SamAina Drabble Series~ (11th Drabble Added on Pg.36)

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Ross11

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Posted: 6 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: chaaru26
How do you write such cute drabbles...
Was Sameer trying to emotionally blackmail her or was he cribbing like a small boy.. 😆
He seemed literally pissed off with Chachaji's 'had' that came in way of his 'haq' on Naina...

Thanks chaaru for your appreciation,glad you liked it.

I guess both.😆 though he started with former ended up being latter😆😳

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Ross11

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Posted: 6 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Kissa Hadd ka!

Bechara humara Sameer... kiss mila bhi Aur samjha bhi nahi! 😆

Thanks May!

Milega milega kabhi toh milega,😆 waise wala kiss bhi milega😉😆

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Ross11

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Posted: 6 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Priya2910
It is such a sweet OS. Brought a smile on my face.
Sulking Sameer and a quick thinking Naina. Lovely.

Thank you Priya for your kind words,glad you liked it.

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Ross11

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Posted: 6 years ago

#114

Ladki Beautiful Kar Gayi Chull

"Kya hua Naina, abhi toh humne baat ki thi aur good night bhi bol diya tha toh phirse?" asked Sameer as soon as he heard her voice.

"woh main ek baat bolna bhool gayi thi, kal subah garden wale mandir pe aana, tumhen kuchh dena hai aur jaldi aana" said she and put phone on cradle.

" aisa kya dena hoga, shayad dori wapas karne wali hai, yeh Naina bhi na" he sighed.

Before dawn Sameer was ready outside temple when Naina arrived. When he stepped towards temple, she stopped him. " iss taraf" she said pointing towards garden. He was surprised but followed her. Then she stopped behind a tree and told him to close eyes.

" dori dene ke liye aankh band karne ki kya zaroorat hai, pata nahi dori se kya karne wali hai" he thought with closed eyes and she kissed his cheek. Sameer opened eyes with surprise, she still had lips on his cheek.

" itna lamba kiss" he couldn't believe it. He had almost stopped thinking about kiss, he got it when he had least expected it then she broke it and looked into his eyes. He almost got mini heart attack to see her boldness, "kahin main sapna toh nahi dekh raha Naina? please ek chimti kaato"

She pinched his hand, "Ouchh." he shouted.

"Nahi yeh sapna nahi sach hai, jab tum mere liye shirt utaar sakte ho toh main yeh bhi nahi kar sakti". Sameer again astounded.

She continued "aur haan ab aise kisi ke saamne shirt mat utaarna, main nahi chahti mere alawa koi tumhen aise dekhe" by saying this she signed him to follow her towards temple.

Sameer stayed there numb pinching his own hand.

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Chaaru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#115

Gosh Naina is full of surprises...

When Naina called him up and told she has to give him something i first thought it would be a kiss and then tada it was a kiss..

Poor Sameer gets kisses in unexpected situations.. and this time he got a lonnng one...

Someone is getting possessive about his hot body...Only Naina can see him 😉

Everytime Naina kisses him in your drabbles, when is Sameer going to kiss her... I was waiting for the next update and got it today and as usual a cute one. Well written. I can understand Sameer's shock, first she took him to the garden instead of mandir, then kissed him and then told him not to remove his shirt in front of anyone...

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Seema

@JaySee

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Posted: 6 years ago

#116

Cute update Ross.
Naina is really bold and very much possessive too.
If her boy friend is having such a hot body that any girl can drool over then of course she has to be extremely careful. But I liked the way how she made Sameer special. If he can take that embarrassment of removing shirt in front of a bunch of girls then she can also go ahead of her moral values and kiss Sameer.

Pls write more drabbles like this.

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Shreya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#117

Haaye!

That long kiss had so much zeal in it, they both exhibiting only love and care. And also the parallel of that pooja's shaadi track of Sameer fixing her dress dialogue. 😳

Loved Naina's possessiveness...!

Aisa gift Sam ko hamesha mile...after all, you make your Sam lucky enough.😉

Good one.

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Inayat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#118

Firstly sorry for the late reply.. 😭

Secondly thank you for writing the 4th drabble in continuation to the third one on our special request🤗. It was absolutely amazing .⭐️.. Loved it .

And this one was even better. 👏The unexpected soulful and long kiss was just too cute and perfect.😳. And the title couldn't have been more appropriate. Naina beautiful kar gayi chul.😉😆 Loved this one as much as I love other works of yours. Well written. 👏Update the next one soon. .

Ps: happy choti Diwali! ! 😃🥳

Regards

Inayat

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B M RAO

@ratnarao12

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Posted: 6 years ago

#119

Nice one Ross

Simple yet conveyed a lot of things ...

Though he was behind the kiss ,he completely forgot abt it seeing Naina crying ,the childish part of him comes alive when he thinks she wants to return the Dori

As for Naina ,how can she see" her Sameer " losing his challenge

Enjoyed reading it