*Lover Vs Patriot*- Mehrya OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: AD04

What a lovely OS Shinu 😛

I loved it and enjoyed it to the full 😛

Lovely tribute to our soldiers Shinu .

Shaurya fullfilled nation and lover responsibility too 😛

And he was welcomed by his lovely wife along with lil bundle of joy . So beautifully written Shinu 😛

U surprise us with your writings ...sometime lovey , sometime full of laughter and some time emotional 😛

Keep it up dear 😛

Originally posted by: Haseena2020

thank you dear beautiful ff indeed. you wrote this and brighten up my gloomy day

Originally posted by: Krishna537

Res

Aaj tho uodates ka barsih hi raha hai. .

It take time to Unres please bare me Shinu

Originally posted by: friendlyghost08

Thanks for the story🤗..

.its really an emotional one...

Beautifully written👏 and the song synchronisation with the story is perfect..

Loved this story...reading the part mehrya parting from each other i was literally crying😭 ... thats how a life of a soldier

The ending when they met again was beautiful with their bundle of joy

Keep writing dear ❤️

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Wow shinu Kya beautiful update tha

Desh ke jawano ke nam superb likha hi

Unka Dard chod ke oh Desh ke liye kurbaan hone ko tayaar rehthe hi

Finally he came back n she gave him very precious gift their love a cute baby a symbol of their love 👏

Very well written Shinu

Thanks for this beautiful update

Keep writing😛

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome

Originally posted by: Krishna537

Res

Aaj tho uodates ka barsih hi raha hai. .

It take time to Unres please bare me Shinu

Kab Unres karogi Kishu??...

Shinu firstly sorry for reading this story so late and thank you for dedicating this to me ...Love you 🤗

Originally posted by: Shamz15

Shinu firstly sorry for reading this story so late and thank you for dedicating this to me ...Love you🤗

This story was so cute...liked the way you have added both the songs ..aaj jaany ki zid na Karo is my favourite😳

Thank you so much for penning this ...😛

Awww...love you too di..🤗
You've read it..that means a lot di.
No need to apologize di..as I know the phase we were all going through when I posted this story..
Hope you liked it di..
Aaj Jane Ki ..is my favourite too.