SamAina Drabble Series~ (11th Drabble Added on Pg.36) - Page 15

Originally posted by: JaySee

I am sorry if my comment made u feel bad. Your story reminded me of my own situation. I got pregnant 5 times and lost 4 of them in my womb itself. I am very much thankful to God for giving me a healthy child but sometimes I can't control my grief of lost babies.

Originally posted by: Khushi_love

Lovely one, Ross 👍🏼...all your drabbles have been good, but this one is particularly good.

You brought out Sameer's fear because of Nanu's death so beautifully...the thought of losing your dear ones is indeed so so scary ...

Indeed, Sameer may have lost his child, but not his hope ...

Originally posted by: Ross11

Thank you so much, matlab you read all my drabbles, right? 😳

Yeah, I wanted to try emotional one this time and glad to know you found it 'particularly good'. 😉

Originally posted by: MinervaMcG

So different from your usual style. Loved it.

Originally posted by: ratnarao12

😭

Awesome

Completely different from ur forte ( humour , sarcasm and bachpana )

Loved it ...

Especially how u related nanu's death scene and this ❤️

Waise drabble ka word limit nhi hota

Thoda jyada likho na pl

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Khushi_love

O yes...I've been reading most of the drabbles here n a few OSs since a while now during my silent phase 😉

"tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho" Sameer was surprised to see Naina as soon as he opened the door.

"main tumse milne aayi hun, college mein toh tumne JBR se complaint kardi thi par ab kya karoge? " Naina said making her way into his house.

"isko kaise pata chala ghar pe koi nahi hai, kya ghar pe nazar rakhe huye thi?" Sameer murmured and pointing a finger at her " dekho Naina mama mami dekh lenge tum chali jao aur mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni abhi, jab mood hoga tab dekhenge"

"main ne pehle hi confirm kar liya tha ki tum bilkul akele ho toh ab seedhe seedhe baat karo mujhse aur agar baat nahi karni toh..." she paused and looked into his eyes then suddenly hugged him. Sameer was taken aback,neither he moved a bit nor he showed any interest. Naina tightened her grip and looking into his eyes "ab toh baat karoge na." she said resting her head on his chest.

Sameer held her shoulders and by maintaining distance he said " jaise Kartik ne tumhe sab ke saamne gale lagaya tha kya woh haq tum mujhe dogi?"

Naina fumbled " Sameer...woh toh...usne jaan bujhke kiya tha aur woh play ka part bhi nahi tha"

"phir bhi, kya tum sab ke saamne mujhe gale lagaaogi?"

Naina was about to say something then suddenly mami arrived and she was shocked to see Kammo there. She asked many questions without giving time to reply and finally said " kya Sameer beta, tum bhi kisi bhi aire ghaire ko ghar pe aane dete ho aur baat karne lagte ho!"

Sameer couldn't bear this jibe and shouted " Mami, yeh koi airi ghairi nahi hai...yeh toh bahot khaas hai" he held her hand and went outside leaving behind stunned mami.

Outside Sameer told Naina "mami ke saamne maine aise hi bol diya ghusse mein par meri baat pe ghaur karogi toh hi baat karunga"

Naina took autorickshaw and left. Standing there he remembered recent hug of just few moments ago with wide smile pasted on his face. Ironically he again got flashback of Kartik's hug and his smile faded.

"chalo iska ghussa kuchh toh kam hua hai aur baar baar gale lagaungi toh poora thanda ho jaayega" Naina thought while watching him in rear view mirror.