AdiYa OneShot - 'Jazbaat Humare, Izhaar Tumhara'

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Posted: 7 years ago
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--Jazbaat Humare, Izhaar Tumhara--


The clueless Aditya was dragged firmly, to the shore by Zoya.

After making him sit on the sand, she settled herself beside and looked at him, "Hume aapse ye ummeed thi ki aap humse har baat share karenge lekin aapne sabse khaas baat humse chhupayi hai." .

Aditya was stunned as he found tears unfolding in her eyes , and he chin her up with his finger to meet her eyes, "Zoya , tum ro kyu rahi ho ! Meine... kuch nahi chhupaya..."

Shrugging off his hand, she frowned, "Hatiye, aap aap...ki aankhon mein dekha hai humne , aap hume apna dost nahi maante.. Humne aapko dost maana lekin aapne dosti se zyada wala saath nibhaya hai, aapki care .. sab sab kuch zyada hai ..Hum jo rishta nibha nahi paaye dosti ka,wo aapke saath nibhana chaaha, aur aapse hume usse bhi zyada mila ... dosti ke saath saath kuch aur bhi... Pyaar !"

Aditya faltered, looking away from her while Zoya's eyes shed the welled up tears. "Aapne hume pyaar diya Aditya aur yeh baat dil mein rakh kar jee rahe hai.. Aapne.. kya aap jaante hai hum aapne dost se ishq kar baithe hai ? Yeh sab aapke karan hua hai! Hume aapne pyaar karne par majboor kar diya , aapse !"

Aditya's gaze fixed at her with eyes moist, Zoya pouted ,"Aise kya dekh rahe hai aap? Haan Aditya , hum aapse ishq karne lage hai !", With softness in her action, she held his hand, "Hum aapko itna jaan gaye ki hum samajh gaye ki aap bhi humse mohobbat karte hai!"

Aditya couldn't believe what he was hearing; he stumbled a little as she pulled him up with herself, "Aap kuch bolenge hi nahi na chaahte the hum aapse izhaar kare ,huh? To yeh lijiye , kar dete hai izhaar .. "

Aditya stepped towards her holding her shoulders, "Tum jaanti bhi ho kya bol rahi ho ?".

Zoya smiled excitedly, "Ji haan ! Hum sab jaante hai. Ab aap ekdum chup rahiye.."

She headed a little backwards. Seeing her kneeling on her knee, he interrupted but was indicated to not say a word by her.

With a bright smile and eyes having the deepest emotion, she went ahead to confess, "Itna kuch aapne humare liye aaj tak kiya, har mushkil se bachaya , khud pe aitbaar karna sikhaya hai, to ab hum ek mauka chaahte hai... Ek mauka haq jataane ka, ek mauka aapki aankhon mein aankhein daal kho jaane ka, ek mauka aapke kareeb rehne ka.. ek mauka aapka saath nibhane ka..aakhri saans tak!"

She forwarded her palm to him.. "Kya aap hume aapki zindagi mein bepannaah mohobbat bharne ke liye apne dil mein jagah denge? Kya aapke zindagi ki flight mein hume bhi aapki co pilot banne ka mauka denge jisse hum saath mein life ki udaaan bhare ? Kahiye Janab Aditya Hooda, kya hum aapko qubool hain??"

Aditya, at loss of words, sighed at her innocence and holding her hand, gently knelt infront of her ,"Tumne to mujhe speechless kar diya Miss Galib! Mauka? Is dil pe tumhara haq hai, mujhpar tumhara haq hai Zoya... Rahi baat captaincy ki to vaise to apne profession mein bohot particular hoon lekin tumhe sab allowed hai.. So declare karta hoon- Urdu queen, aapka is Captain ki captaincy ko join karne ke liye swaagat hai! Aur.. qubool hai mujhe, Galib and khuda ki sabse khubsurat shayari yaani Zoya Siddiqui, aap!".

Zoya laughed letting her head fall down and before Aditya could realise, she was crying , covering her face with her palms.

Within few seconds, she was crawling on her knees , towards him with arms opened for him to embrace her.. Aditya pulled her hands, and enveloped her to his chest.

Zoya heaved a sigh in his arms and calmed herself in the warmth he was offering her. Silent tears flowed down his eyes too, letting her words sink in, which were said to him, for him.

Clinging tightly to her, and closing his eyes , he whispered,"Zoya.. shh, tumne mujhe confess karwaya aur khud ro rahi ho?" Comfortably, still hugging side ways, they settled beside each other, "Mein bohot bura hoon jo tumhe pareshaan kiya. I am sorry.. kahin ka kahin tumhe let down karne ke liye.." Zoya slowly came out of his embrace to speak but he kept his finger on her lips, "Mujhe kehne do Zoya.. Mein darr gaya tha, ek..ek ajeeb si feeling thi past ke experience se.. kahin.. kahin tumhe pyaar karne ke badle tumhe kho na du. Dost bankar meine tumhe hurt kiya tha, aur pyaar mein.. Zoya...dard tumhe ho kisi bhi wajah se , mein yeh nahi dekh sakta.." He shook his head to not get emotional until he expressed his heart out to her. He looked at her again.."Aaj tumne express kiya, mein woh nahi kar paata Zoya.. but nahi, aaj se aisa nahi hoga.. iss relation ko bina hesitation ke, 100% nibhaunga.. Koi galti ho ya jhagda, door nahi jaaunga mein.. Zoya, trust me is relation ko nibhane mein, jo kamiyaan hai unhe thik karne mein, tumhari zarurat hai mujhe.. Jis tarah mujhe tumne jeena sikhaya hai, Mera saath nahi chhodna! Aur waada hai mera, humesha tumhara khushi mein, pareshaani mein saath dunga. Tum dekhna Captain Aditya Hooda ka pyaar..."

She wiped his tears, and held his shirt, "Yeh darr hi hume strength dega. Aapki Zoya ko aapka saath humesha chahiye Aditya is safar ko jeene ke liye.. Hum perfect nahi hai lekin ek dusre ke liye zarur hai.. hum milkar humare rishte ko pyaar aur dosti dono se bhar denge. Umm.. Aur aapne galti ki hai confess nahi karne ki lekin humara izhaar accept kar liya, hume accept kiya.. isliye aapki Urdu queen ke taraf se koi punishment nahi hai.." Her deep to the innocent glinted expression made him chuckle and he nodded as she put her hands around his shoulders, "Sab kuch sahi hoga abse..", saying this he inched closer, cupping her face, while she closed her eyes, he softy kissed her forehead, promising his love, his dedication towards her, for a lifetime.

Dipping their legs, sprinkling water on each other, they laughed heartily by the sea shore, living their moment...

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The breeze marked the soothing flow of Aditya and Zoya's feelings, caressing their heart just like breeze does to nature.

The setting of sun beyond the horizon and the colorful sheet of colors that spread over the sky symbolising the slowly sinking of love, faith and togetherness and letting their emotions spread over their life to glow till the night, shine in the dark and again enhance the dawn with their inner light.

Past had torn their life, Present was admant to sew their hearts for Future to beat as one amidst the scars.

-END-


Hello Bepannaah Fandom,

Another lover of AdiYa/JenShad/BP is here. New to this forum as a member though visiting it offline , everyday. 😆

The love for AdiYa pulled me, made me write for them.😳

Thankyou for reading. I hope it was worth a read.😊

-Sakshi. <3

Edited by sakshibshah - 7 years ago

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Auroraborealis thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
This was so heartwarming and beautiful. Zoya's confession was so apt. I am so glad to be in the forum reading such beautiful works by equally talented writers like you. Keep writing dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...I hope the CVS can get inspiration from this...loved every bit of it..
Edited by shivinrocks - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written dear!!
Waiting for real confession by zoya in show...hope CVs also make their confession which will always be unforgettable
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was beautiful
Welcome to the forum!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome to the Forum 🤗

Beautiful OneShot.
Keep Writing More ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
It was such a cute and short OS! 👏
I loved the dialogues and just like someone said above the CVs should definitely take inspiration from this for the confession scene ❤️
The best line of the dialogue was "Kya aapki zindagi ki flight mein hume bhi aapki co pilot banne ka mauka denge jisse hum saath mein life ki udaan bhare"? ❤️
I really wish you continue writing so that we can read more of such OSs and this one really made me smile while reading it! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So bful, short n sweet os. Totally loved it. Please do keep writing more. N welcome to the forum🤗
Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Sakshi, welcome to the forum ⭐️
This was such a beautiful rendition to Aditya & Zoya's story ahead & I had a big smile plastered on my face while reading their confession. So soothing & the best part was how Zoya came in to terms with her feelings & confessed. It was nicely written how Aditya promised to Zoya to take responsibility of their new life ahead & dedicate & work towards it with commitment 😊
Do write more stories on AdiYa & pm me too. I'll be buddying you 😆
Edited by SewwiVB - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome to forum dear, loved this OS, so sweet it was Keep writing more dear :)

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