun was up in the sky.


Mrityunjay was riding Maria as fast as possible. Maria didn't complain about his harsh riding. She knew the state of her master and complied with it. While riding, he had seen Tara's face once in the moonlight. It was not as pale as earlier but it was still far from being called healthy. In the light of the sun, Tara seemed more fragile. Mrityunjay just wanted this ride to end and a physician to see her.


Soon they neared the city. From far away, the hooves of horses were heard. A knight rode in front of the group to move the crowd out of the path. The knight was closely followed by Mrityunjay, the King, and Govind behind him, who was further followed by the knights. People lined up on either side of the street till the palace to see the troop galloping swiftly towards it past them.



When they entered the city, word of the King's return spread like wildfire and soon reached the Palace. As soon as the news of the King's return reached the Palace, Aradhana, Nirmala, Aditya, Meethi, and Vasu rushed to the gates.


When they reached the gates, they received an update to the previous news. It said the King was returning with his knights, two more men, and an unconscious lady. Nirmala soon understood who were returning. Her eyes welled up with tears of happiness. She ordered to ready the infirmary immediately and turned to Aradhana. "Our children are returning, she said clasping her hand with Aradhana's hand. Aradhana got confused but didn't question her Queen.



When the troop was moving through the city, everyone was amazed at the unknown man on the horse with the unconscious lady. He was radiating power which demanded respect. In the crowd, someone recognized Govind and soon whispers started spreading. Someone shouted from the crowd, "It's the prophet!


Mrityunjay heard this but ignored it as the most important thing to him at that time was Tara. He rode faster seeing the gates of the Palace. Soon the approaching troop was visible from the Palace. By now the group was led by Mrityunjay. The royal family, along with Aradhana, was standing near the Palace gates.


Princess Vasu was the first to see them. "Who is that man in front? she asked facing Nirmala.


Nirmala didn't move her eyes away from the troop seeing her son after a long time and whispered, "My son.


All heads turned towards Nirmala in astonishment. By now the troop had reached the gates. Mrityunjay immediately untied Tara from him and got down from his mare. He scooped her into his arms and moved towards his waiting family. Seeing Tara unconscious, everyone rushed to her.


Aradhana gasped seeing her daughter unconscious. She burst into tears. Suddenly someone put their hand on her shoulder and she looked at the man whose hand was on her shoulder. Looking at him, her eyes bulged out. "Go...Govind! she stammered and fainted. Both Tara and Aradhana were immediately taken to the infirmary.


The healer was already present in the infirmary. He checked Tara and when he was satisfied that her life was out of danger, he relaxed. Tara's healing power had slowly started to heal her now. He gave Tara some potion and assured everyone that she would wake up in a few hours.


By now Aradhana was up. When she opened her eyes, she found her husband sitting beside her. She hugged him tightly and wept all the unshed tears that she had kept within her. When her sobs subsided, she looked at the bed next to her and saw Tara sleeping there. Colour to Tara's cheeks had returned and her lips were red again but she was still unconscious. Mrityunjay was sitting beside her in his battle-torn clothes holding her hand in his. But his visible wounds had been dressed. He had a cut on an arm and a scratch on his forehead. Possibly more cuts on his body where his clothes were torn.


Aradhana looked at Govind and tried to ask about Tara. He understood and said, "She is fine. She is just sleeping. She again tried to say something but again Govind understood and said, "You raised our daughter very well.



Here outside the infirmary, Princess Vasu, Prince Aditya, and Princess Meethi were curious about the unknown men. But didn't ask anything seeing the gravity of the situation. The healer walked out of the infirmary and informed them about the situation which relaxed them.


Seeing no one asking anything, the King said, "You all must be wondering about the unknown men. All three nodded. "The old man is Prophet Govind, Tara's father, he said looking at his children.


They were surprised to hear this. Princess Vasu was the first to voice her thoughts, "Where was he all these years?


"I am coming there, said the King taking a deep breath. He looked at the Queen. "The other man in the room is our eldest son, Prince Mrityunjay, he said taking the Queen's hand in his and beaming at her.


All three were stunned hearing this. The King and the Queen looked at them and smiled, "Let's start this from the beginning. Saying this, the King narrated the events from Mrityunjay's birth to how Kalavati kidnapped him, till last night with the death of Kalavati.


When the King stopped again, Princess Vasu was the one to ask, "So he is our brother? The Queen nodded. Princess Vasu hugged her mother and said, "I am so happy to know I have one more brother.



Prince Aditya smiled and said, "We are glad to get him back, Dad.



After a while, all of them walked into the infirmary. Seeing the royal family there, Aradhana stood up from her bed and curtsied. Govind bowed to them. The King walked to Govind and clasping his shoulder, he said, "Thank you, Govind, for saving my son.



"It was my duty, my King, said Govind bowing again.


"You stayed away from your family so that our son could be protected. Thank you, Govind. Thank you once again, said the Queen with tears in her eyes. She then looked at Aradhana and hugged her. "Sorry, for keeping you away from your husband.


Aradhana parted from her and said, "It was our duty, my Queen. The Queen looked at Mrityunjay whose back was towards them.




The royal family walked up to him. The Queen went near Mrityunjay and placed her hand on his shoulder. He looked up and she said, "She will be fine. He nodded.



Then he stood up from his seat and saw tears well up in her eyes. He recognized her as the woman whom he had previously met in the forest. "Mother, he whispered and hugged her.


The Queen immediately embraced her child in a motherly hug. The years of love which she had for him, she poured it into her hug. Tears were flowing from her eyes unrestrained. The pain that she had gone through for years knowing he was alive but being unable to meet him was coming out in the stream of tears. He parted from her and wiped away her tears. She brought his forehead down to her and kissed it.



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Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

The ride back to the Palace was long but they rode at the top of their capacity!!!!


Maria really knows Mrityunjay's state and did her best!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏


Tara was healing slowly it seemed but she was far from being all right!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔


People were lined up along the streets to see them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛


As soon as the news reached them, Nirmala knew what was needed and ordered the infirmary to be made ready!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼


She really is a very capable and efficient queen!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏


Aradhana was confused at Nirmala's words of our children but now was not the time to question her Queen!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕


Everyone was shocked when to Vasu's question Nirmala whispered her son!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲


Mrityunjay carried Tara in his arms and everyone rushed to him as they all care for Tara!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Aradhana saw her daughter unconscious and then saw her long lost husband and all this proved to be too much for her and she fainted!!!


Tara was thankfully out of danger and the healer said she would be up soon!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


When Aradhana woke up, her hugging Govind and shedding a lifetime worth of unshed tears was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭


Govind understood the unsaid words of Aradhana and replied each time and it was really sweet to see they still understand each other so well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗


Vasu and Aditya were happy to know about their brother and have him back!!!!😃 😃 😃 😃


The King and the Queen thanking Govind and Nirmala apologizing to Aradhana was very nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Mrityunjay recognized Nirmala and she hugged him with her years of love and that was so beautiful and moving!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗


The chapter was heartening!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏






Edited by Shaina_b - 5 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Very nice!!!!

Will comment soon!!!!





replyig as soon as u comment😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

This part had only 2 characters😆

Tara told MJ about her mom wanting to meet him

MJ told her about his family

Tara thinking she no longer suitable for MJ as he is Royal😭

It was weird to hear calling him Prince😲

But MJ assured her that he will only marry her😃

Loved their promise to each other in the end😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
for trust me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mj was lying an thinking of future when tara arrived 😳

mj teases tara for children, she blushed😆

the kiss 😳...but tara asked impt question 😆

jairaj is still on search of tara

tara practised more for better 👏👏

guruji wake up tara and the same tara wished that one day her father do the same👏👏

guruji told her about her father and she questioned if he knew her father👏👏

guruji didnt tell her that he is himself her father

they went through plan and drink the potion👏

tara is curious to know about his father but guruji somehow managed👏

she ran to mj told him abot his father👏👏

here jairaj still on serach of tara had everyone in palace doing prayer👏👏👏

nice chapter👏


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Posted: 6 years ago
Amazing !!!!!!!

Finally caught up with all the chapters !!!!!

👏
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Thanks 😳

This part had only 2 characters😆
It was easy for me to write just two of them😉

Tara told MJ about her mom wanting to meet him
If song was possible in this universe it would be -
"Sayad meri shaadi ka khayal dil mein aaya hai
issi liye mummy ne meri tumhe chaye pe bulaya hai"

MJ told her about his family
Yeah 😃

Tara thinking she no longer suitable for MJ as he is Royal😭
She is not wrong in running her mind tooo much When you love someone the fear of lossing them is much greater😊

It was weird to hear calling him Prince😲
Yeah, it was😊 It's weird for me to write him as Prince MJ😆

But MJ assured her that he will only marry her😃
Yes!😃

Loved their promise to each other in the end😃
That promise will bind them on many levels😃




Thanks for reading and commenting 😃

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