| AdYa OS : Ya Rabba | (100 epi special)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello
I'm Sahira...😳
I wrote a new OS..It's mainly on that car sequence but a slightly different plot...hope you'll enjoy it...



Ya Rabba


Zoya at her home

"Today I'll tell Adi how much I love him" said Zoya shyly.

"All the best appi.." said an excited Noor.



"Zoya! Why you always hoover so much! What's your problem?! I can't bear it anymore...you call yourself my well wisher then bamm no you are not! Go away from here!" shouted a very angry Adi.

"Aditya plz listen to me at least" pleaded Zoya.

A : "There's nothing to listen...just go away!"



(Zoya runs from Adi's room and out of the house...it was pouring rain outside. Zoya just took her car and drove away)

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja Aai Mere Dil Bata
Tutata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila
Is Pyaar Me Ho Kaise Kaise Imntihan
Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastan
(Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar
Dilbar Pe Ho Na Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar)

Zoya in mind

"Adi what have I done wrong? The only thing I ever wanted was your happiness...


Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka
Na Hai Koi Hal Dilo Ki Mushkil Ka
Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishe
Saanse Saanse Tooti Bandishe
Kahi To Har Lamha Honto Pe Fariyad Hai
Kisi Ki Duniya Chahat Me Barbad Hai

I wanted you to stay with your family..restart your career..You're running away again..from all the problems all the griefs...But this is not a solution..it can't be..you've to face it..when I tried to make you understand it you snapped at me! I don't know what have happened to with you these days you r always so emotional...always on the edge...I was always afraid that I was losing my best friend...and today it finally happened..."



Adi at home

"Damn it...!! What the hell have I done! Why all my best friends turn out like that...no one can understand me properly...I always try to be so much better...but all of them just want to make me the way they want..why can't they accept me for who I am...even Zoya doesn't understand me! I can't live here...! She's to understand my side as well ...I just can't do things like that..."

"Damn it" roared Adi.

"What happened bhai? Why r u so tensed? " asked Arjun.

A: "Nothing...just can't understand what life wants from me! No one can ever accept me for who I am..no one is happy with me!"

Ar: what r u saying bhai?

A: that Zoya...

Ar: oh yeah bhai..I talked with Noor..she said Zoya was upset for so many days and she wanted to tell ypu you something really important...

A: what?

Ar: yes bhai..did she tell u something?

A: no but I was so angry with her that we didn't talk at all...

Ar: bhai I think you did that really bad..Zoya was really upset..and wanted to say something to you.. I think you should call her...and she left all alone...the weather is not good at all...

A: yeah I think I should call her!

(Adi tries to call Zoya...but her phone is not reachable)

A: damn why she is not answering my phone?!

Ar: I just hope she's alright...bhai just now the it was declared that no one should go out of their house as the weather is just going from bad to worst...

A: don't know where this girl is ...always so irresponsible...I'll call Noor...

(Adi rings Noor)

N: yes Adi...?

A: Noor is Zoya at home yet...

N: no appi is not here...I thought she'll stay at the Hooda house tonight as the weather is so bad and I didn't think you'll let her go after she tells you everything..

A: what r u talking about Noor...What was she supposed to tell me..?

N: no Adi it's not my place to say..I just want to know why she didn't tell you..was there a fight between you two?

A: yeah I was angry and I just told her to go away from my life...

N: ADITYA HOODA!! My appi was in such a delicate state of mind and u just said that to her...well she should've been home by now...I don't know anything but if anything happens to my appi I'll not spare you...

A:don't worry Noor I'll find her and she'll be alright...


(Adi runs towards the main door of Hooda house)

Anj: Adi beta where r u going? The weather is not good at all ...don't go outside...

A: it's not time to talk My Zoya is there...I've to find her..

(Adi runs outside..takes his car and goes to find Zoya)



Zoya in her car..

(Ya Allah! I don't think that I could go home...I'm suffocating in here...I just hope someone comes to help me...why can't I open the door! Ya Allah! You're merciful have some mercy on me...plz save me...I couldn't even said Adi about my feelings...)

Zoya was losing her consciousness very quickly...before she fainted her last words were..."I love you Aditya...I'm sorry I couldn't become the person you want and I couldn't become your best friend..but I'll always love you"


Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aankho Ko
Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko
Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishe
Tooti Footi Sab Farmaishe



Adi in car

"Damn it even the roads r blocked now...how will I reach to Zoya...oh she has suffocation problem..how will she cop up...no I can't just seat here..I've to find her"

Saying this Adi got down of the car and started to run in every direction to find Zoya...but he couldn't find her..at last he found her but alas in the car he just saw a limp Zoya...pale...and struggling to breath...

"ZOYA!!!Don't loose hope Zoya..plz...I love you Zoya I love you so much"..


Na Poocho Dard Bando Se
Hansi Kaisi Khushi Kaisi
Musibat Sar Pe Rehati Hai
Kabhi Kaisi Kabhi Kaisi
Ho O O Rabba Rabba Ho O O Ho
Rabba Ho O O Ho O Ho Rabba



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I know it seems incomplete but this is the beauty of this song
Tell me how the OS is!
I'll wait eagerly for your views😳


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tereliyex thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Ahhh! My heart.
Why did you end it there?!!! 😭
Please tell me you plan on continuing, it's beautiful!
HC_Rabia thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#3
It is beautiful😳
Well written
Can u continue the story at some point of time plZ😳
TearDrop50 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Its so beautiful os 😳
I ❤️ it
plz complete it, eagerly wanted to know what happened nxt...
Swarnalatha5 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
aww it is written well sahira
want to read more
Pls contn dr

Winter_Falls thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#6
itz beautiful dear... ❤️
it was so emotional..Loved it... 😳

if possible please cont it dear...
Silver_Shiver thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
Beautiful work Sahira!
Liked it!

eufara_naghm thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
Thank you so much guys for the compliments
But it's the end of this OS😳
FaizaAndalibC thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
It's a Nice OS...😳Thanks for the pm❤️
Keep writing more...🥳
Adiya45 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Beautiful OS
Made me emotional...
Loved it ❤️
Beautifully written
Keep writing more and do pm me sweetie :)

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