*Lover Vs Patriot*- Mehrya OS

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Happy Independence day dear ones...
Another crazy compilation on this special day..plz bear with me
A small birthday gift to Shamz di...🤗



*Lover Vs Patriot*
[ A small musical patriotic story featuring mehrya...]



The heavy rains nd cold weather occupied the night's ambience. A soothing ringtone could be feebly heard from a cute cottage.
"Major Shaurya Khanna you need to report our headquarters immediately. We are heading up for our new mission nd I want you to be the head of this operation"..yes sir will be reporting shortly..replied Shaurya nd hung up the call.
He turned to look at his newlywed wife who was busy packing stuffs for their honeymoon. He felt sorry for her. It's been just a week after their marriage nd he could very well imagine her state of mind. He gently approached sneaking his hand around her waist nd rested his chin on her shoulder. A smile crept on her lips. Mehek... mujhe aaj Jana hai(I need to leave today)... he said. Vanishing her smile. Tears overflowed her cheeks. Mehek.. plz don't cry..he said turning her around. She starts sobbing endlessly...plz don't cry jaan... I can't see tears in your eyes...he said while cupping her cheeks with his palms. I'll be back within a month...plz don't be sad haan...be a strong girl ok..he said while gently wiping her hears. You"ll back soon ...promise?...she said while fluttering her tear filled eyelids. Promise...he assured her while gently pecking her forehead nd embraced her. Both found solace in each other's arms.His silent tears also made it's way. After few minutes..he gently withdrew his arms that wrapped around her body. I need to pack my stuffs... he said unable to look into her eyes..nd proceeds to pack his stuff.
She nears him and holds a shirt which he was trying to fold. He looks at her. Their unsaid emotions portrayed in their eyes. They share a moment.

aaj jaane ki zid na karo.(tonight, don't insist on leaving)
yoon hi pehloo mein baithe raho(keep on sitting close to me like you are.)
aaj jaane ki zid na karo

She tightened her hold on the shirt while he pulls it back unwillingly. Mehek...plz I need to go..he says nd turns his face hiding his tears. While tears overflowed her cheeks as she's hurt..
haay mar jaayenge, hum to lut jaayenge.
aisi baatein kiya na karo(oh I will die, I will be lost,don't say such things.)
aaj jaane ki zid na karo.

He was done with his packing nd his fingers searched for the zipper of the bag. She tightly holds his arm..intending to not let him do so. He couldn't resist anymore and he pulls her towards him making her fall on his lap. He gently caresses her face nd rubs her cheek as of comforting her.After a few minutes..he unwillingly intends to get up..but she hugs him tightly resting her head on his chest...

tum hi socho zara, kyun na rokein tumhein(think for a moment, why should I not stop you.)
jaan jaati hai jab uth ke jaate ho tum(my life seems to leave my body when you get up and go,)
tumko apni kasam jaan-e-jaan ,baat itni meri maan lo(I swear to you, my beloved,just agree to this request of mine)
aaj jaane ki zid na karo

She gently lifts her head nd looks at him with tear filled eyes. She gently rubs her cheeks on to his bearded ones. Nuzzling her reddened nose onto his. Her fingers trailing all the way from his forehead to his beard..admiring him. She rubs her thumb in his lips nd leaves a small peck there...Tears swarmed in their eyes.

waqt ki qaid mein zindagi hai magar(life is trapped in the prison of time)
chand ghadiyaan yehi hain jo aazaad hain(but these are the few moments that are free)
inko kho kar mere jaan-e-jaan(by losing them, my beloved)
umr bhar na taraste raho(let's not have a life of regret)
aaj jaane ki zid na karo

She slowly gets up from his lap nd nears the window holding him along. She held his palm and caresses it all around her body. Her eyes asking him to make love to her.Her breaths pleading him to explore her.Her soul pleading for their union...

kitna maasoom rangeen hai ye samaa(what an innocent, colorful weather it is.)
husn aur ishq ki aaj meraaj hai(it is the peak of beauty and love today.)
kal ki kisko khabar jaan-e-jaan(who knows what will happen tomorrow,)
rok lo aaj ki raat ko(let's stop this night, tonight,)
aaj jaane ki zid na karo

They sealed their lips. Fulfilling their burning desire nd passion. Venting out their sorrow nd pain. He gently lifts her up..nd heads towards the bed...and the night witnessed the union of pure love. Tears of satisfaction overflowed her eyes..nd she slept peacefully in his arms. He gets up when she's sound asleep..gently pecking her forehead covering her with a blanket.
He freshens up nd is all to set to leave. He approaches his epitome of beauty..his love... who is sound asleep..nd whispers in her ears...bye my love...take care..will miss you. He gently wipes the the tears dripping from his eyes nd lovingly pecks her forehead before leaving..,

He never returned back since then. He was enrolled in a mission to release his countrymen from the clutches of terrorists who were hiding out in the border.He pretended to be one of the terrorists for a safer operation. The mission went on very well nd all of them were saved.On his return journey he was abducted by the rival army. After months of efforts by the government.. he was finally released. In a completely devastated state..he crossed the borders nd took a long breath..sensing the warmth of his motherland...There was a huge crowd awaiting him near the border,..with warm wishes for him. From tiny tots to men of 90's were there to receive him..sending their prayers. It was a moment of pride ...

Ae Watan, Watan Mere, Aabaad Rahe Tu (O country, O my country, may You always remain populous)
Main Jahaan Rahun, Jahaan Mein Yaad Rahe Tu (Wherever may I be/remain, I want You to be remembered in this world)
Ae Watan, Mere Watan ..

His eyes were filled with tears of joy receiving the love of his beloved countrymen.

Tu Hi Meri Manzil Hai, Pehchaan Tujhi Se (You are my destination, my identity is only because of You)
Pahunchoon Main Jahaan Bhi, Meri Buniyaad Rahe Tu (Wherever may I reach, You are my root (foundation))
Ae Watan, mere watan.

The elderly women held his hands nd showered kisses thanking him for saving their lives.

Tujhpe Koi Gham Ki Aanch Aane Nahin Doon( I won't allow even a shadow of pain to be cast over You )
All sympathized seeing his injuries.His bruises marked the extreme sufferings he has undergone..
Kurbaan Meri Jaan Tujhpe, Shaad Rahe Tu (I am ready to sacrifice my life for You, may You always remain blessed)

Thanking the crowd with a feeble smile he was lead to their vehicle by his fellow soldiers. He was looking endlessly for only one face among the crowd...his Mehek..but she wasn't there. All these months she was the sole reason for him to fight for his life. He badly missed her. He couldn't imagine how she'd be living without him all alone. He cursed himself for not keeping his promise.He was getting impatient to meet her. Meri mehek..he asked worriedly to one of his friends in his weak voice. She's fine..assured his buddy. Without aiding his wounds he asked them to drop him home..as he badly wanted to meet her.

As he stepped out the car..there she was leaning on the corridor..waiting for him with tear filled eyes. Their eyes met..nd it was the beginning of endless showers of tears. His weakness was pulling him back..but he still managed to run towards her. He was intending to swing her...but something stopped him..yes...she was standing there holding something in her arms. A baby...a cute little one in her arms. He was just dumbfounded. After almost an year...he's back to his life...nd there stands his better half holding their symbol of love..of which he was totally unaware. My gift for your return...Shaurya...she said while placing the little one in his arms...

And yes...their life starts yet another phase...mehrya nd their symbol of love...
The lover nd Patriot in him never competing with each other...
He's all set for the next mission ...to fight his life with his loved ones by side..
To fight for his country...with the blessings of his countrymen..



My deepest gratitude to all the ones who are serving our country selflessly...
Edited by dwriter - 7 years ago

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Mishtilove thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yipee...i'm first😃
Shine beautiful story.👏
Love the way you show ur respect n gratitude to the real heroes👏
Aaj sabne mujhe rulane ka soch rkha hai😭
Im getting so emotional reading there separation.
But u made it super happy wd the beautiful ending or say new beginning.
Love u sweetheart.❤️
Keep writing for Mehrya😳


Edited by Mishtilove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I totally loved the way how you gave your tribute for the nation's present and fallen heroes here along making it a birthday gift for our friend . ..it was awesome ...
He left his love to fight for his country saying he wud be back even though he was aware of his chance to return was thinking ... His promise to his love kept him alive...destiny sent him back to his love only to find not just his wife but he had also a child waiting for his return ...lovely written shinu..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a lovely OS Shinu 😛
I loved it and enjoyed it to the full 😛
Lovely tribute to our soldiers Shinu .
Shaurya fullfilled nation and lover responsibility too 😛
And he was welcomed by his lovely wife along with lil bundle of joy . So beautifully written Shinu 😛
U surprise us with your writings ...sometime lovey , sometime full of laughter and some time emotional 😛
Keep it up dear 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank you dear beautiful ff indeed. you wrote this and brighten up my gloomy day
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res

Aaj tho uodates ka barsih hi raha hai. .
It take time to Unres please bare me Shinu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the story🤗..
.its really an emotional one...
Beautifully written👏 and the song synchronisation with the story is perfect..
Loved this story...reading the part mehrya parting from each other i was literally crying😭 ... thats how a life of a soldier
The ending when they met again was beautiful with their bundle of joy
Keep writing dear ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow shinu Kya beautiful update tha
Desh ke jawano ke nam superb likha hi
Unka Dard chod ke oh Desh ke liye kurbaan hone ko tayaar rehthe hi
Finally he came back n she gave him very precious gift their love a cute baby a symbol of their love 👏
Very well written Shinu
Thanks for this beautiful update
Keep writing😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Yipee...i'm first😃

Shine beautiful story.👏
Love the way you show ur respect n gratitude to the real heroes👏
Aaj sabne mujhe rulane ka soch rkha hai😭
Im getting so emotional reading there separation.
But u made it super happy wd the beautiful ending or say new beginning.
Love u sweetheart.❤️
Keep writing for Mehrya😳


Thanks..for this lovely fb moonlight..🤗
I had no intentions to hurt you sweetheart...the situation nd song in the story reflected our pain of loosing mehrya ...an irony isn't it..
Glad that you enjoyed reading..
love you too Mish❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabassum..

I totally loved the way how you gave your tribute for the nation's present and fallen heroes here along making it a birthday gift for our friend . ..it was awesome ...

He left his love to fight for his country saying he wud be back even though he was aware of his chance to return was thinking ... His promise to his love kept him alive...destiny sent him back to his love only to find not just his wife but he had also a child waiting for his return ...lovely written shinu..

Thanks a lot for this valuable fb of yours Thabs di...🤗
glad that you liked it...😊

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