AdiYa TS- Back In Your Arms Again *Part II Updated on Page 7*

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Auroraborealis

@Auroraborealis

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Thank you so much for such a lovely story. I wished Aditya entered with their apple cheek daughter in his arms in the last episode. CVs could have pulled that much. But thank you for fulfilling my wish please do write more.

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Gayani

@Anu*Gayani*Anu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Firstly, thank you so much 🤗 for coming up with the second part amidst your exams. Hope your exam went well.

Coming back to the update, woww what a lovely update Ankita.. I so wanted to read Zoya being pregnant and Adiya chemistry during Zoya's pregnancy. Thank you for fulfilling that wish as at least i got to read through your story which i'm so glad of right now. I was so hooked to the part where Aditya gets to know that Zoya is pregnant through that letter. Its so touching and unique way of notifying it in which cuteness was overloaded. I loved it to the core. Those words written in the letter were just so wowww.❤️ and also the part where Aditya talks to their baby. Zoya's mood swings/wanting to eat lava cake middle of the night, all these scenes were beautifully written. Thumbs up for the lovely story. 👍🏼

Please do come up with another story or FF as you're a brilliant writer. This is a humble request from your readers and you will alwayz have our support for same. Thank you once again for the lovely story and looking forward to another new story soon.

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Gayani

Edited by Anu*Gayani*Anu - 7 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

arnoor too getting married.sweet.baby note for aditya n adiya scene after that was so sweet.unique too.baby kick.cute.zoya's craving for cake n adi's reaction was funny n cute.kiss was romantic. finally daughter for adiya.misha.wish this happened in the show

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Sunshine_kk

@Sunshine_kk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Beautiful. This should have been the actual ending for Bepannah. Keep up the good work and please keep writing more Adiya stories.

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Krithika ravichandran

@Kiruravi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Thank you for the PM 😊

Just read ur 1st part beautifully written👏. Loved it a lot , the bedroom scene was so heartwarming. Wish something like this happened in the show. Will read the next part also :)

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sezo
I didn't think you would do a second part. Now this seem a compete story for adiya I so thought they were having twins. It was a beautiful update.

Thank you so much dear

I am glad that you liked it😊