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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#491

Awesome Part Dear😊👏

MJ saved Adi😃

Adi came to know about MJ and Tara😃

What is forbidding MJ to leave the forest?

The family and people happy on Adi returning😃

Loved Meethi and Adi scene😃

Finally Aradhana knows about MJ😊

Hope MJ is able to leave the forest soon😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear😊👏
Thank you 😃

MJ saved Adi😃
He did 😃

Adi came to know about MJ and Tara😃
Yeah 😉

What is forbidding MJ to leave the forest?
Kala cursed him, forbidding his entry in city

The family and people happy on Adi returning😃
Yes, they love him😊

Loved Meethi and Adi scene😃
Thanks 😳

Finally Aradhana knows about MJ😊
Yes, she knows😊

Hope MJ is able to leave the forest soon😊
He will 😊

Thanks for reading and commenting 😃😃

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#493

Previous update on Page 63

The Savior

Tara felt drained. Her eyes were closing but they suddenly opened wide when she saw the disc-like structure where Kalavati had been cracking open a bit. The Vault was opening.

She was fixed on her spot in horror. A black fluid like thing could be seen sipping through the crack on the disc. Her worst fear was becoming a reality. She didn't know what was on the other side of the Vault. A creature, or an army of creatures more powerful and evil than Kalavati? A darkness which could engulf their world? She didn't know how she or any of the men standing with her could fight with them or even knew how to.

It was then that she recalled the spell of energy circle. Tara instantly stood in the stance for it, folding her hands near her chest. She closed her eyes and in a wink moved her right foot in a circle. Everything was moving slowly now. She opened her eyes and stretched her hands, such that the wrists of both were touching each other. At first, nothing happened. Not a single circle appeared on her palms. She panicked. Then she put some more of her power in it and a small orange circle with a pentagram glowed in front of her. She threw it on the Vault causing the crack to make an angry hiss. The fluid seemed to stop for a moment. Tara rejoiced seeing the spell working and conjured another energy circle.

This time she formed a bigger and stronger circle.

She was creating energy circles quickly and each circle was stronger than the previous one. She had covered the Vault with her energy circles. The fluid had now stopped flowing out. The crack was getting closed now.

A smile crept across her face. She just needed a strong energy circle to completely fill the crack that will combine all the other lingering circles to get them to form a layer and cover the Vault forming a seal. She tilted her head up to see the end of total eclipse was near as the moon began to get lighter.

She was feeling dizzy. The text from the book was correct. The spell was draining her power. She summoned the last of her power and started chanting the spell. This time she formed a blue circle. It was like the colour of flame that glows in the core of pure flame. She threw the circle on the Vault.

As soon as the circle touched the Vault, the crack was completely closed and the black fluid was sucked back into the Vault. It was expected by Tara that the crack would fill, what she had not expected was that she would fall. Her world was spinning, she felt every last bit of energy being sucked out of her. Her nose was bleeding. But she was not ready to lose her sight. She watched the energy circles one by one being absorbed in the blue circle that she had cast last.

Tara was lying on the ground, still breathing but her eyes were almost closed. She turned on her side and saw the blue circle being absorbed in the Vault forming a blue glow around it. She looked at the moon which was starting to regain its paler complexion as it slowly came out of the shadow. She was relieved to see the Vault sealed. She turned to see Mrityunjay and found him and others looking at the glowing blue circle.

The golems had crumbled to the ground as soon as Kalavati's ashes had floated in the air, relieving all the knights, Guruji, and the King and leaving them stunned. They were amazed to see the Vault glowing blue. Mrityunjay knew it must have been his Tara's work. He turned towards her with a smile. He was confused seeing her lying on the ground. A lock of hair had slipped out of her ponytail. Then he noticed her bleeding nose. She found his concerned gaze on her and tried to give him a reassuring smile. But before she could smile back at him, her eyes closed. Mrityunjay ran to her and held her in his arms.

"Tara...Tara...open your eyes. See...the Witch is gone. Please, Tara, open your eyes," he pleaded.

She was pale, all colour from her body drained. Her once soft red lips were pale. The bleeding from her nose had stopped but her face was covered with her own blood. She heard his voice but was unable to respond to him. She was falling in a dark abyss. His voice was now sounding more like a distant echo to her. Her breathing was slowing down. "Tara!!! he screamed. After that, she didn't hear his voice. There was complete silence. An ear-piercing silence.

Tara saw herself near a crib in which a baby was sleeping. She was standing near it when a hand snaked around her waist. She turned to see Mrityunjay smiling at her. Suddenly she heard his frantic voice calling her.

She blinked open her eyes and smiled at him. She touched his face with her fingertips and opened her mouth to say something. He smiled with teary eyes at her. But before she could say anything, she again lost her consciousness and went limp in his arms.

"Tara...Tara!!!" he panicked.

Govind came to her, checked her pulse and said, "She is exhausted with the event. She used the energy circle spell which only an experienced practitioner is able to perform and still they get exhausted. She needs to rest. After rest, she will be fine. Remember she will heal herself."

Mrityunjay nodded and scooped Tara up in his arms. Before he could place her on Maria to ride to the cottage, someone from behind him held him by his shoulder. He turned to see who it was. He found the same man who was fighting beside him earlier.

The man who was standing in front of him was nearly the same age as Guruji and was dressed in fine clothes. The man was beaming at him. "Where are you taking her?" the man asked.

Mrityunjay ignored him and turned back to place Tara on Maria. "I am taking her to the cottage," Mrityunjay replied placing her on Maria.

"Let's take her to the Palace where she will be treated properly," he said turning Mrityunjay to face him.

"And who are you to say that? Mrityunjay asked," irritated by this unknown man's delay in aid to Tara.

"Mrityunjay, I...I am your father," he said. Jayraj took a step towards Mrityunjay and hugged him.

Mrityunjay stood there frozen for a moment. But when the words made sense to his ears, he hugged him back. No words were exchanged between them. Tears were pouring from Jayraj's eyes. Mrityunjay's eyes were also welled up with tears but he was torn between his father and his love. He parted himself from Jayraj.

Jayraj understood and said, "We need to take her to the Palace."

Mrityunjay nodded and mounted himself on Maria. He tied Tara's limp body across his body, resting her head on his chest. He kissed on her temple and whispered, "You will be alright love." All the knights, the King and Govind also mounted their horses. They took the shortest path to the city.

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Thanks for reading 😃

I hope the images helped in visualizing 😳

Happy New Year in advance 😃

I hope to finish this before this fic hits it's 4th year😆

Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃

Leave your comments 😉

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#494

The Vault was opening and Tara was horrified!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

And rightly too as she didn't know what was on the other side of it!!!!

Even after so much effort they failed in stopping Kalavati from opening it even though they killed her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Time is of essence and Tara had to think of something to prevent this!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

She used the spell of energy circle to close and seal the Vault!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But as was warned, it drained all her power and used every bit of energy left in her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Tara looked at Mrityunjay and he at her but she was in a bad condition and fainted!!!!

Mrityunjay was so scared and was holding her in his arms!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

What Tara sees when she was unconscious, was that a dream or a vision??😛 😛 😛 😛

She opened her eyes for a minute and touched his face but then again lost consciousness!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Guruji said she would be fine after rest and thus Mrityunjay was going to take her back to the cottage!!!!

But Jayraj stopped him and told him to take her to the Palace where she would be treated properly!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

The moment when Jayraj told Mrityunjay he is his father and both hugged was beautiful and very emotional!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I loved it how Jayraj understood the unspoken words of Mrityunjay that taking Tara to the Palace was more important right now!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Mrityunjay assuring an unconscious Tara before the ride back was sooo sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The chapter was breathtaking!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 5 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#495

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Tara told her mom that she loves MJ😊

Aradhana is confused just like other moms😕

Queen is happy to know that Tara loves MJ😃

Tara given the Pearl by the King😃

Adi teased Tara about MJ and she blushed😳

What's about the pearl that Guru told MJ his identity after its glow?😲

Finally MJ knows about his identity😃

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#496

FOR TRUE NORTH

tara wants to set book on fire😆

it actually sound funny ...to bolw on page to read somthing😆😆😆

but tara did and words started arranging...whole scene i can visualize👏

tata was emotional scene where guruji consoles tara and think of past😭

so guruji solved the problem of tara and gave her belonging of kalawati👏👏👏

tara did spell and find about super blue blood moon👏👏👏

guruji helped her to find more about kalawati and tara did same and located her location where she would be to increase her strength👏

tara and mj scene was nice👏👏

so, finally jairaj is going to find tara👏👏👏👏

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#497

Darkness on the Edge

so jairaj still in search of tara !!!!!!!!!

aradhana is worried about tara and vasu consolling her👏

meethi is also worried and shared this with adi👏👏

tara is restless, so she goes upto mj...offcourse he is her sukun...😆😆

mj filled faith in tara👏👏👏

mj noticed that guruji was tensed at dinner...this makes him worried too!!!!!!!!

tara felt that mj is tensed..but mj didnt tell her...both slept tightly hugged😳😳

so finally guruji said about vault..from where kalawati invite other people...

mj is angry as guruji didnt let him know at dinner

tara reading books to find new thing to break kalawati spell...

tara finally found and informed guruji about this...👏

Edited by kumari27 - 6 years ago

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#498

Page23...

mj was tired and tara want to make him comfortable ...so did magic which she learned👏

firs mj was frightened as he didnt find tara..then he saw her at some distance👏👏👏

they went to the lake and revive their meomry👏👏👏

she practise that magic very well👏👏👏

she dont want to leave any unturned stone ..so she asked guruji that why they cant go earliear than kalawati and close the vult

but guruji refused as it takes most of energy of tara...

tara didnt stop and start preparing and finding the spell for vault...

she found page 23...but warning was given and she didnt followed that 👏

she practised but nothing happend😡😡😡

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Very nice!!!

Will comment soon!!!!

I will definitely reply😉

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Thank you😃

Tara told her mom that she loves MJ😊
Yes, she did 😃

Aradhana is confused just like other moms😕
Well, she is mom😊

Queen is happy to know that Tara loves MJ😃
Yes, she was pinning for Tara to be her elder DIL😆

Tara given the Pearl by the King😃
Yes 😃

Adi teased Tara about MJ and she blushed😳
He is taking every opportunity to tease her 😆

What's about the pearl that Guru told MJ his identity after its glow?😲
Guruji figured it out that the time has come for MJ to know who he is 😊

Finally MJ knows about his identity😃
Yes 😃

Thanks for reading and commenting 😃

Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago

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