SamAina Drabble Series~ (11th Drabble Added on Pg.36) - Page 14

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Posted: 6 years ago
Sameer's state of mind was so heart breaking to read but also it made me happy that he was strong enough to bear the loss and be grateful to what he had...nothing can bring a real sense of security into the mind except true love.
That was something different written that turned out great! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
You have written it very beautifully. Feeling really bad for Samaina. Losing child in womb is painful especially after completing its term is completely heartbreaking. I am happy that Naina is safe and secure but the lose of child will haunt life long.
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Posted: 6 years ago
This time an emotional one from you, Ross
Trust me it was fantastic
Sameer's state of mind was weakening but he stood strong this time
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

I am glad Ross this time u took a different topic apart from humour which is your forte... I think this one was best so far ... well we know Sameer will always choose naina no matter what happens , its lucky for a girl to have a strong willed and loving man like him in her life ... Do write more such pieces

Thank you so much Suman, it means a lot.
Actually I wanted to explore all emotions, waise bhi I don't like repeating myself so it was heartwarming to see it is considered best from your perspective. This was unexpected.😆
Bhankasgiri is easy but emotional pieces are so tough to write, I confess. 😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: chaaru26

This is beautiful. It's completely different from your other works.. It was emotional. This guy loves his Naina a lot..

Wonderfully written... You write so well, I always like your humour but this was really good...

and I got Sameer kissing Naina this time... 😳

Hey Chaaru, thank you so much.
Yeah it was different. I thought to try something different and glad you liked it too.

Aur bass aise hi kiss pe khushh kya? 😆...kafi chhoti si aasha thi. 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Sameer's state of mind was so heart breaking to read but also it made me happy that he was strong enough to bear the loss and be grateful to what he had...nothing can bring a real sense of security into the mind except true love.

That was something different written that turned out great! 😃

I wanted to hear it was 'heartbreaking to read' otherwise I would have concluded it as failed attempt. 😳
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate your kind gesture to comment without fail.😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: JaySee

You have written it very beautifully. Feeling really bad for Samaina. Losing child in womb is painful especially after completing its term is completely heartbreaking. I am happy that Naina is safe and secure but the lose of child will haunt life long.

Thank you Seema for your kind words. This time I tried something different and your comment shows it turned out be what I wanted to. Samaina together will come out of any phase victoriously, we know that right? 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

This time an emotional one from you, Ross

Trust me it was fantastic
Sameer's state of mind was weakening but he stood strong this time

Thank you Anjali, I am satisfied you could connect to it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely one, Ross 👍🏼...all your drabbles have been good, but this one is particularly good.
You brought out Sameer's fear because of Nanu's death so beautifully...the thought of losing your dear ones is indeed so so scary ...

Indeed, Sameer may have lost his child, but not his hope ...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ross11


Thank you Seema for your kind words. This time I tried something different and your comment shows it turned out be what I wanted to. Samaina together will come out of any phase victoriously, we know that right?😛



I am sorry if my comment made u feel bad. Your story reminded me of my own situation. I got pregnant 5 times and lost 4 of them in my womb itself. I am very much thankful to God for giving me a healthy child but sometimes I can't control my grief of lost babies.

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