*My Love Is Back*..mehrya TS (shot 3 updtd 05/12/18 pg 13)

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Hola dearies..
Here is my new TS..hope you'll like it
Plz ignore typos and errors..

*My love is back*...



SHOT 1

Her weakness was well visible from her slow footsteps.with a pale face that has lost its charm since ages. With her sore lips that has forgotten its curve for a smile.Her long hair tied up loosely in a bun.Her round face nd petite figure with no name or sign of any jewellery.still she looked pure, simple and beautiful.she walked keeping her focus lowered , adjusting her dupatta that flung in the air with the swift movement of vehicles that passed by her.she continued her steps securely holding her bag which rested on her left shoulder. The sunset prayer heard from a nearby mosque alarmed her about the time.she tries to speed up her movements.For a moment she looks up to see the sky which is all set to be taken over by the moonlight.Meanwhile her gaze shifts on to a colourfully decorated and lit banquet hall on the other side of the road.At once her amber eyes glittered seeing the beautiful view.she could see a girl beautifully dressed up standing near the entrance as of waiting for someone.The entrance was decorated with orchids and fancy lights.Suddenly her eye catches the name board that stood erect near the arch shaped entrance.letters printed in glittering gold with turquoise background nd peacock theme. It read "Engagement..Nikita and Shaurya". She couldn't move further, her slippers were glued to the ground. She got a lump in her throat as her eyes read the name Shaurya. Many thoughts and memories churned out her mind.she looked at her empty fingers and looked back at that girl. A lone tear escaped from her eyes as the hope and happiness in that girl's eyes,brought a realisation of her ill fate. For once she closed her eyes blinking back her tears,selflessly leaving a prayer for that girl who's going to be engaged.Trying her best to brush aside her thoughts she tries to lift her legs and walk away. But she couldn't ,some invisible force was pulling her back.She took a deep breath and gathers some strength to move forward. Meanwhile a white Jaguar stops in front the hall.The same invisible yet strong force freezes her movement again.she stood there as her mind forced her to stay back and get a view of that girl's fiance.she could point two individuals inside the car.May be they had a conversation inside the vehicle.After a few minutes, the door opens nd a tall guy gets down from the driver's seat and a woman in her 50s ..may be his mother gets down from the passenger seat.She couldn't see his face as his back was facing her. The girl came running to him..her excitement was evident from her never vanishing smile.He stumbled while walking in.may be he is injured she assumed. Still she stood there unknown of the reason. Many times he turned back as of looking for someone. but she missed it as her view was blocked by the heavy traffic on the road.Finally she gave up nd intends to move, the traffic disappears slowly nd she turns her face with least hope.Her breathing halts when she got a glimpse of him.Her heartbeats loses its rhythm. Beneath the glittering lights his face shone like a star in the galaxy.Her eyes scanned him from top to bottom in disbelief.Her throat dried and feet trembled seeing him.she walked on the road with baby steps,unnoticed by him. He got a band aid on his forehead, a weak and serious look on his face. Tears overflowed her cheeks as she saw him standing beside that girl in colour coordinated outfits.Her lips trembled and his name escaped from her a mouth in a mere whisper.she scratched her head,nd gasped umpteen times to pacify her heart that has been beating endlessly.Standing in the middle of the road,she felt as if her whole world collapsed before her. She pulled her hairs out of frustration.The vehicles moved along her either sides.she stood there absent minded. She felt being suffocated as her endless sobs gave her a tough time to respire.she saw him entering the hall struggling with his leg. Numerous thoughts whirled in her mind..she slows lifts her shivering hands to stop him as her words dies in her mouth.Her vocal cords failed to vibrate. Her vision blurs as tears swarmed in her eyes.within a fraction of a second a goods carrier with roaring speed hits her with full force.Shaurya's heart skipped a beat. He felt uneasy,his weak legs stumbled more and he rests his palm on his heart with fear.she lands up on the road covered in a pool of blood. Her bag flung in the air emptying its contents nd a glass bottle hits the glass window of his car with a thunderbolt effect.The broken glass pieces shattered everywhere shocking everyone around there.He gets startled by the sound, his heart aches as if those glass pieces pierced in to his heart.His throat dried up nd sweat was dripping from his forehead.with a weak heart he slowly turns back nd is worried to see a huge crowd on the road. With much efforts with his aching plastered leg he moves nearing the road.with every passing second his heart beat weakens.He slowly nears the crowd excuses a few of them and is shocked to see a girl bathed in a pool of blood lying there motionless. He was panting heavily seeing her body. Her face was covered with blood nd with the dim street lights it was difficult to point out where she got hurt.For a moment he covered his mouth with his palms as of reducing the impact of his never-ending gasps.He tightly shuts his eyes and calms down.Meanwhile the crowd gets busy abusing and manhandling the driver rather than taking the girl to the hospital. If you keep on wasting the time the girl would die soon.. a frustrated Shaurya shouted at them. The girl is dead...said someone from the crowd.Shaurya was equally shocked and surprised.Those words ached his heart more.He stumbled more and went on his knees with much difficulty.He tried to clearly observe her face, but the low light was not letting him do so.He felt a connection with her. He slowly moved his trembling palm near her face with hope, he sensed her breaths. She's alive he shouted in excitement, his eyes shone with tears. While all of them gave him a questionable look. Hey people..why you all are standing still...please get an ambulance service immediately..she's breathing...he said with much concern. This really shook the mind of the ones gathered for the function. They were all surprised to see his attachment to a mere stranger who's lying there fighting for her life. Arey..someone please help na..he pleaded, his words marking anger, pain and frustration.The feelings were unknown to him.Shaurya please calm down..pleaded Nikita.He paid no heed to her words and kept on shouting at them. Few minutes later the ambulance arrived nd the staff carried her in a stretcher.Shaurya followed them with his stumbled legs nd enquired about the hospital before the doors of the ambulance closed before him. The crowd dispersed from there. Shaurya approached his car with much difficulty and got behind the wheels. There were tiny glass particles shattered everywhere inside the vehicle."Shaurya..where are you going..its time for engagement"..asked his mother. Ma..let me go and check in the hospital..I"ll be back soon...he replied. "you can't leave now Shaurya...his mom said earnestly.To which his blood shot eyes responded.His would be fiance and other family members intended to stop him. But before they could make a move he drove away. They were all surprised nd shocked by his behaviour. After a drive of about 15 minutes, he reached the hospital. Approached the reception desk and neared the ICU.His plastered leg reduced the pace of his movements. But nothing could control his anxiety and his urge to know the condition of that girl. He saw a surgeon coming out of the ICU. He thought of asking him(doctor)..but before he could a girl came and stood before him. Doctor how is she?..the girl inquired. See doctor Sonal..I don't know whether this girl will be saved this time...replied the surgeon. Shaurya who was standing few distance back got confused hearing his words. This is the third time this girl is attempting for a suicide...last time also I warned her ...added the surgeon. Shaurya was shocked. Sir please...please save her life...please save my friend..please save my mehak...pleaded sonal. Don't worry ..we are trying our best said the doctor nd left after patting her shoulder. Sonal wiped her tears and neared the ICU. Shaurya who was standing behind her was completely shaken when he heard the name.."Mehak". Thousands of thoughts roamed in his brain.A lone tear escaped from his eyes as he whispers her name. His lungs were heavy...nd his heart ached more hearing her name.Many memories appeared before his eyes .He tried his best to compose himself and slowly nears the ICU..all the while he kept on caressing his heart with his palm.His pupils dilated when he gently peeped in through the glass window. He couldn't see anyone inside. He was much confused then. Breaking his trance the ICU door opens with a bang..the surgeons and nurse heading out with a patient in a stretcher. Whose face is partially visible.He makes an attempt to see her face..and is shocked to see her. "Mehak"..he utters her name. With blood still oozing out from her forehead...he stood their numb as he watched her being taken to the OT. With much difficulty he tries to respire again.His soul shattered into million pieces seeing her motionless.He crazily whispers her name umpteen times as tears overflowed his eyes.He leans on the nearby wall for support as he couldn't stand on his foot anymore. He slowly nears a bench and get seated there.All the while he kept on chanting silent prayers for her recovery.An hour passed he was still waiting impatiently there. Still there was no news about her condition.Meanwhile someone keeps a hand on his shoulder. He looks up and is surprised to see his mother along with Nikita. "Howz that girl?..karuna asked him. He didn't replied.Karuna judged his uneasiness. "see Shaurya..don't worry..we've postponed engagement..as a bad omen happened...said Nikita while keeping her palm on his shoulder. He shoved her away and moved his shoulders in reflex. "she is lying there and fighting for her life and that's a bad omen for you"...he shouted at Nikita throwing out his anger and frustration. Nikita stepped back in fear. "Why are you throwing your anger at Nikita for a stranger shaurie...asked karuna who was irked by his behaviour."she us not a stranger..she is Mehak..my Mehek...he said in his loud voice..as tears dripped from his blood shot eyes. Karuna stood there shocked. "you said right ma..see she came...said Shaurya composing himself. Karuna tried to control herself and patted his shoulder in assurance. Nikita stood there all the while confused with their convo. Karuna asked Nikita to excuse them and she left them with an unhappy face."ok Shaurie..see she came na...as I told you...she"ll recover soon..now shall we go home"..karuna said in her pleading tone. "No maa...I won't move from here unless she gains consciousness..he replied."see Shaurya..her family will be here soon..and it'd look awkward if you are here..she said in a defending tone. He completely ignored her words nd sat there patiently waiting for any news about Mehak. "yo can go home maa..he said. Karuna nods her head and turns to leave. Meanwhile a nurse falls before him accidentally. Shaurya tries to help her and slowly bends to collect the documents that has been shattered on the floor. His eyes caught the consent letter for Mehak's operation. He takes it and is confused to find Sonal's signature over there.He scans the whole form and is shocked to read something. His blood boiled and he tries to get up holding the form. His mind hindered the entry of his thoughts. The only thing prevailed in his mind was anger. "Maa"...he shouted his lung out,..his anger echoed in every wall of the building. Karuna who walked away few steps was startled by her son's voice. She sensed that something was not right. With much fear she slowly turns back..only to find her son standing there with his blood shot eyes in his full anger mode.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awe sorry dear for late 😛
Res😛


Yeh mehrya kaise alag ho gaye😭
Our Karuna kyon Nikita se engagement karwarahi hi
Ab uss form me aysa Kya Dekh liya shourya ne😕
Kahi voh engagement ke liye ready tho nahi hoga na shinu
Kyon itni tragedy bhari story likhi Ho shinu
But I want happy ending Samjhi shining baby😛
Thanks for the TS
Update soon🤗
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I'm intrigued. I don't know why but I feel it is something to do with Karuna as in she would have created some misunderstandings. I'm waiting to read what Shaurya found in the reports. Also, you wrote beautifully. Everything was so easy to imagine. Amazing job done. 👍🏼 Wishing to read the next part soon. I hope that'll be up soon. All the best and Thanks for this story. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shine,tune mujhe rulane ka credit le rakha hai naa???
Itni pain wali story😭
But khabardar agar tune happy ending nhi di toh😛
Tune mujhe miss kia...i know Maine bhi tujhe miss kia bahut saaara.
TS is amazing ...update soon wd happiest ending🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Awe sorry dear for late😛

Res😛

no worries di...aaraam se padho..when you get time...😊
you have time till my next update😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetChilliGirl

I'm intrigued. I don't know why but I feel it is something to do with Karuna as in she would have created some misunderstandings. I'm waiting to read what Shaurya found in the reports. Also, you wrote beautifully. Everything was so easy to imagine. Amazing job done. 👍🏼 Wishing to read the next part soon. I hope that'll be up soon. All the best and Thanks for this story. 😊

Thanks a lot for this great fb SCG...😊
yep..you've guessed it right...Karuna has a great involvement..
will let you know that in the next update...
hope the upcoming updates will live upto your expectations...😊
will try my best to update soon..but can't assure ..
Thanks for reading..😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Shine,tune mujhe rulane ka credit le rakha hai naa???

Itni pain wali story😭
But khabardar agar tune happy ending nhi di toh😛
Tune mujhe miss kia...i know Maine bhi tujhe miss kia bahut saaara.
TS is amazing ...update soon wd happiest ending🤗

Awww...my moonlight is back...🤗
Arey mishu baby ko rona aaya..glad that the emotion was conveyed to you...😊
life is too hectic after exams Mish..pata nahi kyun?😕😭.
..will try to update soon.
Missed you too a lot dear...😊
so you are back to hostel?...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wooow shinu another story 😛
Congratulations dear 👏
Why shaurya is injured and getting engaged to nikki😲
Why mehek in this devastated state and further encounters accident .. Is shaurya suffering from memory loss. . It seems like or they ate already married as he has seen the concent form which agitate him more ...so emotional heartwrenchimg but still maintains the suspence of their actions.. Please continue soon please . .Thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's superb..
U perfectly portrayed their emotions..
I could feel their pain.
The selfless mehek was trying to not to be jealous thinking about the engagement of shaurya..
Shaurya has recovered from an accident recently it seems..
I guess karuna is a big manipulator..
Was mehek engaged to shaurya before kya??
Thanks for this update..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AD04

Wooow shinu another story 😛

Congratulations dear 👏
Why shaurya is injured and getting engaged to nikki😲
Why mehek in this devastated state and further encounters accident .. Is shaurya suffering from memory loss. . It seems like or they ate already married as he has seen the concent form which agitate him more ...so emotional heartwrenchimg but still maintains the suspence of their actions.. Please continue soon please . .Thanks for the pm😛

Thanks a lot for your appreciation Aarti di...🤗
hopefully you'll get all the answers for your queries in the next shot...
shaurya is not suffering from memory loss..
Am not good at keeping the suspense factor...glad that you felt so...😊
will try to continue soon...
as you are habituated to my updates..you can very well imagine when I'll be updating this di...😆🤣
still will try my best..😉


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