|| Melody of Megh Malhar - an OS ||

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi All,
This is my first OS in this forum. Please let me know your thoughts on this. It will really encourage me to write more. 😳

Love
Kshithi


Melody of Megh Malhar



The soft evening light created a golden hue surrounding her with a cozy warmth. The evening breeze pranced around her like a calf seeking his mother. A delicate strain of flute sought her ears. Time stood still along with her. Each note seemed like a question from him. Will she come to him? Will she always seek him out in the crowd? Will she look for him when he is not around? Will she dance to his music forgetting the entire world? Will her soul be his?


She could not contain herself. There was deep need within her soul to answer his call. His soul was embracing hers and she had to go to him. There is no other path. There is no other destination. He was her mate who walked with her and he was her destination too. He was both her journey and her destiny.


She ran to him.


Her anklets trembled creating a beat every time she took a step. Each beat was an answer. It was the same every time. Yes', the answer to every question.


He was standing in the middle of the meadow. The Yamuna's waves touched the shore in tandem with the rhythm of his melody. She reached him finally. As she stood in front of him, he looked at her with a smile gracing his face and that ever present mischievous twinkle in his eyes. Answering smile from her was all they needed. There were no words spoken.


For a moment the only sound was from the waves of Yamuna, the rustling of leaves from the trees, and the call of the birds. Then he picked up his flute again.


A new melody enchanted earth that evening. The earth called out to her love and the sky answered. Earth held her arms open and the sky embraced her with his showers. The rain drenched everyone. Each touch of a droplet bought the fulfillment of an eternal love.


In the end she danced to his music. She danced with abandon. She danced with love. She danced with joy. She danced with the rain. She danced with the wind.


She was the beat to his music.

She was the answer to all his questions.

She was the prayer and a boon to his prayer.

She was eternal and he was the time itself.

She was his and he was hers.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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W.O.W

I'm gonna need a minute, kay? :O

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First of all, it was a wonderful setting, then, it was amazing how you built up the moment...from Radha approaching cautiously, her love also building up up until she finally breaks into her dance of eternity! It was truly and totally wonderful!
Edited by Radhikerani - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Soul touching and beautiful
Mesmerising work!
Keep it up!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very absorbing, extremely well-written story of ethereal love and passionate bonding and beyond..., loved the interaction between Radha and Krishna through the melody of the flute , through the dancing glee of Radha-- loved the flow of your narrative, easy and fluid, keep it up, waiting for more!👍🏼
Kshithi🤗 , loved the narration of the background nature's beautiful accompaniment, how you have interwoven the showers of nature with the quivers of the eternal love !! Raag Megh Malhar is a pleasantly sweet melody, just like your way of writing!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

W.O.W

I'm gonna need a minute, kay? :O

-edit-

First of all, it was a wonderful setting, then, it was amazing how you built up the moment...from Radha approaching cautiously, her love also building up up until she finally breaks into her dance of eternity! It was truly and totally wonderful!


Thanks a lot Pro...😳

I an glad you enjoyed it.

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

Soul touching and beautiful

Mesmerising work!
Keep it up!😃


Thanks a lot Mishti...😊

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Very absorbing, extremely well-written story of ethereal love and passionate bonding and beyond..., loved the interaction between Radha and Krishna through the melody of the flute , through the dancing glee of Radha-- loved the flow of your narrative, easy and fluid, keep it up, waiting for more!👍🏼

Kshithi🤗 , loved the narration of the background nature's beautiful accompaniment, how you have interwoven the showers of nature with the quivers of the eternal love !! Raag Megh Malhar is a pleasantly sweet melody, just like your way of writing!😊


Thanks a lot Madhuri. 😳

I am glad you recognized the relation between the title and the story. 😊🤗
I just wish to see something like that on screen.

This is one of my favorite Ragas.

Love
Kshithi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wooowww is an understatement ❤️ 👏

Perfection! ❤️

You have an amazing sense of words , Kshithi ❤️ , your words floated into my mind creating amazing visuals of this stunning piece ❤️ 👏 .

I loved this line- She was eternal and he was time itself ❤️ .

Hope to see this description in the show soon 😃 , this story gave me vibes of the very first promo when she was sitting on the banks of Yamuna 😃 👏.

Read with a broad grin on my face yesterday 😃 , review mai late ho gayi 😆 Nevermind ❤️ 😆.

RadhaKrishna! RadhaKrishna 🤗.
Edited by RadhaKrishna_19 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: RadhaKrishna_19

Wooowww is an understatement ❤️ 👏


Perfection! ❤️

You have an amazing sense of words , Kshithi ❤️ , your words floated into my mind creating amazing visuals of this stunning piece ❤️ 👏 .

I loved this line- She was eternal and he was time itself ❤️ .

Hope to see this description in the show soon 😃 , this story gave me vibes of the very first promo when she was sitting on the banks of Yamuna 😃 👏.

Read with a broad grin on my face yesterday 😃 , review mai late ho gayi 😆 Nevermind ❤️ 😆.

RadhaKrishna! RadhaKrishna 🤗.


Thanks a lot Sumi...😃🤗

Love
Kshithi

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