AdiYa OS - Aap humari zazoorat hain!

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This is what intense AdiYa does to me. I imagine them in alternate scenarios and pen down my thoughts. Let me know how it is. Any prompts please let me know

One of the conversations I wish I get to see in the show. Two most important people in Zoya's life talking to each other.

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Noor spotter Aditya outside her house angrily kicking some stones. Zoya Appi had just gone ahead with her engagement. It broke her heart seeing two people in love suffering because of plain case of zidd and arrogance.

"Aditya , she tentatively called out. Aditya turned around with moist eyes.

" Aditya , humme aapse baat Karni hai

" Haan , Kaho Noor "

" Aditya , aapki zidd aur Appi ki zidd mein aap dono Haar jayenge. ,' Noor said ruefully as she sat on the bench.

" Batao main Kya Karun Noor ? Mujhe nahn Samajh aa raha. Agle 5 din mein Zoya kisi aur ki ho jayegi, Aditya said voicing his fear. His eyes focused on the lone leaf that had withered and was lying lifeless on the ground.

He picked up the leaf and sat on the bench with Noor.

" Aditya , aapko pata hai Bepanah Mohabbat Appi be ek baar Pehle bhi Kari thi. Zoya Siddiqui ne bagawat Kari thi. Aur Kya hua us bagawat ka? , " Noor said.

" Toh Kya dusri baar woh Mohabbat nahn Karegi. Woh kar chuki hai dusri baar , Magar manana nahn chahti " , Aditya added frustrated crumpling the leaf in his hand.

" Aditya pehle humari puri baat Sunein. Hum jaante hai ki Appi aap se Mohabbat karti hai. Magar Aditya aap jo kar rahein hai na , usse Appi nahn manegi. Aapke pyar par Aditya unko abhi bharosa nahn hai. Magar aapki dosti par unhein apne aap se jyada bharosa hai. Appi ki Bepanah Mohabbat be unhe daga Diya tha aur unki Bepanah dosti ne unhe sambhal liya " , Noor reasoned with Aditya.

" Aditya , hum jaante hain aapki dosti aur bharosa hi unki Issa zidd aur pagalpan ko rok sakta hai. Aditya abhi zaroori hai iss nikah ko hum rokein. " , Noor pleaded to him.

Aditya pondered over every word Noor had said. His confession had cornered Zoya and light a deer stuck in headlight she had taken this decision. Noor was right. He didn't want to coerce Zoya to confess her feelings. He just wanted her to see what she was getting herself in to. This marriage was a mistake and it was paramount that she accepted it.

" Theek hai Noor. Main kal aaunga. Apni Appi ka Khayal rakhna " , saying this Aditya Hooda drove off to his house rethinking what had to be done.

Next morning Aditya went to Zoya's room. Noor had informed him that her abbu and Ammi had gone out to distribute invitation cards.

" Zoya? , he called out to her and saw her sitting on one of the chairs fiddling with her phone

" Kahan the aap? Kal Shaam se aap gayab hain? Humne aapko phone bhi Kare ", she stormed towards him. She had not seen him for 16 hours and the audacity of the man.

" Zoya main ghar gaya tha. Thak gaya tha aur vendors se baat karni thi.

She noticed the dark circles under his eyes. He had beautiful eyes. A strange colour of brown. Warm piercing brown.

" Zoya batao Green Gold ya pink gold ?

" Ji ? , she asked all confused

" Shamiaane ka color Zoya. Jaldi batao vendor ko batana hai , Aditya asked in a dead pan tone not giving anything away.

" Aap sach mein humse yeh baat karna chahte hain , she pointed to the swatches of cloth that he was carrying.

" Zoya , Mujhe jo kuch kehna tha main keh chuka hun. , Adi answered in an even tone.

" Yeh bahut acha hai Aditya. Jab man kiya toh bolo ab nahn kuch kahunga. Magar humari baat abhi Khatam nahn Hui, she thundered holding him by the collar.

" Kaho Kya kehna hai tumhe ? , he said as he freed his collar from her hands.

" Haar maan li na Aditya Hooda! Hume pata tha aap nahn sabit kar payenge ki Hum aapse Mohabbat karte hain. Kahan gaya aapka challenge? Kahan gayi aapki zidd? " , Zoya scoffed

" Aapne dosti ko Mohabbat ka naam de Diya. Kitne aimak insaan hain aap. Dosti aur mohabbat mein bahut farak Hota hai. Aapke hone se ya na hone se humme koi farak nahn padta ", Zoya told him.

Aditya heard her. Zoya was finally communicating with him.

" Zoya , green gold ya pink gold? , he asked her again.

" Aap humari baat kyon nahn sun rahein hain. Humne aapse kaha tha na humare liye Arshad sahi hai. Woh hi humare shohar banegein. " , she told him again.

He nodded his head and picked up the swatches of cloth again.

She snatched the swatches from his hand and threw them on the bed.

" Abhi Hum baat kar rahein hai. Aap sunein , she spoke out loud.

He remained silent not wanting to her to lose her train of thought.

" Toh humne saabit kar hi Diya ki humare beech dosti hai. Aap dost hain humare aur kuch nahn. Aapke hone ya na hone se toh hume farak nahn padta. " , she again spoke all rattled.

Aditya stared at her. Stared at this beautiful woman who was his reason to live. Today she was all broken. This fiery avatar was a facade. Any moment now the facade would drop down.

" Aap kuch keh kyon nahn rahe ? Kahiye hi yeh dosti nahn Bepanah Mohabbat. Kahiye ki Aditya Hooda kabhi galat nahn ho sakte ", she said with tears glistening in her eyes.

Aditya shook his head. Today he was here as her friend , her Azeez dost.

" Kahine na Aditya ? Please kahiye ki humein farak padta hai. Kahiye ki aapne Haar nahn mani ", she sobbed and slumped on the floor.

He sat down on the floor and wrapped his arms around her. He looked up at the heaven. Was there a god ? What had they done to deserve this ?

" Aditya, aap kuch kahiye. Hum aapki khamoshi aur aapki gairmojudgi nahn bardasht kar sakte. Hume sambhal lijiye Aditya , she sobbed in his shirt.

Aditya caressed her back waiting for her sobs to stop. This woman deserved nothing but the best in life yet here she lay crying. How he wanted to see her happy l! She her flourish ! Achieve all that she deserved!

" Aditya ! Kuch kahiye na. Kyon ki aapke kuch na kehne se humein bahut farak padta hai. Aditya humare liye itni jaldi Haar mat maniye. , she pleaded him.

He put some distance between them so she could him l. Read his eyes.

" Zoya, jab baat tumhari hai na toh Haar manana mujhe Manzoor nahn hai. Tumhare liye main zameen aasman ek kar sakta Hun. " , he told her as he tucked her tendril behind her ear.

She stared at him for a few seconds. This was Aditya Hooda. Her Aditya Hooda.

" Vada kijiye ? Humari kasam khaiye? , she told him as she took his hand.

A small smile appeared on his lips.
" Tumhari Kasam Zoya. Haar nahn manuga. Tumhare liye zamane se lad lunga, he said as he gently pinched her neck.

For the first time in many days and countless hours Zoya smiled. Her carefree smile that was reserved for Aditya Hooda.

Aditya Hooda will be there. And in that second Zoya realised he was life. He was way above what love encompassed. Aditya was her sanity ! Her reason to live ! Her reason to fight !

And now she would fight. Never again would Aditya bow down in front of anyone.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wowww!!! Mish, this is such an amazing write up!!! 👏👏 I loved it sooo much... ❤️ You are a fabulous writer mashaAllah... Please continue writing more on AdiYa... Its such a pleasure to read your work... 😊😊
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Wowww!!! Mish, this is such an amazing write up!!!
👏👏I loved it sooo much...❤️You are a fabulous writer mashaAllah... Please continue writing more on AdiYa... Its such a pleasure to read your work...😊😊



Thank you so much ! And trust me love is all mutual.

I love your analysis so much. You have a gift as well. So deconstruct scenes so well !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written...
Noor is right...Zoya needs her friend more than her lover...
loved how she was saying he lost yet asked him to not accept the defeat and fight for her
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my God...what a beautiful OS 👏
Everyone emotion was beautifully portrayed. Adiya's feelings were so easy to feel. I loved this too much ❤️
You are an amazing writer and the way you so easily showed the turmoil Aditya was in and the pain Zoya was feeling in the end was commendable 👏 Please write more stories because I love the way you convey emotions.

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